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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lvd the prologue and CS...

Plz do add me in ur buddy list and PM me when you updt nxt...

Hey by the way are u frm Goa..???

Ur profile name just made me guess...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update ! loved the dialogue... do you want to marry him or adopt him ! awesome ! this geet and her family are full of life. miri seems to be her sister whom geet looks after as her daughter ... is that right ! and dev... what a different one we got here! 9 years old , in wheel chair and quiet confident too ! geet met with some accident , she herself was on wheel chair... look at her now ... zabardast ! waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CiaMaaneet

Lvd the prologue and CS...


Plz do add me in ur buddy list and PM me when you updt nxt...

Hey by the way are u frm Goa..???

Ur profile name just made me guess...!!!

Hey I was just reading two of you FF's and love them. I especially love Dekha EK Khwab.
Thanks for liking my FF. Will surely PM you. I just pressed the Buddy button under you comment. Hope that is what I'm suposed to do. I've no clue how anything works around here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

nice update ! loved the dialogue... do you want to marry him or adopt him ! awesome ! this geet and her family are full of life. miri seems to be her sister whom geet looks after as her daughter ... is that right ! and dev... what a different one we got here! 9 years old , in wheel chair and quiet confident too ! geet met with some accident , she herself was on wheel chair... look at her now ... zabardast ! waiting ...

Thanks yaar kavya . Comments like yours boost my confidence. So please keep commenting.
I had a very lively childhood myself, always bickering with my sister, lots of wonderful friends and a lot of well meaning but nosy neighbors. All these are my inspiration you could say. That is why I have a narrative section at the end of each chapter so as to tell you guys about some of the fun times.
Just a small tidbit for you, nope Miri is not Geet's sister.
Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys, it just struck me that I translate the marathi portion of the FF into english, but does anybody want the hindi dialogues also to be translated into english.
Also, please tell me if I should post smaller chapters. Also, should I stop posting narratives at the end. I am trying to keep them short, but could stop them altogether.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, I've tried something new with this update. I have translated the hindi parts in english too. Also I've skipped the narrative at the end. Tell me if you like it like this.

Chapter 3

Maan Singh Khurana's fine Berluti shoes were wearing a hole in the expensive Persian silk rug Savitri Devi Khurana had bought at an auction barely a month ago after paying an arm and a leg for it. The security team assigned to his Dadi and Dev were being lashed by his tongue unmercifully,

A team that consists of seasoned ex- army men and police officers couldn't look after a 75 year old lady and a kid in a wheel chair?

Desh ki kya khak raksha karenge aap log. (How are you going to serve the nation)

Char ghanto se gayab hai wo dono,(The two of them have been missing for four hours )

If they have been kidnapped they will be long out of Delhi by now. All of you are fired, and if you don't start getting me some leads in the next half hour, I will make sure that each and every one of you is unemployable even as a broom sweeper. Now, get out of my sight and get to work.

Just then the in-house intercom buzzed and the voice of one of the security guards posted at the gates of Khurana Residencey crackled over it.

Sir, Savitri Deviji ki gadi gate ki taraf badh rahi hai. (Sir, Savitri Deviji's, car is approaching the gates.)

Maan leapt for the main doors with ground eating strides and yanked the car door open before it came to a completely halt.

After reassuring himself that Dadi and Dev were both fine he questioned them in a very calm and cold voice,

Kaha te aap teeno. (Where have the three of you been?)

I've been ringing all three cell phone no's for the past four hours without any success. What the hell were you thinking?

Dadi, Dev and Nakul jumped guiltily at Maan's voice ,for it was a, well known fact that the angrier Maan Singh Khurana got the quieter he became.

Maan bte woh hum, Dadi began,

Bhai woh, Dev replied simultaneously,

Chote Sahab, Nakul chimed in meekly.

Inside all three of you, Maan stated, as he helped Dev into the wheel chair and began pushing the wheel chair effortlessly up the ramp built especially for Dev's convinence.

Maan bte humari baat to suniye, (Maan please listen to me) Dadi called out.

Once they were inside the huge main hall, Dadi motioned Nakul to go away, and though he noticed it Maan let it slide for he knew, whatever mischief had been wrought was either Dev's or Dadi's fault.

Maan crossed his hands over his chest and stared down at Dadi who had taken a sit on the sofa.

Ab boliye.(Tell me)

Dadi tried buying some time by pressing her hand to her chest.

Maan bte hume kuch accha nahin lag ' (Maan I'm not feeling too goo..), she trailed of as the look in Maan's eyes which became even colder.

It's fine Dadi we have not done anything wrong and bhai will surely understand if we tell him about Geet Di & Miri , Dev began innocently while Dadi vigorously shook her head at him to quieten him up.

But Maan seized on the two names ,

Geet aur Miri.? Kaun hai woh dono? (Geet and Miri? Who are they?) Maan asked seemingly calm.

Dadi knew there was no hiding the truth any longer and so she narrated the whole days adventure to him. Sometimes with laughter in her voice and sometimes with soft affection, and Dev liberally adding his own enthusiastic comments to Dadi's narration.

Maan was amazed looking at the animated faces of his Dadi and his little brother. He could hardly remember when he had seen such joy in their faces before. It was hard to determine which one of them was the nine year old. It only made him angrier as he thought of the woman called. Geet, who had surely tried to charm his Dadi and his younger brother knowing their relationship to him. Not only had she encouraged irresponsible behavior, but she had also used her young daughter in the process.

Dadi how could you be so irresponsible, what if she had been part of a gang sent to kidnap you. She could have led you to a vehicle parked nearby and you two could have disappeared in the blink of an eye.

Dadi looked at Dev and laughingly retorted,

Haan, Geet hume kidnap karke apni bebo pe bithati aur kehti. Chal Bebo Aaj teri Geet ki izzat ka sawal hai.(Yep Geet would kidnap us an get us on bebo and tell bebo, come on sweetheart, let's run for dear life.)

Dadi and Dev, both were big Sholay fans and were giggling helplessly at the image of Geet as Basanti when Maan suddenly exclaimed,

Enough. Main dopeher se aap dono ki fikra me bhooka pyasa baitha hoon, aur aap dono ko mazak sujh raha hain. (Enough. I've been worried and waiting for you guys, hungry and thirsty and all you two can think of is having fun at my expense.)

Since you both are safe and surely full with all the unhygienic junk food, that Geet woman has fed you I am going back to work to see if I can salvage the deal with the Italian clients that I abandoned half way through a meeting when the security team called me to report you missing.

Dadi and Dev felt well chastised by Maan's comments, especially after knowing that he hadn't eaten anything at all.

Dadi began softly,

Maan bte please aap kuch kha lijiye. Main abhi apke liye kitchen se bhijwati hoon. (Maan please eat something, I'll have the kitchen send it for you.)

Ji nahin Dadi. Aapki uss Geet ne aapko khana khilaya, par pet mera bhar gaya hain,(No Dadi that Geet of yours may have feed you, but it's my stomach that is feeling full) he said and strode away from there leaving the two of them to stew in their own guilt. He was glad that they were safe but he wanted them to reflect on their actions. As for that woman Geet, if he ever came across her he was surely going to wring her neck. He made a mental note to himself to have her investigated after finding out her last name from Dadi.

Maan Singh Khurana entered Khurana Constructions just at the close of working day. Almost all his employees had left the building, but he was sure that Brij would be waiting for him to put the finishing touches on the Italian project which they had won in spite of his absence, and he knew the sole credit of it went to Brij for handling the clients so well.

He entered Brij's cubicle to see Brij watching what seemed to be a small girl's picture dressed up as some kind of winged creature. While he was eating out of a lunch box open in front of him. The aroma coming out of it was heavenly to Maan's hungry senses. Suddenly Brij sensed someone behind him & turned only to find his boss standing there. He was aghast to be caught eating at his desk, and moreover watching Miri's pictures which Geet had just emailed him.

I am extremely sorry sir.

Woh mujhe abhi waqt mila khane ke liye, aur jab meri behen ko (Ijust found time to eat now nad when my sister found out)

that I haven't had lunch, she sent one of my neighbors to drop it off just now, and this is my niece, mere behen ki beti,wo aaj(my sister's daughter today') he stopped abruptly when he realized that he was babbling out of nervousness. He apologized again.

Maan put up his hand to cut Brij's speech short,

It's ok, office hours are over anyway, go ahead and enjoy your lunch. We can discuss the project once you are done. He was about to turn and walk away when his stomach gave a loud growl. Brij looked at him, hesitated for a moment and then quickly picked up one of the two lunch boxes on his desk and handed one over to Maan. Sir, meri behen hamesha zaroorat se zyada khana mere liye pack karti hai,(Sir my sister always packs more than enough food for me)

I mean no offense but if you don't mind you could share it and we could sit and iron out the Italian project details.

Maan was an intensely private man by nature and did not believe in getting overly friendly with his staff. But the heavenly smell of that food was driving him crazy with hunger, and so he abruptly nodded and took the proffered box and opened it to find smaller boxes neatly stacked inside with different curries and some kind of roti and rice.

Sir pura khana maharashtrian hai. (Sir it's a mahrashtian menu today)Woh meethi roti use Gul poli hain. Aur yeh Tomato Saar hain.( (That sweet roti is called Gul Poli, and this is tomato saar)

He was droning on and on but Maan was barely listening as he was completely engrossed in enjoying the food. He had never tasted maharashtrian cuisine before or if he had he could not remember dishes these delicious. The food was absolutely amazing. He finished it off in record time and focused his attention back on Brij who was still talking.

Sir meri behen Annapoorna hai.(Sir my sister is Annapoorna)

FYI: Annapoorna is the Goddess of food and harvest.

Maan nodded and diverted the conversation towards business matters. He and Brij sorted out the details and he was ready to head back home after a few hours. Just as he was about to walk away Maan turned back,

Oh and please thank Annapoorna on my behalf. I'll see you at the charity ball tomorrow. He nodded at Brij and walked away.

Brij was confused for a moment, Yeh Annapoorna kaun hai?(Who is this Annapoorna).

And then it hit him that Maan sir had thought his sister's name was Annapoorna. He laughed at the comedy of errors and was ready to go home to bug Annapoorna and coax her into coming to the ball along with Pari.

At Handa House

Annapoorna ji please please meri baat maan lijiye aur is party me Pari ke saath aajaiye . (Annapoorna please, please listen to what I'm saying , and come along with Pari to the party tomorrow) Brij bugged Geet for the nth time.

Stop calling me that, Bridget, Geet yelled.

Nahi jaana hai mujhe kisi party me, mujhe parties se sakt nafrat hai, main nahin aa sakti and why can't you ask Pari yourself . Mere upar badi dhaus jamate ho?Aur uske samne bilkul bheegi billi. Bridget kahi ka.(I don't want to go to any party, I hate parties and I 'm not coming. And why can't you ask Pari yourself. You're always bossing me around. How come you're such a scraredy cat around her Bridget.)

Geeet he yelled on being called Bridget. She only called him Bridget when she was really irritated with him. He calmed himself down and tried appealing to her with the one thing he knew could perhaps convince her. He of course wanted Pari to come along with Geet but he also wanted Geet to socialize and build her confidence up. She refused to attend any events that were not related to Miri or the neighborhood. For all their bickering and fighting he knew how wonderful a person she was and loved her dearly and hated what the accident that had killed her mother had done to her.

Geet tumhara sapna hai nakisi din to (Geet isn't it you dream to someday ) run a free Physio therapy center for the kids who can't afford it. This will be the best place to start. Maan Singh Khurana is seriously loaded I don't even know myself how many businesses and how many kind of businesses he owns. If you can convince him of your cause you can have the best PT center. I know there's still time before you can handle such responsibility. But it will not hurt you to get on the right side of Maan Singh Khurana. You get the funding, I will design it, we will find the best doctors to work with. But it all starts with you coming there tomorrow. Take the first step

Geet. Main aur Pari donho honge tumhare saath phir kis baat ka darr. (Why be scared Geet, I and Pari we both will be with you.)

Just then Pari entered the Khurana house after receiving an abrupt text message from Brij.

Come home. Geet needs you.

Poor Pari, walked into the house all flustered ,

Geet, Geet kai zhala tula(Geet what wrong with you). Miri thik aahe na (Is Miri alright)

Brij answered her,

Miri thik hai woh so rahi hai?(Miri is fine. She's fast asleep.)

Seeing Brij pari abruptly switched back to hindi.

Kya hua Geet ko? Tum thik to ho na Geet ?Kisi ne tumse kuch kahaa? Kisne? Muzhe batao. Main abhi uska band baja deti hoon. (What happened to Geet? Geet, are you alright? Did anybody say anything to you? Who did? Tell me and I'll go kick his butt right now.)

Geet pointed a finger at Brij,

Usne, ab bajaao band. (He did, and so why don't you go kick his butt)

Pari abruptly calmed down and started pacifying Geet.

Geet tujhe koi galat faimi ho gayi hogi (Geet you must have misunderstood something.)

Geet looked at her sulkily,

Gaddar kahi ki Brij ka naam liya to sara gussa thai thai phoos. (You traitor. You heard Bri's name and all your anger flew right out the window)

Brij who was standing behind Pari looked at Geet pleadingly over Pari's head and nodded towards Pari and mouthed a please and left the two of them together.

After having a long conversation of going back and forth Geet finally agreed to go to the party along with them.

Pari felt tears of joy prick her eyes on hearing Geet's agreement. Her friend was finally taking a chance and stepping out of her shell.

Geet, me tuzhya kade kahi magu (Geet can I ask you for something)

Maag na, tuzhya saathi kahihi(Go ahead, anything for you) Geet replied back.

Pari excitedly pushed back Geet's hair from her forehead and looked at her critically for a moment. Let me dress you up for the party tomorrow. Don't worry I'll get the saree make up and whatever else is needed for you. You will have to trust me and not question me. You are going to be the most beautiful woman there.

Geet smiled sadly at her.

That would be false advertising wouldn't it. Me and beautiful don't exactly go together.

Pari frowned at her.

Gappa bas Geet (Shut up Geet.)

Tu kiti sundar aahes he kontya shabdat samjhau tula (What words should I use Geet.tomake you see how beautiful you are)

On the inside as well as outside and don't let anybody tell you otherwise.

Then she suddenly turned into the starry eyed teenager she became whenever she talked about Brij.

Oh God my first party with Brij, Geet I will die of happiness and excitement tonight itself.

Geet gave her a mocking sneer,

Tar mag please lavkar mar tya nimmitane me party chukvu shakte(Then die quickly please. I can use that as an excuse to miss the party)

Pari hugged Geet and literally screamed in her ears.

Jiyenge to saath me marange to saath me. I love you Geet. (I live for you and I'll die with you. I love you Geet.)

Vedi Pari pun mazhi pari I love you too(Crazy Pari but my pari, I love you too) Geet lovingly stroked her hair.

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Upcoming:

Where's the part tonight?

The most awaited part. Finally they meet.

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't know. Maybe you should post translations for Hindi dialogues for those who don't understand it much but I want you to continue with the narratives. They make the chapter more interesting. The rest is your choice. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayyo13

I don't know. Maybe you should post translations for Hindi dialogues for those who don't understand it much but I want you to continue with the narratives. They make the chapter more interesting. The rest is your choice. 😊

Hey Mayyo I posted the update before I could read your comment. So no narrative this time, however I have translated the hindi parts into english. Hope you like this update.
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad


Hey Mayyo I posted the update before I could read your comment. So no narrative this time, however I have translated the hindi parts into english. Hope you like this update.



No problem! 😊

And I loved the update! The dialogues cracked me up! 😆 Especially the Sholay dialogue and Maan thinking Brij's sister's name is Annapoorna and Pari abruptly changing sides! 😆 😆

Kamaal ki entry thi MSK ki! Loved his attitude! 😳 And why did Pari switch to Hindi after noticing Brij? 😕
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No problem! 😊

And I loved the update! The dialogues cracked me up! 😆 Especially the Sholay dialogue and Maan thinking Brij's sister's name is Annapoorna and Pari abruptly changing sides! 😆 😆

Kamaal ki entry thi MSK ki! Loved his attitude! 😳 And why did Pari switch to Hindi after noticing Brij? 😕

Hey Mariam I'm so glad you like the update.

One of my neighbors in younger days was a Sholay encyclopedia and all through my childhood I'd been listening to him spouting the dialogues thought I had forgotten all about it until it just popped in my head suddenly. That guy was a Goan Christian and his hindi accent was atrocious and the dialogues all the more funnier for it.😆
One of my friends is a atrocious maskafier who hates cooking. She calls me Annapoorna to butter me up and get me cooking when i'm visiting her. can you believe that?

As for Pari switching to Hindi it's bcoz Brij doesn't speak much Marathi himself though he understands it and she is a Brij pleaser.😆




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