MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#3 Link thread 4/pg154 - Page 34

I m silent reader of this FF...

nice part
felt bad for maan

amezing but i hope ki geet dressing style na change kare eagerly waitng for next part

i have missed this FF dnt knw hw, i do follow innocent love...

anu, waiting to see whether Geet will turn into Geet MSK...

Amazing one..
Maan's pain is beautifully penned down...
His Imagination of his Mishty too Good,
It was very painful n emotional one...
Eager for next update...

sob sob...

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part 26
awesome part...
that was so painful from Maan's side...
poor him...
Geet and his family have killed that love filled heart so badly...
cont soon dear...

Heart wrenching to see geet and maan like that
i just loved the update very much dear..you have written it so well..i am not getting words to describe the update and your writing...
superb...awesome..amazing..wonderful...beautiful...speechless...
hats of to you...

he was expecting it to be all true...while looking at the lipstick mark...
geet making up maan's room and waiting for his reaction..chup chupke...
how can he not notice her...
and the way he told her "do you even know mishty" its a straight...direct hit for her heart...
not only for her for him also its a direct hit...
and i too felt something in my heart while reading the next set of words..
for the 1st time maan is behaving like this...talking about mishty openly...
losing his control...and the way u handled with your set of words is really beautiful...
the way he was telling about his mishty and her doings...acts...
agar unki mishty hoti tho kaise kaise karthi thi...loved each and every dialogue...
kitne sapne dekhi thi maan...
he even mentioned that she will be waiting for him
and his misthy's confusion to select maan's favorite color...OMG too emotional..
i got tears while reading and when geet cried seeing his condition...heart wrenching dear...
both were in so much pain...
your update is like a pearl piece ,where pearls are positioned in so much delicacy and love ( ur words)...like the same way i felt your update..
i loved it very much...i can't explain to u how much...
and dear i was thinking the same ,,,geet is just doing all maan's needy things...doing up his room etc etc...this would have been fine if it is any normal husband wife MU..
but maaneet are not even close to normal...so geet doing this things will lead to nothing...
and i believe that if the person who hurt u is infront of u ,then the pain,hatred ,angry,madness all will increase...and i think same thing is happening to maan too..
he wants to end this daily drama..
and at last he even told her to shift to his room..
and ordered her to change herself...
the every maan's dialogue is so much intense...filled with his every pain he gone through, his anger towards GEET HANDA was oozing out..
now what will geet do..
really can't wait for next part..
please please please update soon...
thank u for the superb update..
love u...
hayee my this comment came so much nice compared to previous one which got deleted...

Forgot to mention dear

when he told that his two dreams are football and mishty and now Both dead for him
it was so painful
but i loved that dialogue very much
it just told every thing
i think Geet has to try very very hard to melt his tiny miny part of his heart also
and now Geet being close to him..he will mask himself more to show MAAN not exist now