MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#3 Link thread 4/pg154

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myramabin

@myramabin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

omg this was mind blowing beautifully written can feel the pain of maan cant wait for next

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

I guess its Geet's lips imprint in his cheek made all laugh at him.. lol

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Rukh

@RukhluvMaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

this was amazing... maan pain was so much..so much small small thing he wantrd from his mishty... then what she gave him... nothing at all only pain... now what will geet do... ??? msk on a mission now..

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

God so much pain...wht have u done geet...u killed maan...

Bt she is trying...I guess she won't accept it...even if she has to den will b traditional...

Pls maan forgive her she is truly repenting...don't punish urself so much

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

hi,i m ur new reader.all parts r awesome.continiue soon.

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

waiting for next part

i just cried wid geet

although she is wrong at first but now she is trying

but maan words r sharp knife in her heart

cant bear her pain

nice update

waiting for next part

again u didnt pm me

Edited by kiran_rati - 12 years ago

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

finally today complete all 26 parts... uff loved it so much... so much pain and rudeness, , arrogance, ego, everything... first geet had showed and now maan is showing, but maan is not no wrong at all, , after all his innocence snatched from brutly, , hoping that everything fill be fine soon...

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

ok anu di, here is my farmaish for you, i want to see some scenes here, ,

i want a song seq, pls don't deny me,ok... pls , pls.. pls...

here is the song... i want to see geet's helplessness in this song, i mean how helpless she is feeling that she is not able in manofy him, , how sad, hurt, pained she feel, , how heart cried for him... i want all this in this song and this song is perfect for their situation...

i know...i know that everyone wants to unite maaneet and here i am demanding a sad song seq where you have to show the pain, sadness but pretty please, fulfill my demand... *baby face*

kyu, na bole mo se mohan kyu,
hai ruthey-2 mohan yoon,
kaise manau, haaye, kaise manau
unn bin kate na raina,
unn bin aaye na ik pal chaina,
unn bin jiyu to kaise jiyu,
bhare more naina,
jhare more naina,
bahe more naina

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

not written by me, , found it online and here only contributing...

Geet's POV...

I'm Selfish,
But 0nly Because I Want
You For myself..

I Gets Jealous Easily,
But 0nly Because I Want
To Be The 0nly 0ne Around You..

I Don't Want Any 0ther
Girls To Be With You,
0nly Because I'm Afraid 0f
Losing You..

I don't wanna lose You 0nly
Because I'm Madly
In Love With You

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Another Poem for geet and maan...

I can't explain how much I love you.
But let me try
I'd walk to the end of the earth to see your smile,
Make a fool of myself just to hear you laugh,
And do anything to make you happy.
If I had to choose between breathing and loving you,
I'd use my last breath to say 'I love you.' I'd DIE for you.

I know how they say that love can't be described,
but this is pretty much how I feel for you, and more...
I promise to love you as long as I have a heart,
so pleas,e don't break it

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