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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome Update ...its cutest updates without maaneet till but i attached to your story line ...they are lot of suspense about mira geet's daughter ..Loved the dev and his confidence ..ooops entry of tiger i hope its roaring i mean hot and anger one ..

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: punam2712
CONGRATS
LOVED THE START AND THE LOVE BETWEEN THEM
YOU WRITE WELL
HAVE SENT A BUDDY REQUEST, PLEASE PM

Thanks Punam2712. I' glad you are liking the story and my writing style. I will definitely PM.

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mayyo13
This is an interesting story! I just have one question. Actually more than one. 😛 Why does Pari want Miri to call her Chachi and not Mami? Brij and Geet are siblings, right? And secondly, Geet and Miri don't have a blood relation, do they? Waiting to know more about it all! 😊

And this is exactly why readers have to comment so that they can catch on to our silly mistakes and we can fix them.😉

Thank you mayyo13, it should have been mami not chachi. I have edited and fixed it.

As for Miri and Geet, al I can say is they have a binding tie of a mom and daughter.

Will try to give updates as quickly as possible.

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Susegad

And this is exactly why readers have to comment so that they can catch on to our silly mistakes and we can fix them.😉
Thank you mayyo13, it should have been mami not chachi. I have edited and fixed it.
As for Miri and Geet, al I can say is they have a binding tie of a mom and daughter.
Will try to give updates as quickly as possible.

Ah! A typo! 😛 Don't worry, such things happen.
😊

And please call me Mariam or mayyo but not 'mayyo13'. Sounds really weird! 😆

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: pamil
congrats dear for ff
both parts were amazing.
geet and miri's bonding is too cute😊
what about geet's husband?????

Thanks pamil.

I am so glad you like Geet and Miri's bonding. I wanted to establish the kind of bond each and everyone has before Maan and Geet mmet. Once that happens they will be the focus of the story.

Exactly, what about Geets husband? what do you think?

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Ah! A typo! 😛 Don't worry, such things happen.
😊

And please call me Mariam or mayyo but not 'mayyo13'. Sounds really weird! 😆

WIll do Mariam.

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --Fairy--
Awesome Update ...its cutest updates without maaneet till but i attached to your story line ...they are lot of suspense about mira geet's daughter ..Loved the dev and his confidence ..ooops entry of tiger i hope its roaring i mean hot and anger one ..

Hey Fairy, I'm glad you are liking the story even without Maaneet so far. I am not getting as many responses, perhaps people will enjoy the story more once Maaneet meet. But I had to write the story as it forms in my head and this is exactly the story my brain is churning out.

I love this Dev too. As for the condifence, jiska bhai Maan Singh Khurana ho uska uspe kuch to asar hoga, hai na?

Dekho dekho tiger kaise Dev aur Dadi ki band bajata hai. Khaee hui puri chaat aur ice-cream bahar nikal jayegi.😆

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hey Fairy, I'm glad you are liking the story even without Maaneet so far. I am not getting as many responses, perhaps people will enjoy the story more once Maaneet meet. But I had to write the story as it forms in my head and this is exactly the story my brain is churning out.
I love this Dev too. As for the condifence, jiska bhai Maan Singh Khurana ho uska uspe kuch to asar hoga, hai na?
Dekho dekho tiger kaise Dev aur Dadi ki band bajata hai. Khaee hui puri chaat aur ice-cream bahar nikal jayegi.😆

Hey dont worry your writing style is awesome ..so evryone defiantly appreciate it soon ...ooops i waiting despertaly for maan entry now and yes bade bhai ka kuch toh effect hoga dev par lol

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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awesome update

Loved the bonding between Miri and Dev

and dadi and geet

Think that geet will be the one to help Dev to get on his feet

when will maan meet geet

please update soon and pm me

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: amita5
Awesome update
Loved the bonding between Miri and Dev
and dadi and geet
Think that geet will be the one to help Dev to get on his feet
when will maan meet geet
please update soon and pm me

Thank you for liking the story.

I had to build the bond between the characters before Maan & Geet meet, and I'm glad you could grasp what I was trying to portray.

You are thinking in the right direction, Geet wii help him but that will be their journey together. Dev & Geet share a special bond in this FF and I hope I'll be able to do justice to that bond and their story.

As for Maan & Geet meeting, intezaar ka phal mitha and all that, but not too long a wait. I too can't wait to post that chapter. This is Maan & Geet's story after all.

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago