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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

superb update

can understand wat maan is going through

though he says his family but he fear his heart break and tat she will go

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

thank u for this super long update..
beautiful update dear...awesome ..loved it a lot...

geet learning all fav dishes of maan...
and helping her MIL even after coming from office...
and she has accepted that ...she can't do a specific thing and make him trust her...
she came to know that she have to gradually make him trust her..by being around maan...

and loved this dailogue "just once beta, win his heart and then you have no idea where he will keep you"
its really true

hayee she is always around maan even when he refused...
doing things for him...
irritating him...but now he is not irritated rather enjoyed her presence...and he is used to that sweet gestures of his mishty..and her non stop talkings and cribbings ..

OMG!!!! seems like his insecurity is still there as a fresh wound...
he just gort worried bcoz she didn't do any her daily acts ...
i just loved that entire thing...u have written it so well..
the way he lost his senses not seeing her anywhere in the morning..
and reasoning that his restlesness is for his parents..

the way he said her..."u used to give happiness and suddenly stop it one day...etc etc"..loved it...clearly shows that he is used to her...
and he is affected by her presence..but as u mentioned in the update..he will reason it as something...
hayee...he so much wanted to hug her when she come near him ...
she made him agree that they will talk on this matter...
and he can't do anything in front of his stubborn mishty..

loved the update very much..
very very well presented...

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago

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Ramykrish

@Ramykrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

wondrrful FF.Love Manneet in this FF

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ana56

@ana56

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

totally awesome update anu dear

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pulvi16

@pulvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

WOW !!!!!! STUNNING and Heart touching part...I really realy liked this part a LOOOT.

no words to say...what can i say ...both are lovely...

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

thank u so much dear for wonderful update

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

welcome back di with update RPMK😳

i waited for u to update this it semed likes ages
so maan is becoming used or i must say ki he is use to this misty and becomes restless if he doesnt see her
so the se**al tension is still there but now its their love
geet so wanted to touch maan and maan controlled

so maan finally blasted out on geet his fear and pain came out in form of his anger on geet
felt really bad for geet this time coz she is not well
and maan also felt guilty

project success😳

di when can we see the past of maaneet😕