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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




I hope you'll enjoy this one as my life will lead Geet and Man, though there is no boy in my life but Geet ki life mein to hai na'.. :P...

haan-haan jaante hain hum bhi ki tumhare FF ka naam PRETTY LITTLE LIARS kyun hai...ab tumhari zindagi mein BF hai ya nahin isspe humein koi research thode na karni thi to tum explain kyun kar rahi ho...hmmm..😆...

wonderful update...

yaar chote-chote bachche jhoot bolte hain...it is normal... my daughter also says so many lies but I catch her because she is still small and can't lie properly...I sometimes enjoy this...so this Maan-Geet are quiet normal children...

waiting for next part...whose kiss...

thanx for pm...





hehehe, , it was just like that...
i was giving little bit explanation, nothing like that...
thanks a lot , glad that u liked it...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Awesome Os..,superb start...loved it

waiting for Maaneet Next JHUTH..lol

continue soon...thankx for pm




thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Awesome update

liked a lot
sorry for the late reply, had exams
continue soon
waiting
HAPPY NEW YEAR



thanks a lot dear...
it's okay,.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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4 pming me dear...😃
u done a really dear...👏👏
4 ur hard work...⭐️
...
sach a update...😳
last but not the list

a Very Happy New Year..





lov,❤️
Tama


NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..






thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

cool update...it was very fun filled and contemporary

your title reminds me of two lines from a song
Had se badh kar haseen lagti ho
Had se badhkar Haseen lagti ho
Jhooti Kasmein zaroor khaya karo...



thanks a lot di,,,,
loved the lines...
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

He...he...both are liars

It will be interesting when both liars meet face to face
waiting for to meet them at disc



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago


yeah, updating,,,, give me 5 mins...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Pretty Little Liars



Part-2



Thanks a lot for likes and comments…. Well me disappoint with the numbers of Likes but still updating for those who liked it….. if you think that this is getting bore then tell me, , it's only for fun…. No personal attachments or anything…..

Note:- Hello lovely peoples...

i have participated in OS competition by Aniee di...

please have a look and d o comments..

"Cheers to Love"

please have a look... it's a request, and voting will be start by tonight... do vote for me..


Geet, before getting ready, you should check IF na…. she talked to herself again…. She held her new Galaxy ace and opened IF there, , went in her posts and check the last post, , her eyes popped seeing the longest comment ever & that too by that person…. She replied back at once….



Original posted by mskloveshaameet

Hey geet, ,

First of all, a very sorry for the late comment, ,

Thanks a lot for the update…. Now come to the comment…..

It was really very saddest part ever in this story but you know what I am loving this story more & more, , the way every word written by you depicted the emotions of Shaan & Meet, , they way Shaan held her hand for stopping her, , the inner turmoil she was going through but yes, , shaan did very wrong with her but still he realize his mistake and trying to gain her back, , but I think meet was also right on her place , , how can she forgave him when he tried to make fun of her love…… he tried to insult her in front of every one in the party, , what she wanted , only na and what he did, , divorce papers…. It was ridiculous… is there any mystery???

You are such a great writer , keep it up…. Don't think about the likes & comments,…. Move further with your story….you have such a good skills and the way you used poems for showing the emotions, loved it very much…..

Please update soon and yes, thanks for pm…..


Geet was very happy seeing the comment,…. It made her day…. Wow, geet, you are getting this much long comments…… keep it up geet and keep writing,……


geet wore red dress which comes to her knees, looking stunning and red hot sexy too... open hair, red dark lipstick which was giving more sensual look to her, , now the major problem was that how to convince mom???? she can't tell to her mama that where she is going so she has to lie to her mama, ,


but she bit her nails in worry if her mama catch her lie but somewhere deep in the corner of heart, there is building confidence which is telling her to go ahead and lie to her mama... she put up a strong face and got her things, , ran to her mama...

"mummy..." geet shouted coming in her room...

"what happen geetu?" asked her mama as she turned behind and her eyes widen seeing her daughter in red hot dress... ooopsss, , now mama's fear started, geet thought in her mind but then now-a-days, girls are not safe anywhere, remember geet, that Rape case, ,

oh gosh, , me too in Delhi, but ye to kahi bhi ho sakta hai na, , no geet, , don't get scared okay... calm down... if mama came to know about your fear then she didn't let go there... okay... her muttering session came to a halt when her mama asked of her that where are you going???

she slightly curved her lips in a smile that she is not worried but seems, she is more worried than her mama , ,

"wo, mama, , meera's b'day party..." replied geet hoping that her mom didn't get suspicious at her... she knew that her mama won't catch her lie but still somewhere deep in the corner of her heart became conscious when she lied to her mama…. she felt bad or guilty whenever she lied to her mama then shrug off her thoughts and kept looking at her mama…..

"please mama" she pleaded making baby face….. her mama smiled at her…. "why are you pleading to me? Did I tell something to you now?" asked her mother….. geet shook her head in no,, "you can go beta but only one condition" her mother replied her……

Geet was scared for a moment then get courage and then asked what is that? She smiled and replied that your brother will drop you at meera's home…… geet thought for a moment then nodded….. her brother will drop her at meera's home then will go away…… geet accepted and in no time she was at meera's home………… geet and meera jumped in excitement that they are going to disc….. but there was a problem….. they will need passes for disc….

But not to worry…. It was prem's party & prem is meera's big brother…… so meera took advantage of that and stole two passes…. One for her & one for geet….. both girls get going to disc unaware of that what is going to be happen in disc…..

On the other hand, maan checked his notification which came direct on his I-phone , , a wide smiled spread on his face when he checked the comment on the story "Ups & Downs in my life", , wow, she liked my comment, , dam when she'll update next… I am going crazy…..

he immediately replied her back and asked that when are you going to update, waiting desperately….. he started spamming her thread… he doesn't know when he reached to the disc…..

He showed his pass to the gate keeper and entered inside, , the loud music , enjoying freely , drinks, , dirty dance, , and yes, , couples engrossed with each other….. he searched for prem and finally spotted him surrounded with girls…. He grinned inwardly but showed nothing….. both friends met up and as usual prem cribbed over for being late….

Prem pulled him at drink corner and made him drink 2 shots , , oops now he was talli…. But little bit…. Okay….. geet & meera also reached to the disc but stood outside, , actually adults are allowed only and they are under teens still…..


but who is going to tell them about their age….that's why they dressed up differently showing theirself adults, , and cherry on the top, , they found two boys who were going ahead, , actually boys don't need partners and girls needed partners for entering inside….

Both girls ran behind them, showed their pass and told to gate keeper that they were with them….. they nodded, , they were two also…. So they thought that those boys are boyfriends of these girls…. Geet & meera grinned and finally got entry….. now they were getting conscious that if prem saw them, , but they got solution for that also…..

It was a mask party in the disc….. both choose their mask & sighed in relief…. Now no one can recognize them , , some are wearing masks but some are not….. but they badly needed the masks….. both girls laughed and went to the dance floor…. Their eyes were widening seeing the environment of the disc…. They couldn't believe that it is really like that, that they had seen in the movies…..

Geet told to meera that can I try champion??? Meera denied, , but geet wanted to taste that, she knew that she can be talli but still thoda bahut to chalta hai and ghar jakar to sona hi hai…. She dragged meera to the drink corner, , meera tried to stop her but geet was geet, , she didn't listen anything….….

Geet ordered two champion and was waiting for their orders……. As she was about to turn, their order placed, , meera was looking at geet pleading to her but geet glared at her….. she told him that at-least they can taste, , she wanted to know how it tastes? Geet closed her eyes and tried to touch her lips at the glass, , but suddenly opened her eyes getting afraid…. Meera laughed at her, , mimicking , , geet tried again but failed again….

"ye ladkiyo ka kaam nahi hai" one boy told behind of her, standing crossing his arms over his chest….. he knew that girls are supposed to do those things which are not for them…. Geet took a charge looking at him gulped the whole drink in one go….. poor meera was getting afraid as geet snatched her glass also, gulped that too….. oopss geet started laughing like a maniac, , meera tried to held her back but in return geet held her wrist and pulled her on the dance floor…..

But , but, but, it was not meera's hand…. It was a boy's hand…. She closed her eyes and danced with him... he too lost in her, both were dancing wildly, , again poor meera, , tried to stop her tears, , and scared that if her brother found her then what will happen?

"hey"

"hi" replied geet….

maan : hey liar

geet : hey liar

yes we both are liar

we both are liar

hey liar

did any one told you,your pants are on fire

and my dear little cuty

did any one told you,your nose is long

just like electric wire

hey liar

we both are liar

rose is red

violets are blue

you suck in bed,that's why

i m dumping you

you liar

yes i know,we both r liar

sky is blue

milk is white

you have to shut up

aur else i m going to slap you tight

you liar

yes i know,we both are liar

by 9n9i9s9h9u9

thanks a lot di...

"what's your name?" asked the boy pulling her towards him circling his arms around her waist….. geet's hand went around his neck making her body glued to his….

"mera naam hai,, meet… " and giggled replying him…. Okay again lie…. Right now she knew that she is dancing with a boy…. And she knew that she shouldn't tell her name to the strangers…. He smiled hearing her name…… "aapka naam kya hai mr. stranger???" asked geet…..

"umm , mera naam hai shaan" she giggled again….

"what do you do?" he asked to her…. She though for a while….. smiled sexily…

"I am in college, in 2nd year…" okay again lie…..

Okay now they are portraying thierself as the character of the serial , , both are the fan of that show , geet writing a story on that…. "wow, lovely name…. you know what he is like a greek god… and pata hai I write a story on that couple in IF" both started talking with each other in their dazed state…..

Maan took her at the corner for sitting on the couch which was at the dark corner….. don't know when geet started telling about her story to him, both were so close to each other, , geet was telling that about a first kiss in her story…. Now she was sitting in his lap, actually he lifted her by her hip making her sit in his lap…. He slightly removed her mask and she did the same with him…..

She became more daze when she felt his lips on hers, nibbling softly, she closed her eyes in acceptance and give him the same flavor ,, wiping her red lipstick by his lips pulling her more into him holding her bare thigh , caressing sensuously, she was melting in his arms pulling his hairs kissing him wildly, she parted her lip slightly and he took advantage of that, throbbing his tongue inside her mouth playing with her tongue…., , his freed hand went to her curve caressing warmly over her dress while she jolted feeling his caress over her assets….

Precap

Consequence of Lies

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