Pt3'Her 7 Deadly Sins' Thrd2 Pg1 - Page 41

Originally posted by: anieePm

hi

me so happy that u liked it

pata hai

iw as ecpecting rotton tomatoes for this one

bcs it was totally different

and I was expecting sandals as well😉

actually mujhe aisi assignment nahi mili

but I got this idea while doing literature studies😆

and I was having temperature at that time

or mai ne faiza ko call kar k kaha

fai this is the idea I got

and faiza said

aniee tujhe roz temperature hona chahya ha

😆

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Geet bowed down to the greed ...im so in love with this ff dear...

Changing the mates for lab...breaking the trust to fulfill the desire to be with Maan..

Maan caring for her..taking her to his house...

oh so innocent bacha she is...

waiting for more more more more more

😆 😆Greed ...😆 😆

I don't know about everyone...but i surely a person experienced one with this sin...

hard to resist ...n always surrendering to the greed...changing things according to me...

Originally posted by: heytal

Wonderful update

With every sin curiosity is increasing

as to who is committing the sin

n what is compelling it to be committed😕

Waiting already

Greedy me

😳

hey how are u heytal

Originally posted by: Azmatazz

Fab Annie... The story is just fab... its entirely a different concept and a different narration from your previous ones...

I loved how you spoke of King Midas's story here... How true of what Maan said any power without control is a curse...

Reminds me of the famous quote from Spiderman... With great powers comes great responsibility and only the one who understands that responsibility and acts wisely on it can have control on it...

Loving the flow of the story and how well you are explaining each sin... Each coin has two sides and so does the sin... (my opinion)... Will wait to see how you take this forward now 😊

omg thank u so much was waiting for ur comment

Originally posted by: anieePm

hey me really happy that u liking it

u know everyone had so much experience with greeed atleast

hey kanjos hain tu kyahua jiju to mile na😉

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

7 sins everyone done some how in theirs life ...whether its only a greed for your's favorite cookie to best job , LOVE or anything ..Greed is greed and theirs is no fault in it like maan said int his update ...loved the way you continue this story line ..simply loved it

thanks u so much

Originally posted by: Ravz333

Aniee di,
wonderful as usual.
Thank you for the PMs di.

Geet and Greed!!

Nice

not able to comment more. Sorry

no problem sweets

Originally posted by: valli22

congo 4 new thread

geet did her next sin

she is thinking that she got punishment by falling in water

maan helping her

as he dont want anyone to see geets clinging form

taking geet home n their conversation of geet

different..

n ossum part..

thanks valli luv ya

Originally posted by: singh24

thanks😳

@praf

haye mujhe roz temp na karao plzz heheh if u people are ready to read something different then I am ready to write it;) I never wrote bcs I was not sure but now I think we can experiment wow they are living at ur house that is grea