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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice update
but little confusing
thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
part 4
nice...
did Maan kidnap Geet?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Read all parts in one go
nice story
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend to geet now
thanks for the pm



Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



first of all Fiano dear...this is ur first attempt in writing FF and it is so confusing...

who is the mysterious person who kidnapped Geet...who are the lady and Man talking...why is so much of age difference between geet and Maan... Maan is 23 yrs of age and Geet only 9...

I am confused what to say how I find this update with so much confusing mystery attached with it...

thanx for pm...





Originally posted by: punam2712

QUITE CONFUSED

THOUGHT GEET WAS ARNAV'S SISTER
SO WHERE DID BRIJ AND VEENA COME FROM, WHO ARE THEY
WHO KIDNAPPED GEET AND WHO IS THE DON


Originally posted by: zariya123

so confusing
is this don is maan n the differnce between thier age

Originally posted by: dona86

nice update
but little confusing
thanx for the pm..

Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
nice...
did Maan kidnap Geet?
cont soon...

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

Read all parts in one go

nice story
loved it
continue soon


thanks all of u 4 comments

hi guys i am am really really sorry 4 making that part confusion

i hope next part will clear all the confusion



Edited by fiano - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Part 6


**Flashback continues**


To suppress his anger arnav came to geet room...by seeing 1 glimpse of geet whatever happen his anger, tiredness will be vanished in a moment. She was sitting on the bed he came behind and hugged her. She loosen herself and cross her arm on chest.


'kya hu gudiya' he was little taken aback


'main apse gussa hu' she said making angry face 'nahi nahi bohuttt gussa hu' by spreading her hand.


'ab mane kya ki' he said


'apne sab kuch kiu tor diya aur babhi ko gussa kui kiya'


'kiu unwhone tumare upar hath uttay isseliya' he replied


'mera galti thi mera hath plate gir gaya thi isliya babhi ne mujhe mara' she tried to defend her that it was her fault 'app babhi ko sorry bolna chaiye'


'what the..!! never I won't say sorry to her' he whimper out.


'toh main apse kati kati kati' she showed her baby finger 'main apse bath nahi karogone gi' she said with determined and turned her face.


He can't live without talking to her at last he gave up 'ok...I will say sorry'


She turned back with cute smiling face 'sachi'


'sachi' he assured and she start dragging him out of her room 'where r u taking me?'


'Babhi ke room main app sorry bolene na' she said


He seized her 'listen listen abhi nahi bohut raat ho chuki wo sab so reh honge hain I will say to her in morning ok'


'Promise' she said innocently


'ok pakka promise' giving kiss on her both cheeks.


She stretch her hands to him 'now what' he growl


'mujhe godi me utto' she said


'What that..!! geet u r not kid anymore u r a big girl' he said


'plzzz' she said making golguppawala face now he can't say no her. This habit was made by him only when she was small he always used take in her in his arm and make her sleep.


he picked her up after sometime she made plead face.he understand now she up to something 'now what' he raised her eyebrows


'mujhe rajkumar or rajkumari wala khanni sunna hai' she said sweetly


'no way geet' he whimpered


'Plzzz' she pleaded


And brother sister bak-bak nok-jok goes on and on.


*****


Birj came to him room angrily and said to veena 'uss budda ne mera sari mehnat ka uppan pani per diya'


'ab kya hua' Veena asked calmly


'uss budda ne sari property geet aur arnav ke naam kar diya' he spitted out in ager


'toh ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai ase hi us arnav or geet ko gulma banker rahe'


'Nahi harkiz nahi' he barked out.


'Y don't u get rid of them like him' veena suggested 'accident be lage ga aur kisi ko kuch pata ve nahi chalega'


'Yehi to problem hai agar dono kuch hogaye toh all property will will be transfer to trustee'


'toh ab kya kare' she asked


'ek rasta hain din din iss arnav ka himmat barte ja rehe hai agar arnav naam ko kate ko apne raste se hata de toh sare property geet ko naam ho jayega , jab tak geet 18 sal ki nahi ho jate tab tak hum iss property or geet ka caretaker honge, geet ko hum katputlli tara banayenge jo srif humare sibay kuch dikay na jeye .whatever we will say she will do like that.' He blurt out everything and both started laughing manically.


Arnav came out of geet room while passing through the brij's room he listen everything as if somebody has taken earth from him his feet. He couldn't believe in ear that he killed his father.His rage increase he tightened his jaw and clench his plam in fist. For 1sec he thougth he will him kill at that moment. But he stopped him. He thought he will go to police and tell them everything but without proof they won't do anything to him. He just walked out from there and called anjali. Arnav told everything to anjali he never hide 4rm her anything.


Arnav elder sister 18years old she is married and staying in Delhi. Darji was very traditional he only wanted warris. So when she was born he didn't like her he criticize her for sending her school that if girls go out of house they will ruin da reputation. Arnav's parent tried to make him understand there is no difference between girls and boys but day by day it was getting more worse . As arnav also grow up he also loathed this kind of discrimination start protesting with grandfather. His parent understood it was affecting both of children so they send anjali to nani's house. Anjali swear herself that she whatever happen she will never come to HP again. Geet was born after darji passed away.


If brij got suspicious that he nos everything about him he can stoop so low to success in his plan. Brij nos very well geet is main weak point arnav. So arnav told every1 he was going out for business. Brij get chance to make accomplishment in his plan. Arnav took geet 4rm ther at night so brij couldn't do anything to her.


**Flashback end**


He trance broke out geet called him out 'bahi mera teddy bear kaha hai'


'humm'wo gar pe hain' he said


'par bahi wo mera favorite teddy bear hain' she said and tear started to form in her hazel brown eyes.


'di has bought so many teddy bears 4 u she told no need to bring' he lied


He only packed few clothes 4 them and couldn't take anything else


Geet and Arnav was sitting in the train 'hum wapas kab ayenge' geet asked


'bohut jaldi' Arnav replied unconsciously


'I don't have any another way what I have done to our house if com u knows u will hate me geet. But how can I let him live in peace who killed our father, who have snatched our happiness and everything' Arnav thought 'we don't have that house but we have memories which will always remain with us 4ever'


*******


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Edited by fatima_FM - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
great story
pm me when ever u give updates
love the way aranav treat geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome update
so arnav kidnapped geet n burn their house
is maan n don r same??!!!
thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome update 👏
part 4 was confusing
but after reading part 5&6
just loved it

looking froward for next update




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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
part 5
nice part...
who is that lady with Maan?

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