Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthich

di... this is so different!!!

MAAN didnt yell yet her... rather saying her his heart a little...

the first shock i got is when MAAN dropped her back home!!!!😲
n asked for date!!!

n then he came inside the house of GEET...
n second shock i got is... h want her to love him... n that too in his conditions!!!!

again carried her... n now date is in night dress!!!😲

i loved one line again... that is


"It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven,"

precap!!!!! again😲
waiting for next... update soon...


OMG what a lovely comment
loved it
thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR

It was a very nice chp. So he dropped her back home! Anyway,can't believe that the police didn't do anything and just saw him walking away with her.Looking forward to the next chp.Update soon😊

thanks a lot gal
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: amrinderdhami

superb tooo gud di
maan taking geet forcefully on date
hmmm i m just loving dis devil alott
its simply mindblowing

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

kyun geet maan k saath panga lena...u knw na...he is a devil...den why...do as he says...

superb n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

a very nice comment
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
kisko yaad hai ...hum bhi yaha hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

Ohh god
how u mange to write such a devil
really inteligent and scary both

i m just fan of ur writing
but really scared to read precap

thanks for the comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

awesome update
just love ur this devil maan
not only in ur this ff but the others also u hv created a devil maan but hes diff frm others love his confidence
loved d way he answered her its better to rule in hell thn to b nothing in heaven ...his words do carry nother meaning too
do cont soon
wating eagerly fr ur next update
loved both ur new ff her 7 sins nd this one too

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

my apologies


i wasn't aware of this part ...

so here is the devil

i knew he won't do anything like that ...

but he has some other intentions

of course now that geet had spoiled his dinner plans

she again is in for dinner but wait ..

its gonna be DATE ...

wowww !!!!! am too excited

was laughing at maan's words like he said what a couple is supposed to do on a DATE ...

and finding her quit he answered ...

seriously shameless comments ... kissing and being physical..

but he is not NORMAL so obviously the date will also be HAT-KE šŸ˜‰
uff !! he warned her not to marry...šŸ˜†

geet's family is too understanding .. aww they got her police protection

but whats the point when the DEVIL is capable of doing anything ...

what amused me was the thing that maan actually knew that geet wasn't ready for marriage and so he was like a Saviour ..

ohhh !!! he just didn't let her change also ... 😲

wondering and waiting for the next part

cont soon

love yaa


luv u doc
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hellgirl

Wow loved it...
This devil has blown my mind away...*dancing around*
he can read geet's mind so clearly and same with geet*jaw dropped in amusement*
he again abducted her and she is in her night dress...

Precap is awesome i mean naughty...*wink*
update soon..

thans for the lovely comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

hayee my maanu is really umm kya kaho
mind blowing
he ssid he dont lv her
bt he wanted her to lv him kya baat hai
his every word
hayee babaji lvt
"Remember that is what happens normally and I am not normal by any means. So don't expect any normality from me."
wah maanu kya dialogue mara
n love thi line too "It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven,
rocking

OMG what a comment
loved it
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