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Originally posted by: kiran_rati

simply superb dear

thanx for the pm

cont soon

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

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sorry for late commenting on the update

nice update dear 😊

MAAN misunderstand GEET completely just by listening to few of the words which she was speaking to her bro n frnds.

instead of such harsh behaviour from MAAN still GEET is trying to explained him politely but MAAN in anger had completely taken in a wrong way

loved the way how GEET defend her child from being questioned by MAAN

Wow GEET had given a nice name to MAAN, loved this part a lot :-

To kya tumhare bhai Maan Singh Khurana ko jaante hain.

Dev opened his mouth to tell her that Maan was his brother when she continued,

Tumhare bhai uss Krur Singh Khurana ke jaise to nahin hain na?

Ji mere bhai bahut acche'acche hain mere saath , he mumbled quietly.

Haan zarur aisa hi hoga. Tum aur Dadi jitney pyaare ho tumhare bhai bhi utne hi pyaare honge hain na?Na ki khud ko Delhi Sultanate ke badshah samajhne wale uss Maan Singh Khurana ki tarha. "Maan Singh Khurana" aise keh raha tha jaise purane movies me Ajit kehta tha, "Sara sheher mujhe lion ke naam se jaanta hai".

Villian Singh Khurana kahi ka.

nice tht DEV n DADI decide to hide the fact regarding MSK n wht relation they share but dont want any kind of MU in the near future, dont know wht jawalamukhi will burst out from MSK when he will come to know tht the person with whom DADI n his little bro had adventure after the school function is none other then GEET...

i hope tht this MU does not extend for a prolong period b/w MAANEET n it will solve early...

PRECAP : CONSPIRACY --- 😲

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update

uff ye maan budhhu singh khurana

just wondering jab maan ko dadi dev geet n miri ki bonding ka pata chalega tab kya hoga!!!!

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Superb story. Amazing concept.
Shall i assume that Miri is Rano's daughter, and geet is raising her lil sis as her own child?
Geet was on a wheelchair :o
Dev's character brings so much positivity. Love it.
Ooops maan blasted geet :(
Like dadi's bonding with geet. And miri with dev bhaya :)

Love ur writing style dear. It unfolds the mystery slowly slowly :D
Keep up the great work :D

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Superb update,cont

Originally posted by: nostalgic_soul

i jst truly and exceptionally loved ur intro chapter.soo much sincerety,honesty and innocence was being shown through put the chapter.i'm surely hooked to the story,though i'm yet to finish all the parts.i'd really appreciate if u cud add me to ur pm list ajd send me a m whenever u udate the next part.thanks soo much in advance.bt dear u're yet to unfld the mystery of miri's birth,waiting for tht.

Originally posted by: punam2712

You were superb here

Cnat even blame Maan

He heard what she said and took it at face value

And as everybody fawns over him and women throw themselves at him, so he presumed she is the same

But for Geet it was painful to feel that she is not fit to be loved for herself

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I wanted to read this in peace which I found just now, hence the delay in comment.

A biiig thank you for this update! And for the link too! 🤗

And I actually had to read the confrontation twice before really getting what was going on! 😛 I would say that the first official conversation between Maan and Geet surpassed my expectations. I wasn't expecting it to turn this heated an argument! 😲

Geet's thoughts while standing in the balcony all alone are the most realistic thoughts of a girl who feels the way she does. A girl who has lost confidence in herself and does not dare dream of having a man love her still somewhere in her heart craves for it. She puts up an act in font of all the people she knows, tries to mock herself so her loved ones don't realize the true depth of the damage, but she still can't lie to herself. You portrayed those feelings really well! 👏

You know, in the last chapter when Maan was staring at her and she felt her skin pricking for some unknown reasons, I secretly wished for her to find out that she was being stared at and even admired at that particular moment. 😳 And you fulfilled my wish in this update.

If I begin talking about the heated argument, my comment will look like an extended part of the chapter so I am just going to sum it up! 😆 I don't know why I felt it but it seemed like Maan was trying to convince himself more of her being not-so-innocent than actually lashing out at her. He was trying to fight and deny what his instincts told him about her. 😕 But it was really harsh of him to say such mean things to her. Agreed that he doesn't know the hidden meaning of Geet's words which he had overheard but still it doesn't give him the right to judge her like this and to speak this way about her daughter as well!

Dev is like a breath of fresh air in this chapter. A much needed one at that! I loved his encyclopedic talks here! I don't think I've ever heard this much about tears and their volumes! 😆

This update is making me ask you another question. Why is Maan so overprotective towards Dev? Yes, he is the elder brother of a handicapped boy and doesn't want people to feel pity for Dev but does this mean that he won't let Dev meet and greet people? And why didn't Brij recognize Dev and Dadi? 😕

Lastly, there was no narrative this time. 😔 But I'll let it go this time! Thank you again! 🤗