Pt3'Her 7 Deadly Sins' Thrd2 Pg1 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Awesome update di...
In her greedyness to stay with Maan she changed the whole list...
Hhaayyyeee...Maan carried her in front of the whole clg to save her modesty..
He couldn't bear any bad eyes on Geet...
I think Maan is also falling for her...
Waiting for the nxt di...

& abt my greed well i hv lied many many times just to see my GHSP...

Originally posted by: ylaraib

geet ne list change kardi hehe

ab MSK k liye tu koi kuchh bhi kar sakta he list kya cheez he

and geet become wet

maan helping her and taking her to his home

awesome

touch bhi karliya

ye kya khatam ...?

waiting

LARAIB

Originally posted by: maanshi

superb update
geet again commits sin for maan
love maaneet talk
very deep n logical answer by maan
awesome writing dear
love it

Originally posted by: keerthi90

Loved the update dear!!!!!

So geet has again comitted a sin for the GREED of being paired with maan...she changed the pairings...hmm... andshe believes that whatever happened was a punishment for her for showing her greed...well any innocent and guilt conscious people are bound to think in the same way right...

So maan took geet with him to his house as he did not like all those people ogling at her wet form...hmm...

Waiting for the next update dear...Update soon...

Originally posted by: arthir

I am curious how do u plan to depict all the 7 sins... Yaar pls give a briefing of the 7 sins for dumbos like me...

Y do I feel maan is not as wat he seems? 😳

Geet does sound naive though wat was she doing telling him abt the greed part... And the punishment was also cute thinking...

Nice update pls do update it is a diff concept dot b disheartened so soon 👍🏼

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome update
I would say love is the biggest greed which can make any one blind to commit crime
sooo what if geet just changed the list😆😆😆
it's ok in love i think😉 as u know there is saying that everything is fine in love and war

omggg poor her got the punishment rt. after the deed and
hayeee apna gabroo jawan is there to protect her😳😳😳😳
I wonder why is sooo protective to her and as u said his diary color and greed color both are yellow
is he greedy to get her😆😆😆😆 tooo

again a cliff hanger😕😕😕😕 u devil
I think i have to bring back my tomato basket hain🤣🤣

abhi to or bhi rotten ho gaye honge😆😆😆

I am loving this story sooo much tooo aniee
it is different flavour and I am enjoying to the mosttt
Ur writing has surely sooo much improved and i can really see it as an novel
lekin instalments mein😆😆😆😆

keep the good work going and make us happy with back to back updates

Originally posted by: t_areeb

nice part .. soon geet will realise the greed not gave her punishment

it was just that she was meant to be with maan as a result of it

the incident could have happened if she had not changed the list and maan would have helped her in the same way

in my opinion greed only overcomes us when we lose faith over destiny

umm .. greed and me...well as a kid to eat icecreams even if my mother have strictly asked me not to do so

and now .. really have to think about this one

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

aapne meri comment check nahi kiya 😒

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome updae
loved it
loved the way maan explained everything

congrats for new thread