ff-Musical Maaneet...a musical love saga (New) Teaser- pg 28 /oct 6. - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue:-

He was sleeping peacefully..as it was sunday that means no collage & no office! His sleep got disturb with loud music coming from the next room. He made a face and tried to block the music by pressing a pillow on his ear...it didnt helpd much!
He was already irritated and the lyrics were increasing his irritation!


Dekha jo tujhe yar..
Dil me baji guitar..


"What kind of song is that?"..he thought while moving out of his room. He went towards the room...where from the sound was coming.


dekha jo tujhe yar..
Dil me baji guitar..
Shalka aankon se pyaar..
Dil me baji guitar..
Shu liya maine aasma re..
Aa raha jine ka maza re..
Are re re main to gaya re..
Dil bhi gaya re..
Are re re main to gaya re..
Dil bhi gaya re..


The song was playing in the dvd player and a boy was lost humming the song as well as dancing in a total tapori style. The boy was too much in the song to notice anything else!
He went towards the boy and called his name.."vicky".. But no use..!
He taped on vickys shoulder to get his attention. Vicky turned and immediatly discreased the volume seeing him there. "good morning bro"..vicky wished him. "good morning"..he greeted. "vicky itni subh-subh itna loud music? Aur ye kaisa song hai?"..he asked. He always wonders how they make such songs? Is it even possible? Kisi ko dekhte hi..dil me guitar bajna??
Na its not like that he doesnt belive in love & all..he does! But love at first sight? He wasnt sure about that!
"kyu bhai?..itna achha song toh hai!"..vicky replied..confused. He shook his head..saying.."kuch nahi. Bas volume thoda kam kar do"
he turned to go out of the room. He has hardly taken a few steps..when he heard the next song..


Tujhe dekh ke meri madhubala..
Mera dil ye pagal zhala..


.."not again!"..he mumered hearing the lyrics...and left!


***

He was with his friends..when someone's phone started ringing..


Pehli nazar me aisa jadu kar diya..
Tera ban baitha hai mera jiya..


the song was set as ringtone.. And the lyrics caught his attention!


***

He & his friends were at their usual hangout place.. near the tea stall.. There, radio was on..playing old songs..
Again he couldnt help noticing as the next song begun..

Pehli baar mile ho..
Milte hi dil ne kaha mujhe pyaar ho gaya...


from morning, he was listening these type of songs. It was as if they were trying to convince him that its possible.. love at first sight happens!


***

He came back home lost in his thoughts! He was going upstairs, towards his room..he could hear the sound coming from main hall ..where the tv was on..may be some music channle. A romantic song was playing..again its lyrics caught his attention..


..Pehli nazar..
ka hai asar..
Dil ye diwana hua..
Hairan hoon main...
ye soch kar..
Tum me gazab hai aisa kya..


the words felt so perfect! They perfectly descriebed ..Excatly what he was feeling rightnow!
He was lost thinking about his evening..when all this started! Then his mom called him that brought him outof his thoughts.."maan, dinner is ready!"
"coming..mom"..and he went down..to join his family for dinner.




*******

precape:-
Soch raha hoon..
Kis se punchhu..
Uss ladki ka naam..


Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting dear
loved prologue
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very interesting...the boy must be Maan...

bechara har jagah songs hi sunn raha hai...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
interesting start...
the boy must be maan..
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
wonderful prologue...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Veryyy interesting concept n story yar...
Looking forward for it :-)
N thanks for the pm :-)
Waitinggg for geets entry too. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heheheh bichara Maan 😆 waitng eagerly waitng for geet ! Update sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Amazing prologue
congo for new story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_rati


interesting dear

loved prologue
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

thank u dear for encouraging me with ur response:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran





very very interesting...the boy must be Maan...

bechara har jagah songs hi sunn raha hai...

thanx for pm...

han he is maan..aur songs toh sunne hi padenge ab theam jo musical hai..:-)

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