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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: AIMAMSK
niceee

Thanxzzz dear😳

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: AIMAMSK
t4s nice

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Malika_ZL_Khan
i've just read all the part !Good one dear
keep it up!

Thanxzzz dear😳

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka
Superb update

thanxzzz dear😳

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negha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Nice update dear.. but what is geet age dear.. when her brother brought her to the station i thought she is small girl.. :)😊

Good work dear...:)😊 continue sooon...👍🏼

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@jssood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

read all 3 parts in one go fantastic story

lovely

muahhh

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: negha
Nice update dear.. but what is geet age dear.. when her brother brought her to the station i thought she is small girl.. :)😊
Good work dear...:)😊 continue sooon...👍🏼

dear first geet age i wrote 10 and Maan age 22

so many of didn't like it and 1 friend requested me to change there age differences

so i turned geet age 13 but Geet is still immature many thing she doesn't know 😉

Thanxxx dear 4 comment 😳

Edited by fiano - 12 years ago

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: jssood
read all 3 parts in one go fantastic story
lovely

muahhh

Thanxxx dear 😳

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

part 12
nice part...
so Geet is now at Maan's place...
am now confused, who killed the woman who saved Geet?
Dev?
and who is the Don here, Dev or Maan?
cont soon dear...

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: spvd
part 12
nice part...
so Geet is now at Maan's place...
am now confused, who killed the woman who saved Geet?
Dev?
and who is the Don here, Dev or Maan?
cont soon dear...

Don is Dev

nowhere i wrote Maan as don he is business tycoon

Dev killed Nandini and Dev is behind geet he thought the geet had the proof against him

when Nandini put Geet in the Car that was Maan's car 😆 at the end Maan saved Geet unintentionally

After running miles they tuned back to see none is there they might have lost their track. Nandini and Geet was completely exhausted couldn't run anymore her hand, elbow, knee full of bruises with the thorny bushes. Nandini saw there was cottage and two thee cars is standing they both ducked behind the tree. One man came put the bags in the car boot other man came shouting don't put in that it's not closing put it in other car. 'I can't put her life on danger bcoz of me its good idea if I send her far 4rm here agar unlogko geet mili gaye tho is masum zindigi ki mout se bhi baather kar degi' she was waiting for the right moment when all men went 4rm their Nandini and geet came to car which boot is not closing and make Geet hide inside the boot.

'Sir we have found her' Guards said to Don they throw nandini in front of him 'I am always impressed with u...i have never seen such daring girl in my life' don grabbed her hair pulled toward him 'so u came here to take revenge for ur brother and put me in jail sorry dis will never happen' he shouted to guards 'bring him here' when guards bought a man she was looking at shocked expression 'bcoz of him u brother betrayed me and I have to kill him and bcoz of him u came to revenge from me, isn't?' nandini start begging 'he didn't do anything plz leave him plz leave him DEV' Don sarcastically 'Impressed so u know my name but I think DEVIL suit me more' And he shoot the man senior officer raj and bring nandini more closer and pulled the trigger not 1ce but twice. And the guards search her there is no proof so Don told bring that girl who was with her either alive or death 'If u fail u bring her any of u will not see the next ray of day'.

Thanx 4 comment😳

Edited by fiano - 12 years ago