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Posted: 12 years ago

"Her 7 Deadly Sins"

His 7 Capital Virtues...!

"Some rise by sin, and some by virtue fall."

By (William Shakespeare)

Have you ever seen such sins that purifies you?

Have you ever seen a sinner who rises amidst her sins?

This is a unique story of

7 Deadly Sins that she had committed

This is a new story of

7 Capital Virtues that he ought to commit

But in the end

This is a simple story of

Love...!

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Faiza Ghafoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

aaha me again first but believe me it was totally intentional actually I reserved this post looong ago so cant help 😆 😉 😛
so I am the first
ok sins are here hmm part 3 wow I am loving this story and u knw why because I am curious to knw that exactly how she will commit her seven sins???? and I knw the same question is in every reader's mind. no doubt she has committed greed and lie, betrayal, deceive are the all the sins come under Greed. No doubt she is tempted with the sin so much so she betrayed her own friend just to spend some more time with him. I love her mind's fight of right and wrong. It happens to everyone. All of us have to face the same fight on doing something our mind did not approve. so her reaction was right. I love the way you used THE YELLOW COLOR OF GREED as a yellow monster. and she is afraid of her own self now. she is not liking the way she is committing forbidden things that too for a boy.
no doubt she is shy but she is confidence enough to handle any situation. she is independent and refused to took his help. But I loved that little glimpse of his possessiveness towards him. He carried her \away so no one could see her in this state. this shows he cares and I loved his care for her.
well one thing is sure she is a beginner. Yes she is not a perfect sinner. well she is like a kid right now.
you knw what when I was a kid and I did something wrong or tell a lie or any sin and if by chance i got hurt on the same day the first thought was it is the result of my that bad deed.
and she is doing the same. I loved a little child in her. who is afraid that she fell because of her Greed.
and the way he consoled her was very calculated and it showed a glimpse of his character. well as compare to Geet he is mature, wise, witty and a very calculated person who thinks abt his profit in every thing. and I think this difference will help in their relation.
You know what aniee that was an amazing update. a very sweet one. I read it 2 times and by the way your vocabulary is improving sweet even I asked you abt the meanings of some words😉

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

congrats
our new home 🥳

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Faiza Ghafoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey jubilant
soory for the spelling mistake if there is any
hey saw ur posts in last thread
must nice pics and Avi
loved it

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Jubilant

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PariNain
hey jubilant
soory for the spelling mistake if there is any
hey saw ur posts in last thread
must nice pics and Avi
loved it

u spell it right dear

thanks 😊