~BLEEDING HEARTS~ MG OS IMP NOTE ON PG-158

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Heart wrenching...very different concept...Loved it...Update soon...

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

new os

BLEEDING HEARTS

poem is awesome, so well written😳

nd prologue is so painful...geet ending her life

her bruised state and she feeling disgusted of herself...

it would be gonna so painful...

lets see ye snsitive baby padh pati hai ki nahi...

and as u write each emotion so well,i know u will make us cry very much...

so i'll read the last part to pakka😳

character sketch is great...

maaneet love with each other

waiting for updates

and congrats for

new new os...

love u diii😊

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Interesting Concept dear!!!!!!!!!!!!

Update soon...Waiting for it...

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Though sady & scary prologue bt wud luv to read it as i luv ur writing style... Though painful bt deir is hope too especially d maan's monologue... Cont soon...

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Ccongrast on new story

Loved the Prologue...so painful
wat haapend to geet? whr s maan?

CS s Awesome..Maaneet s love wit eachother
looking fwd...cant wait for the update

continue super soon
thankx.for.pm

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hayo Rabba! is Ladki ne to poori Planning karke rakhi hai ki ye mujhe Rula Rula ke aur Dara Dara ke Maaregi... Waise to main tukjhse Abhi Bhi Katti hoon but since ye OS ka Prologue acha hai isliye i am commenting... But remember i am "DOUBLE KATTI" from you...

now coming to the OS... i truly love the start nd now i am literally biting my nails to know what happened that she has taken this step... Really cant wait for this to begun to tu jaldi se start karna warna meri "TRIPLE KATTI" ke liye taiyaar ho jana😡😡...

UPdate First Part soon