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P0K0

@P0K0

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Fantastic background sound...What's it named..???

And Can u tell me how to activate any sound as a background music.

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
sounds good

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox
interesting

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
my name is alicia pm me

Originally posted by: shah10
Love it

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi
Interesting story dear..
loved the prologue very much..
part 1 n 2 was very well written.. omg Maan is a don here.. sad that Geet lost everyone.. hope she gets the love that she is craving for.. and eagerly waiting for Maan's entry.. please update Next part soon

Originally posted by: saari
waiting 4 next

Originally posted by: punam2712
SO GEET HAD NO ONE IN HER FAMILY EXCEPT HIM AND NOW HE TOO LEFT HER ALONE

thanxxx all of u😊 i will update soon

Edited by fiano - 13 years ago

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fatizkmy

@fatizkmy

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

nice prologue😊
interesting story
i wanted to who is that guy with geet
plzz give the character sketch

loved it

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

part 2
nice...
poor Geet...
cont soon...

PS - can u add the update and page numbers and date in the title?

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

very interesting FF...

please pm me whenever u update...

I have send buddy request to u...

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P0K0

@P0K0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

well...i've edited the update 4 hours ago...but still reading it again is a plesure for me.

Nice story.

I hope u would keep up the good work.😊

Edited by Temporary99 - 13 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

apart from Veena and Geet we don't get who is the person waking her up in the morning...

and first of all this story started with Geet's brother death and about DON...

please clear this confusion...now this story is in when Geet's father died...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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Zariya

@zariya123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Lovely ff it is just awesome

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

apart from Veena and Geet we don't get who is the person waking her up in the morning...

and first of all this story started with Geet's brother death and about DON...

please clear this confusion...now this story is in when Geet's father died...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...

lot of thanks 2 u😊
with so much enthusiasm u r reading my ff
ok i will clear confusion of part 1 and part 2
after 2or 3parts
(the person who waking her up) i have given the clue with da 1 word which very much popular
anyway today i am going to give Character sketch