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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Amazing,superb,fabulous.

Tho I dint expect,the end,oopz,i mean the beggining will be so soon,but the way it happened is fantastic.

The whole carnival thing,Maan's turmoil,Geet's pain,birthday,confession,ring,I Love You,kiss,Vicky,Manvi,Nicole,Mathew,fireworks,the dance,Adi,the plan,the cruise,wedding,...everything,jst everything is perfect.

The last two parts are too emotionally excellent and I wud love to let my Maaneet kiss for whatever time they want.

Loved "Friends in Love",will miss it.

Thanx for d story and super thanx for d PM.



glad u liked this ss ..
thank u for all ur liking support n appreciation throughout this journey ...

posting the epi soon

hope u'll like that as well ..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ff...
I ve been readin it from start...
luv ur work .
Ll be waitin fo t epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moni6262

lovely updates sobi😃

loved both of them..
finally leaving all the problems, they confessed to each other👏
both the poems were awesomly written..
ritu dii👏
ek nayi poetess is on the way😉
msk's straight forwardness😳..jangli billi's teasing😆..
and the friends support..
shaadi on cruise...😳
waiting for epi..
lovely ss filled with love😃
waiting for more from ur side...
jaldi se nayaa concept lake aao😛
moni..
🤗
ek aur baat i loved the ring soo sooo very much..kitni pyaari hai😳


new poetess ...☺️

glad u liked it yrr dodo ..😃
was really nervous for the ending ...but good it got accepted in positive way ...
thank u for all the appreciation ...support n liking through this journey ..

posting the epi in few hours ,,

hope ull like that as well ..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Toh finally u ended FIL..
Superbbb updates Sobi..
Honestly speaking mujhe updste ki starting me Aan pe itna jyaada gussa aa raha tha...how could he ven think of parting himself from his jungli bili..
Aur jab Geet ne apne dil ko samjha diya tha Maan se doori bardasht karne ke liye toh Maan changed his decision...
Buddhu Maan...pehle hi uss option ke baare me poori tarah se socj liya hota toh na khud rote na hi Geet ko rulate..
Anyways finally Maaneet ek toh ho gaye...& for tht a big thanx to Adi sir..he can do anything for Maaneet..& he has always proved it..
Loved Maaneet confession...
Loved the updates Sobi..
Plzz try to give epilogue for yhis..
Love u for such a mesmerising ff..
Mmuuaahhh..


hmm ...so tou hai ..but u see the fear of loosing that one person is really big n over powers ur thinking ability sometime so only it all happened ..
but glad u liked it
thank u for all the appreciation ...support n liking through this journey ..

posting the epi in few hours ,,

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

ittni jaldi over ho gaya 😭

😭

now abt update it was awesome update
full of crying masti love romance nnd alll

nd addi bht kam ka h yar uske bina geet ki koi v story nahi chal
sakti h 😃 aaj uske ideas ne maaneet ko ek sath kia😃

nd nichole nd vicky effort tooo
nd then the way maan expressed his feelings
to geet nd geet celebrated maan's bday all was awesome

then maan ki teasing nd plan of marriage
😳😳😳
sab bht pyara tha
nd really very big update
mereko 1hrs laga read karne me
hheheh lil slow i m 😉

but isse aacha end nahi ho sakta tha iss os turn inta ff ka
love u sobia for ur beautiful ff

chalo i will start reading ur another ff jaldi hi
nd all the best for exam
exam ke bad ek or mast wala ff nd os m waiting



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Posted: 12 years ago
😳😳.. FRIENDS IN LOVE ..😳😳
banner by one dearest di of mine ...luv ya di for this beautiful one ...🤗

the wedding day ..

a beautifully decorated Church ..filled with chirpy noices of girls bangles n accessories ' n hundreds of people talking ..some absorbing the moment ' while some busy flirting 'some boys drooling over girls in thr sexy western outfits ..while girls 'forget it ..thr eye were fixed over this handsome man glad in his black tuxedo 'having a killer smile on his face .. while talking over the phone '.WHO ELSE THAN MSK himself 😳😳'but guess who is his object of interest 'his deep ocean brown eyes were fixed on this girl ..who against all odds was wearing a typical Indian lehenga in this western church wedding but my my ..she was looking glamorous 'this definitely will be an understatement '.she was nothing less than heavenly in that light orangish peach lehenga with short golden choli n her transparent tisuue dupatta making her creamy white skin shine 'her deep hazel eyes were decorated with black coal making them more prominent but thr shine n happiness in them was what made him contended 'that shyly smile 'n blushy red cheeks was making him have a hard time to complete this call but then .. his jangli billi 'his love ..his GEET has thrown a challenge 😲..so he has to win it at any cost ..

Few Hours Ago In Vineet Singh's House ..

maan together with Vicky n manvi was waiting for geet down stairs ready to leave ' Vicky n manvi was as usual having a fight while maan was standing thr waiting for geet ..cursing her devil sister ..who caught them romancing last night n interrupted thr moment 'n since then Nichol n Manvi didn't left her side for even a second 'n now he can kill anyone to be with her 'standing lost in his thoughts he heard some sounds from upstairs 'curious he went few steps ahead towards the stair case 'n realized it was of glass bangles n payal 'but then thought y will geet wear them now as it's a church wedding n payal defo wont suit with her dress but got the most pleasant shock of his life seeing his angel in a breathing lehenga 'coming down setting her hairs on one shoulder exposing her milky white shoulder to his desirous eyes 'making him stand still ..

she saw him looking at her with so much of love n intensity 'making her go red ..remembering the day she had wore that red sari in KM he was looking at her just the same way 'she smiled remembering the appreciation .. n that gestures of him ..which now had a totally different meaning ..n came down standing next to him ..still his eyes were fixed on her as if in a trance ..she blushed furiously ..n looked down shyly ..

n than came Vicky n manvi ..n shook maan out of his trance 'embarrassed he looked everywhr else than them n all 3 giggled mutely 'n then Vicky n manvi moved out with one angry glare from maan 'smiling giggling ..saying ..

Manvi n Vicky : ALL THE BEST GEET 'N BHAI DO ENJOY HAN ..😆

Be4 maan could say anything they ran away ..laughing while geet also started moving feeling extremely shy with his intense gaze but be4 she could have even taken a single step ..maan pulled her in his embrace jerking her on his rock hard chest ..n she closed her eyes with sudden jerk 'while maan was lost In her beauty ...he put his 1st two fingers beneath her chin n lifted her face up ..


only witness her crimson red face with a slight smile 'diminishing the distance b/w them 'placing a kiss on her forehead he hugged her in his embrace ..holding her tight ..wanting to calm both thr heart which were pacing at exceptional level ..geet know that after wedding they will be leaving all to an unknown place ..she didn't got the chance to ask about whr he was taking her but actually this doesn't matter whr ever it be ..she will be with him n that's enough ..after few minutes maan said while holding her

Maan : so ready Miss. Geet rai chaudhry ...waise maan'na parega 'bari himmat hai tum mien 😕'after all Maan Singh Khurana ke saath poori life guzarna itna bhi asaan nahi hone wala ..😛

With the 1st set of words geet blushed ..knowing he is indicating to thr up coming marriage ..but then pouted with angry face ..listening to his words .. n finally came with a plan to tease him ..

Geet (tightening her hold on his waist) : hmm ..true meri andar tou hai itni himmat ..par lagta hai aap mien nahi hai ..tab hi tou mujhe sab se chupa ke le jaa rahe hu ..😛😛

Maan (bit startled with her words n said defending ..parting her a bit still in his embrace looking at her face) : oh hello .. mien koi dar kar nahi lee jaa tumhain ..

Geet (said teasingly ..removing her hands from his waist n circled them in his neck) : but sab ko bina bataye bhaga tou rahe hu na mujhe '😛

Maan (with all his attitude ..jerking her towards him plastering the bodies together) : oh ..tou theek hai ..i promise u sab ke saamne utha kar lee jaonga tumhain ..n trust me koi kuch nahi kar paayega ..😳😳

Geet (said with a teasing smirk) : acha 'yeh bhi dekhte hain ..

Unaware of his seriousness ..geet kept smiling at his hurt man ego .. while maan lost his all thoughts seeing her mesmerizing smile ..n that soft petal lips inviting him 'n he started decreasing the distance b/w thr faces ..n with each passing second geet's breaths were getting high 'n finally when his lips were decimeters away 'fanning her face with his hot breaths ..he just held his place for some seconds evoking something new in her with his tortures ..pressing her to his length 'looking straight in her eyes 'making her loose her senses in his deep dark eyes full of passion 'desire 'his hold giving a complete feeling of a possessed man ..n those rough lips yearning for hers ..saying the trail of thirst ..the hearts pacing so high ..they could actual hear thr heart beats 'geet closed her eyes not able to take that intensity of his passion 'while he was totally immune to his surrounding her scent was as a drug 'n this closeness only provoked him to taste her 'his hardness pressing over her belly erupted a moan from her 'the crimson red cheeks burning with blush n her hold getting tighter ..


caressing his nape unknowingly arousing him to the level of ecstasy .. n finally he pressed his rough dry lips over her trembling one 'crushing her waist in his hold while she moaned feeling his hardness ..that girly feeling ..making her shudder a bit with this new found sensation ..n finally with the horn of the car geet broke free of thr kiss blushing furiously 'hiding her face in the crock of his neck while maan frustrated 'hugging her tight '

N then vicky's teasing comment came 'n geet pushed him slightly n ran outside ..

But he had given his words ..so determined he called adi to make the required arrangements for them at the church ..

Present ..

Maan was still lost looking at geet laughing giggling ..with manvi ..than blushing with bright red color 'n he smiled knowing it must some or the other comment frm his new found devil sis Manvi ..n then his mbl buzzed again with a confirmation call by adi but his eyes were fixed on geet 'soon he got engrossed in the call looking at a certain point other than geet '

After like 10 minutes he pocked his mbl with a smile n looked back in the same direction but geet was no whr 'n then turned surprised with a sudden voice ..

Geet : Cristiana ..

Maan (turned over n saw her ..but got confused looked at her angry face) : umm kya ..

Geet (eyes towards the direction he was looking) : uss larki ka naam jisko aap ghoor rahe thay ..😡😡



Maan (shocked n turned looking at the same direction n saw a sexy lady standing thr ..n turned back immediately holding geet with her shoulders) : nahi geet ..tum galat samajh rahi hoo ..aisa kuch ..//

Before he could say more geet jerked his hands away n went away to the crowd ..as the priest had arrived n ceremony was announced to be started .. while maan stood stretching his arms to stop her 'n said pouting ..

Maan : loo ..ek problem solve huyi thi ..dosri aagayi 'yeh larki ko bhi abhi aana tha 😆😆'mein tou geet ko dekh raha tha ..fir pata nahi kaise dhyaan hi nahi raha ke kab who chali gayi wahan se '😕

The whole wedding went with maan trying to have a talk with geet but jangli billi was giving him a care a damn attitude 'n finally Nichol n Mathew made thr exit ..with the famous Christian tradition of throwing the bride bouquet towards the bachelor ladies 'n it was geet who got it 'standing at the door steps of Church with bit emotional manvi n vineet ..someone said from the back ..

So now its u next geet '😳😳

Geet had a small smile with tears in her eyes ..n that's when a car stopped in front of geet 'n maan came from back ..lifting her up starling everyone around '😳

Geet : maan yeh ..


Manvi : bhai yeh kya kar rahe hu '

Vineet : maan whats happening ..

Maan : nothing much just kidnapping ur sister manvi ..😳😳😳(n left winking at her while Vicky came towards vineet asking him to cool down n he will tell him everything)


Geet was in the state of shock from the moment maan lifted her 'n everything happened in micro seconds 'n it was only when she was placed in the car she understood all what happened 'n next saw maan entering in the car from the other end ..she saw him with a clear question mark on her face 'n maan smirked seeing her so startled 'n then hugged her by jerking to himself a bit placing his hands on her bare waist making her feel the Goosebumps all over her body '

Maan (tracing her forehead n placed the hair strand on the back of her earn cupped her face) : kaha tha na sab ke saamne uth kar lee jaonga ..😳😳

Geet (shocked said with her eyes pooping out) : I wasn't serious ..😆

Maan (said smiling) : but I am 'last 25 days se kabhi Vicky ..tou kabhi yeh tumhari sis ..mera time share kar rahi thi ..tou now I want my JANGLI BILLI ..all for my self ..😳

Geet had a red hue covering her face 'n heart pacing high with the way her hands were playing with her skin on her waist squeezing it ..rubbing in sensuously ..while maan was having a grt time seeing this new side of her ..

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It was nearly getting night when they finally all set for the most special moment of thr life 'nervous like hell geet was still sitting in front of the mirror with the dress maan kept for her '

It was quite normal n maan knew she won't be able to face him not at least for now ..when he has officially kidnapped her 'n now getting married 4 every girl is the biggest even of her life time ..n here its all in a different situation ..but thing which he liked ..no no loved was the trust she has in him ..never even once she questioned him even after coming to this ship ..whr he is taking her 'for how long they will have to be here 'nothing simply nothing ..it was just love n love her eye depicted every time he tried seeing if thr was any kind of uncertainty in them ..the moment they entered at Marittima basin ..she obviously guessed his plan for the cruise ..but she never expected him to have been possessing his own ship ..n that totally reflected in her shocked state when he told her that its all for them only as it his own ship ..

Maan was not less nervous at all 'as he completely realize the fact that what ever he is doing will be having a big effect on dadi maa 'daai jaan ..sid n Vicky as well 'they all had thr own sets of dream for this marriage n geet as well but circumstances never let him think much ..n here he is dressing for his marriage ..hoping that geet won't be much scared ..knowing her a bit well ..he purposefully didn't confronted her after having thr meal as didn't ate anything since morning ..n when geet left to freshen up ..he left her bridal dress in her ..opps soon-to-be-their room 'with letter to be at the deck of the ship in next 1 hour ..

But here geet was scared like any other girl ..a second smiling n next second nervous ...yet somehow composing herself she got ready with all the accessories n wore her dress 'n stood in front of the mirror ..😳

Geet : okiee ..koi baat nahi aaj nahi tou kal shaddi tou maan se hi karni thi na so its good aaj hi hujaye 'n to think about Miss. Geet Rai Chaudhry ..be normal for once 😕'girls die for such wedding n u r getting it ..remember those dreamy girl talks back in school hostel by those make up shops ..so chill 'waise bhi maan ne bola hai na we will have another marriage in front of our family 'so daai jan will also be happy along with dadi maa ..😃 its all good ..abhi ache se smile karo n go ..ok

Finally consoling herself 4 nth time she was coming towards the deck with slow steps ..

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Standing on the deck glad in a shining cream colored sherwani ..looking ever soo handsome 'he was setting the laptop ..n the wooden logs ..along with the ship captain .. ..(thr were only 2 person on that ship other than maaneet i.e ; ship captain n a cook).. the ship which was just decorated with flowers when hey entered was now lighting with the lights in the mid of the sea 'roses spread in the whole deck some floating in the air as well with the wind ..making it a perfect place to make the love of his life ..officially HIS forever 'after few minutes he heard the voice of geet's payal n bangles ..n ushered the captain to do the rest of the arrangements ..(me : ab I hope u all knw which arrangements '😳😳)

Geet was hell scared n her each slow step n down casted eyes made it clear ..the way she was putting her hairs on the back of her ears ..clutching her duppatta in the other hand 'he was sure of it but yet the innocent beauty coming towards him in that moon light made him forget his surrounding ..gaping at her he was standing still at his place 'seeing her coming towards him in a shimmering off white lehenga with red borders 'over it ..a single strap figure hugging choli making her every curve prominent for his dark eye to wander onn ..she was wearing a traditional jewelry not much heavy yet very elegant 'n with a light tissue dupatta complementing it looking nothing less than an angel descended frm heaven but what made her look stunning 4 him was that cute red hue covering her face when she looked up to him n stopped in her track with thr eyes met ..she was standing 10 odd steps away from him ..n was looking down ..trying to get hold of her heart beats which were pacing soo high with just his mere look '


the eyes speaking volumes of passion n desire 'the cold wind was a deadly combination in this situation ..her already trembling body shivered with every blow 'n his intense gaze evoking an unknown desire 'which made her restless ..

Geet (in a low voice placing her hair strands at the back of her ears) : geet darr kyun rahi hai 'yeh maan hi tou hai 'tera Sado Singh Khurana ..aise nazrien chura rahi hai jaise khud ne koi chori ki hu '(me: MSK ka dil churaya us se bari chori kya hugi'😆😳😳) ..chill kar plss koi garbar mat karna .. but babaji plss inko bolo nay eh mujhe aisa naa dekhen .😳😳.pata nahi kya kardongi mien abhi ..😳

while maan just stood lost in her beauty 'her white glowing skin giving competition to the moonlight it self 'her slight blushy cheeks making him hard 'that small cute gesture of her ..noting her dupatta ..playing with her open slightly curved hairs .. teasing her cheeks ..n then her eyes looking down with a shy smile every time the thr eyes will met '

Geet was soo much nervous ..her tummy feeling the flying butterflies ..n the burning sensation setting her body on fire with gush of blood running up n down with his intense dark passionate gaze over hers since god knows how long ..may be 2 mins or 2 hours 'but every second felt as century ..she was sure to fall down any moment as knees were turning jelly n that's when she heard Vicky n Sid giggling ..

Maan snapped out of his trance getting bit red with the presence of everyone even daai jan over the skype call 'while geet got a bit confused at 1st n then found maan's laptop screen whr everyone one was on a conference video chat ..a big 440volt smile spread across her face seeing sid n daai jan along with Vicky ..Dadi maa ..Adi n sister naina '

Vicky : bhai geet ko baad mien nihar lena ..she is all urs for next few days 'abhi tou ussko yahan lee aoo ..

Maan came towards her 'with a slight smile ..while she was standing thr smiling at all of them 'n next felt maan stretching his hand in front of her .. smiling with a blush she placed her hand in his n went forward ..daai jan was blessing them both with all the blessings of the world n maan went to to set the wooden logs on fire 'unknown to it geet kept talking with them all the while dadi maa saw them with admiration 'geet smiled at her n cutely complained ..

Geet : dadi ma dekhlo ..aapke iss sado pote ne mujhe kidnap karliya ..

Sid : geet ..woh kya hai na meri di hai hi itni pyaari ke jijaji ko darr lag raha huga kahin koi aur na lee jaye ura kar ..😳😳

Vicky : arre par koi aaya bhi tou yeh ..Jangli Billi hai na ussko knock out karne ko '😆

Geet : hawww ..vicky mujhe wapis aane do fir batati hoon 'dufer

Adi : waise Vicky abb tou aap ko geet ma'm ko BHABI bolna chahiye ..jyun dadi ..(dadi blinked her eyes)

Geet : chachmish ji 'pehli baat mien geet hoon tou yeh ma'm wagera kehne ki zarorat nahi formalities apne sado boss ke liye rakhiye n 2ndly Vicky mera bhai hai 'dost hai 'tou who mujhe bhabi bole ya geet ya kuch aur rishta ka naam hi badle ga ..ehsaas aur pyaar nahi ..😳

Daai Jan : geet aaj ek nayi zindagi ki choroa'at hai 'poorani saari kadwi yadien bhool kar iss lamhe mien kadam rakhna beti 'aur hum sab ki dua'en tum dono ke saath hain ..

Adi : waise shaddi ka mahurat hugaya hai '

Maan (came from back) : aur saari tyariyan bhi complete hugayi hain ..

Geet : par maan without pandit gi n mantar '😕

Maan n adi smiled ..n next maan eyes her to look at the screen n the was a pandit ..ready to recite the holy worse n guide them through the ceremony ..geet smiled at his arrangement n thought how can mr. perfectionist miss anything 😳'they were about to go towards the holy fire when daai jan called n said ..

Daai Jan : maan bete geet ka duppata uske sar par ur'ha du ..😳

Maan smiled n took her duppatta n covered her head ..smiling at her with all his love n affection 'while she reciprocated with her smile 'glad with the fact he cared for her feeling soo much 'he managed to made them all a part of her special moment ..thr moment ..


Taking the most sacred vows in front of the holy fire 'they both stepped into another phase of thr life ..together to be forever 'supporting each other in every problem life turns towards them 'completing each other ..accepting each other with all thr heart n soul ..together with the blessings of thr elders n wishes of the siblings 'the evening of endless memories n vows ended n left them both in a silence speaking its own trail of desires 'proud 'happiness ..acceptance ..bliss ..n most of all a new start of eternal togetherness ..

Geet's slightly smiley face adorned with sindoor ..n her neck decorated with mangalsutra 'making his claim evident 'the feeling of possessing her all for himself 'made him the happiest person of this world ..while the sweet knowledge of belonging to someone 'spread a sense of contentment through her whole existence as if she got the whole world for her self ..indeed he was her whole world ..which is now officially 'whole soul hers' .. they looked at each other n smiled slightly 'the calm contented stare changed the whole atmosphere turning into a deep dark desirous one setting him on fire with the acceptance in her eyes while she shuddered with the thought of what is next 'his eye so evidently speaking of his intension while hers were effecting by his 'she never knew this desire to be in some1 embrace existed ever in her but now in this moment she was in dire need to hide her self in his embrace from his own piercing gaze 'her cheeks turned red under his gaze 'n unable to take anymore she tried going away when he held her wrist ..stopping her ..she was breathing heavy 'n his touch only made her vulnerable ..giving up on her heart n mind war she turned n hugged him tight 'hiding from his intense stare ..while he crushed her in his arms ..feeling every inch of hers pressing on his body ..only arousing him further .. his hands soon got out of mind's control n started feeling every inch of her bare skin everywhr possible 'while she shivered the way he was touching her 'only tightened her hold over his shoulder ..biting her lips trying to subside the moan erupting her mouth 'n next he lifted her up in his arms ..going towards thr room ..while she hide her face in the crook of his neck fanning his skin with her hot breaths ..

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Entering in the room ..maan placed her down on her feets n stood in front of her while she had her eye down casted 'a blushy red face adoring her face .. while maan was totally flat over this angel in front of him having so many shades in her 'never in his life he thought of his jangli billi to be like this ..smiling he cupped her face in his arms n lifted her face up gesturing her look at him ..she obliged softly n looked him with a shy smile '

Thr eyes met ..n it felt as if the world was at pause for them to absorb this moments 'a brief moment of eye lock 'n all the memories came flashing back in front of them 'every time they were together doing all sorts of fun as friends 'every time when they were afraid of confessing thr feelings actually scared for rejection came in front n both looked away ..smiling at thr own stupid insecurities 'but now this moment ..this new found bond of marriage bonding them 'this new reality made them so much happy 'the happiness ..the bliss thr heart were at was never felt be4 ..indeed loving something is a big thing but having that love of ur life for u till eternity is the biggest happiness of this world 'n they were lucky to have it 'a single tear of happiness left from her eyes ..while she smiled n was about remove it when maan stopped her n sucked her tear pearl ..placing his lips over the corner of her eye ..kissing her eye he parted ..smiling while geet blushed .. n next maan moved her to sit in front of the mirror ..while he knelt down ..

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MUSIC '

Sitting in front of her on his knees ..maan slipped his palm in her neck gazing her with so much love in his eyes n caressed her cheeks with her thumb making her feel the shuddering goose bumps all over her body '

O Re Piya Haye

O Re Piya Haye

coming up to her level he pecked her eyes ..making her shut them ..holding her breath ..taking in his ' her hands went to his shoulder ..

Removing her dupatta off her head ..he dropped it down ..gazing her with all the passion he held in his heart over the years '

Removing her earings ..he placed kisses over her earlobe ..behind it making her moan his name the moment he bit her earlobe slightly 'n her eyes closed with a shy smile on her smile when he placed the earing on dressing table n moved to other without removing his gaze from her ..

O Re Piya Haye

His hand moved on her bare waist 'n lips Moving down he placed a sensuous kiss over her neck ..making her shiver n clutch his shoulder n she for instant bend her neck sideways blocking his face thr getting shy with his feather touches n the way her body was shuddering at every contact ..

Removing the necklace 'he kept on nibbling her silky white skin 'kissing it n left his mark only to hear a sensuous moan from her 'clutching his shoulder tighter ..

Maa..an '

he never knew his name could sound so good be4 this moment 'with every passing second her body 'her mind 'her heart was becoming vulnerable to his touch ..like a drug affecting her senses ..n she like moth attracted to fire was feeling in need to melt in his warm embrace 'his rough lips touching her soft skin making them both burn with the desires .. n her hands went to his nape from his shoulder caressing it ..unknowing evoking the demon inside him ..


Udne Laga Kyon Man Baawla Re
Aaya Kahan Se Yeh Hosla Re

His hands traveled to her waist long back n was now touching the edges of her choli 'itching to get an entry 'n the moment his thumb entered in her only then she came aware of it 'the sudden shyness took over her senses n she backed coming out of his hold n went away 'oblivious to her dupatta gone long back 'n she ws standing the with her almost bare back with a deep cut choli n her exposed waist 'only to make him devour her '


O Re Piya Haye

O Re Piya Haye


he came forward .. n hugged her from back placing his hands over her bare stomach ..jerking her towards him ..while she shivered feeling his cold manly palm covering her bare skin 'he was indeed a drug ..n she was defo loosing herself to his love 'but this strange pleasure of being with him 'pleasure of his warmth worth it all 'n he with a sudden blow of cold wind ..she shivered n went back a bit n closed the inches gap b/w them ..

Tanabana Tanabana Bunti Hawaa Haaye Bunti Hawa
Boondein Bhi To Aaye Nahi Baaz Yahan

geet closed her eyes feeling his lips devouring her nape 'opening the dori of her top n exploring her back .. the flashes of them in the rain the day she was in KM came in front of her 'he was holding her just the same way 'with every moan erupted from her mouth only increased his desires more 'the passionate kisses became demanding n next he came down kissing her spine making her arch her back n opened the strap of her choli ..while she opened her closed eyes with shock ..n hugged him turning around immediately ..not wanting her choli to fall ..n he hugged her ..his hands wandering at every corner of her bare bare ..wanting to get rid of that single hindrance but geet pressed her self more into him ..torturing him ..arousing him ..pressing her softness over his hard rock chest ..making his hold her waist pressing her over his length '

his devoured her nape n neck mercilessly 'removing the straps of her choli off her shoulder ..kissing her ..biting her making her moan feeling her self wet below ..his every touch was evoking an unknown desire in her inner self which she never knew existed ever 'the desire to be touched by him 'the desire to be in his arms 'the desire to feel him 'she shied ..n his lips n hands moving over body snaking her back as if he was desperate to mark every inch of body as his ..

Sagish Mein Shaamil Sara Jahan Hai
Har Zare Zare Ki Yeh Iltiza Hai

O Re Piya
O Re Piya Haye

the silence of the room few minutes back was by now completely replaced with geet's endless moans n maan's gasping ..the sound of her bangles n her payal 'with the winds blowing in making thr hot burning bodies feel the coldness n snuggle more into each other 'he was a man possessed totally lost in her scent ..in her skin ..n only wanted to make her his by every mean ..so that never in any life thr should be a chance of thr parting ..the wild passion taking over his senses 'n the urge to feel her only increased ..while he said the heavenly words kissing her '

I LOVE U '

The feeling felt soo serene that she could live her whole life in this moment ' hugging him close geet placed a kiss on his exposed neck ..n he clutched her tight in his arms feeling the rosy lips only evoking him more ..

O Re Piya Haye
O Re Piya


The bodies reacted exactly the way a couple would feel with maan burning with desire n geet getting goose bumps all over her body 'feeling herself getting wet 'her ****** hardened ..poking over the silky material ..n The moment maan tried parting her removing her choli wanting to explore them ..she turned away pushing him slightly ..having a flushed red face 'holding her choli in place with hand ..n

Ni Re ,Re Re Ga
Ga Ga Ma
Ma Ma Pa
Pa Ma Ga Re Sa
Sa Re Re Sa


next second maan held her wrist n twirling around she landed on his rock chest 'forming a curtain around them through her silky hairs 'cupping her face in his palms he looked straight in her eyes 'making her aware of his intention 'n moved forward eliminating the distance b/w thr faces 'while geet lowered her lashes in submission ..n maan placed his lips over hers 'kissing her 'nibbling her petal like lips ..

Ga Ga Re
Ma Ma Ga
Pa Pa Ma
Dha Dha Pa


Geet's hand went into his silky hair ..pulling him closer if possible ..returning his kiss in equal fervor ..nibbling on his upper lip ..while he was sucking on her lower lips 'the both was by now drown in the world passion 'n maan's hand removed geet's top baring her skin to be devour by his hands 'n she moaned feeling his hands caressing her skin in the most seductive manner ..

Ni Ni Sa Sa Pa
Pa Sa Ma Pa Dha Ni Sa Ni
Re Ni Sa Sa Sa.. . . . ..


They parted for much required breath ..but maan never left her skin ..n started kissing her face ..jawline ..coming down on her collar bone ..marking her his while his hands were busy squeezing her ****** making her moan in ecstasy ..

Geet (clutching his scalp pressing his head more in her neck 'arching herself) : maan ..ahh ..


Nazrein Bolen Duniya Bole
Dil Ki Zaban Haaye Dil Ki Zubaan
Ishq Maange Ishq Chahe Koi Toofan

Maan looked into her eyes ..wanting to seek that permission to go ahead ..n her red blushing face n love filled dark passionate eyes mirroring his' gave him all the assurance he wanted ..grabbing her waist tight he thumbed them both on the soft bed ..n landed kissing her as if he was licking some candy '

He guided her hands over his sherwani ..n eyes her to open his button ..she with much shyness opened first ..n by the time it was last maan's control n geet's shivery hands gave away ..n he tossed off his sherwani n vest ..kissing her again ..rolling over her ..placing his weight over hers .. pressing his hard length over her belly ..making her moan with desire ..n her cheeks went deep red with feel of it ..

Chalna Aahiste Ishq Naya Hai
Pehla Yeh Vada Humne Kiya Hai


Within seconds they got rid of thr lowers ..n maan hovered her with his huge frame 'kissing her ..nibbling her ..sucking her hard ..driving her to the level of ecstasy ..holding her hands pinned down above her head 'her eyes were closed feeling every movement of his lips n hands over hers 'n next found him rubbing her on her feminine part ..she shivered feeling his hands over her private parts ..her hands clutched the sheet in her fist with the shuddering sensation he set over her senses 'her lips were dry yearning for him 'n he was bussing sucking on her ****** ..making her wriggle under him 'moaning badly 'wildly '


O Re Piya Haaye

O Re Piya Haye

while his fingers increased thr pace below 'n made her reach her peak n then rubbing his ******* over her ****** ..he looked into her eyes ..while she closed hers ..placing his lips over hers ..he entered in her releasing her hands which immediately snacked over his back ..scratching him with the pain she felt ..his eyes looked at her worried ..but she assured him blinking hers n next he kissed her hard ..senseless n soon she lost her self in the pleasure adjusting to his length 'she allowed him to penetrate deep in her ..n soon she felt her orgasm followed by his ..


O Re Piya
Piyaaa...


with pure sense of bliss covering them ..he placed his head in the crock of her neck panting while she caressed his hairs with a blushing red face ..panting with the aftermath '

Yehhh Piya


'maan placed a kiss on her nape ..n came out of her neck n asked looking at her ..

Tum theek ho na '

Worry was quite clear on his face ..but geet was feeling the completeness of belonging to him in every sense 'n so only smiled removing a slight sweat over his forehead ..n placed a light peck on his lips ..

I was never this much better in my whole life Mr. Casanova Singh Khurana ..😳

The slightest of touch n maan was again gasping 'n his eyes showed the mischievousness of his mind ..n then he worded his intention ..

So this means we can continue with our '☺️

He left his sentence incomplete while geet looked away turning side ways shying at his demand 'n he dipped his head in her silky hair n skin ready to devour it all over again ..


coming back with more ...😛

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Epilogue Part 2 ...😳

Its been a month since they are traveling in Aegean Sea ..spending the most blissful time of thr life 'with each other 'cuddling in the warmth of thr love 'the time when thr love blossomed to an extent that they never knew is possible 'a time of pure romance 'away from the whole world ..just them n thr love surrounding them 'the phase LOVE IS IN THE AIR ..was perfectly fitting with thr life 'every morning when maan will be blessed with his jangli billi cutely cuddling in his embrace fighting the morning sun rays disturbing them 'n he cocooning her in his embrace 'feeling her all over again 'that sweetest start of the day when geet will woke up with his teasing hand moving over her bare skin under the duvet 'n she will finally give up on the thought of sleeping a bit more 'n will stare at his handsome features endlessly ..n bless him with a morning kiss taking all the control over him 'that cute lunch time when maan will tease her to umth level over her blushing red cheeks 'n she will slap him over his arm n instruct him stubbornly to eat 'but will get a sock with his demanding kisses 'the time when they will just give on everything else n would lie down in each other's embrace on the deck of the ship ..with cold winds passing by n them snuggling closer n closer 'thr fun time when geet will make him count the stars ..n he will be just lost in her face ..that angelic glowing innocent beauty genuinely counting the star in the shimmering silver light of the moon ..n the numerous time of them skipping thr dinner 'n ending up on bed making another passionate night ..

The memories were countless n the happiness was priceless 'yet a part of them was missing thr family n so maan often arrange satellite calls to either of the world ..n geet would endlessly with Vicky 'sometimes he actually wondered if Vicky was his brother or hers' 'but then its his Jangli Billi who can make such bond with anyone n specially with her friends 'who will know it better than him 'maan was in constant touch with adi regarding the proceeding of those 2 white collared criminals ..he has given his signing authorities to Vicky 'n Vicky actually created a big melodrama over it as to how he is suppose to do all this n besides he is here for his 1 month holiday 'but maan tried his best to make him confident enough that he can surely do this 'but he wasn't sure at all n actually wanted to place everything on hold till maan comes back but thr came his savor Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana ..making vicky do it with full confidence 'even though Vicky accepted but pleaded him nth times to come n handle it all soon in every call ' but maan had full faith in his capabilities n adi was also thr so maan never worried for anything besides dadi maa ..knowing how much she wanted his marriage to be a grand affair 'still looking at the chirpy smiling geet ..his heart some how consoled himself ..that its ok after going back he will full fill dadi's wish as well '

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It was exactly 30th day ..thr 1month anniversary 'maan was out of the room while geet was still sleeping 'almost around nine ..maan came back with her favorite break fast 'n smiled seeing her searching for him ..with a frown n getting disturbed with the sunlight that was illuminating his room through the slits of the curtains ..


Placing the tray in the table he made his way towards her n slipped in the duvet circling her waist from back plastering her body with his ..while she wrapped her arms over his snuggling close to him ..while he placed feather like soft kisses over her nape 'n behind her ear knowing that her weak point 'n that did the work ..wriggling in his hold ..she was moaning slightly with close eyes n a blushing red smiling face 'by now she knew he will never ever woke her up in any other way ..everytime in last 30 days he has woke up early she has been waking up in the same manner ..

Geet : ummm ..maan plss 'raat ko nahi sone diya abhi tou chordo '.😳😳

Maan only had a naughty smile remembering how they landed in the bed last night after having thr small session in the washroom be4 dinner .. but her moaning n that sweet seductive low voice only makes him feel like to eat her alive 'n he gave in his demand kissing her roughly ..his stubble brushing her neck arousing her 'he bit her slightly ..

Geet : ahh ..maan plss ..

His hands moved up to her valley in utmost seductive manner ..n she turned around shyly feeling her body reacting to his touch just like the 1st time ..n hugged him tight burying her face in the crock of his neck ..while he smiled with her shy side n hugged her tight ..

Maan : geet I was thinking hum ..kuch din aur yahin reh jaate hain ..😳

Geet (instantly looking at him) : no ways ..maan already its been a month aur dadi maa ko bhi nahi mili mien kitne time se ..aur kal hi Vicky kitna crib kar raha tha 'waise bhi aap mujhe kuch karne tou dete nahi hu yahan ..tou koi trip extend nahi huraha '

Maan was just surprised with her snapping ..n then got lost in her lightly red cheeks that ws due to anger n then his eyes went to her lips 'n rest all her words fell on deaf ears as he was simply lost in the movement of her slightly swollen red lips ..n next she found her rosy petals crushed with his rough ones n him hovering over her ..kissing her like never be4 'nibbling her lips mercilessly making her forget her own self she like every time just give in his passion n responded him ..n he bit her lips seeking entering in her mouth ..making her gasp with the pain ..a slight blood oozed out from the corner of her lips n he sucked it ..making her moan with the instant softness he was kissing her '

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The parted after what felt like ages ..getting short of breath n maan placed his forehead on hers ..while she was smiling shyly feeling his hot breaths fanning her face still his hands caressing her waist seductively 'she opened her eyes slowly n found him smiling a bit ..n moved her hands from his waist n encircled his neck ..

Geet : kya baat janaab ka mood itna acha hai 'maan kya huya hai ..

Maan (went on his back taking her on him) : kyun tum aise kyun pouch rahi ho 'mien bina kisi waja ke khush nahi hu sakta '?

Geet (smiled looking up n cupped his face) : wohh kya hai mr khurana aapka yeh jo chehra hai na mera daily newspaper hai 'mujhe aapke dil ki saari khabar dee deta hai 'iss hi liye ..

Maan (smiled n went to close the distance b/w them) : acha Mrs. Khurana

Geet (pushed him down n pleading voice) : bataye na kya huya hai ..

Maan (tightened his hold on her bare waist while she placed her head on his left chest hearing his heat beats) : hmm ..aaj subha Adi ne meri morning kharaab kardi '(she twitched her brows in confusion 'while he continued with a sad voice) ..n informed me ke wahan sab theek hugayi hai 'n we can go back '

Geet (got really happy n looked up with her dimple smile) : really yepppiee .. pata hai Vicky wahan akele kitna sad sad tha 'aur mujhe bhi dadi maa se milna tha 'I am soo happy maan (placed a kiss on his cheeks n hugged him tight)'hum wapis jayenge.. yehhh ..pata hai last time dadi se baat huyi tou she was looking really numb ..mujhe milna hai unse ..

Maan : hmm dadi n Vicky ko tou mien bhi miss kar raha hoon 'but then (faking sadness) wahan jaa kar I am sure tum mujhe bhool jaogi ..

Geet (confused looked up) : aise kyun bol rahe hu ..?

Maan (said genuinely with a baby face) : abb dekhlo Vicky aur tum saath hote hu tou waise bhi mujhe bhool jate hu '

Geet (smiled n pulled his cheeks) : aww mela baby ..aisa kuch nahi hai ..geet aapko kabhi nahi bhool sakti 'waise bhi aap koi bhoolne wali cheez thorai hu '(n giggled hiding her face in his chest) ..

Maan (sternly turned over n pinned her down) : kya matlab bhoolni wali cheez nahi hoon '

Geet (Smiled) : pyaar karne wali cheez hu '

Maan (hovering over her) : abb aise dekh kar mujhe tempt karogi aur fir expect karogi ke mien tumhain breakfast ke liye jaane doon 'devil ..


Geet giggled n pushed him from her n moved taking the spread over her in a swift move n entered the washroom near her side be4 maan could stop her ..n maan sat on the bed annoyed ..looking at the closed washroom door which suddenly opened n geet peeped in from thr 'n showed her tongue out to him n closed the door immediately laughing at his puppy angry face ..


7 years Later '

a morning full of brightness 'Khurana Mansion was shining with the sun lights 'but thr the room was pitch dark 'until the winds moved the curtains n sunlight entered in through the slits 'disturbing the peaceful sleep of the angel white beauty 'cutely snuggling in someones embrace frowned ..while he cuddled her more in his arms smiling kissing her hairs in his sleep '

a slight smile adorned her face as the sun light was breaking her sleep n she opened her eyes softly looking up to see her handsome husband holding her ever soo possessively in his embrace 'kissing his chin she loosened his hold with a bit of efforts ..n turned to see the clock 'n sat up with a jerk lifting up the time piece with a shock 'n then tried waking him him ..

Geet : maan 'maan wake up its 7:30 plss utho ..jaldi we r late ..

Maan (mumbled in his sleep again trying to embrace her) : umm .. 5 mins

Geet (worried) : aapka tou kuch nahi hu sakta 'Stupid Singh Khurana ' agar 8:30 bje wali meeting mien late hugaye na tou mujhe mat bolna 'geet sab tumhari waja se 'chado ..mujhe bhi late karwadiya ..

Maan was still smiling in his sleep n then remembered what she just said ..O SHIT '8:30 meeting hai 'saying so he sat up n took his mbl calling adi to inform him that he might get late 'n hurried went to the room joint with his (like another room in his master bedroom ..whose door was in his room only)

Entering in the dim light of the room he tripped on the bunny which was on the floor 'n started his tune ..which he panic-kingly stopped n went towards the cute pink baby bed 'whr his 4 yrs little Sapna was sleeping like a doll cuddled up with her small teddy 'maan's face adorned with a smile seeing his Jangli Billi's replica in front of his eyes '😳😳just the same brown hairs slightly curly 'n her milky white skin 'that cute pouting expression when she heard the disturbing sound 'everything about her features is just the same as hers 'but her eyes are just like him Deep Dark 'full of mischief 'maan smiled thinking how his angels turns into a devil ..surely she is a tough competition to her mom 'placing a soft kiss on her forehead maan stood thr caressing her head for a while to make her again drown in that deep sleep 'while geet came thr changed into her kurti n churidaar ..n placed her hand on his shoulder n said smiling ..

Geet : apni angel ko baad mien nihaar lena abhi jaa kar ready hu jao warna aapke saath aapki angel bhi school ke liye late hujayegi '😃

Maan smiled ..n stood up n geet was about to go when he stopped her n she turned towards him but be4 she could ask anything 'maan placed her wet strands on the back of her ears n placing a deep kiss on her forehead wished her GOOD MORNING ..n went away leaving a blushing geet 'who stood thr startled 4 a moment then smiled looking at thr daughter sleeping so calming 'covering her with the duvet properly she went away hurriedly ..

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Geet was arranging the table after preparing his break fast when she saw maan came running from up stairs ..n hugged her tight from back ..n kissing her neck he said in real hurry ..


Maan : bye geet need to rush ..meeting ki ek file mien kuch problem hai ..

Geet (he was about to leave her n go when geet stopped him grabbing his wrist) : par nashta tou ..

Maan (came back a step n said cupping her face ) : meeting baad kuch khaloonga 'sorry but I am really in a hurry ..tum plss breakfast kar lena ..n sapna ko meri side se mana lena 'u knw she ill be sad ..

Geet (he was again going when she said pouting ..holding him still correcting his collar n tie hurriedly) : hmm ..waise yeh meri galti nahi hai ke aap late hu ..breakfast kar ke jao ..

Maan (kissed her forehead said ..n ran immediately) : hmm hai tou tumhari galti ..😳😳

Geet (she was about to hit him but he ran laughing) : haw ..Mr. Casanova Singh Khurana ..ill make sure aap yeh baat kal subha nahi keh sakenge ..😆

Maan (stooped at the door step n turned smiling) : u know what mishty .. u know it too well raat ko ill make ko forget this '😳😳

Geet stood thr blushing at his shameless remark 'while he smiled n went away giving her a flying kiss ..

She stood thr for a moment ..n then remembered Sapna ..slapping her head she hurried up stairs ..n went in her room ..waking her up 'but alas ..!

Like father like daughter 'the most difficult task of geet's day to wake up these two devils of her life ..

Sapna : maa plss sone do na '(hiding her face behind the teddy)

Geet : baby plss jaldi se utho see we r late ..chalo uth jao '

Sapna : maa plss bas 5 min aur ..tab tak aap dad ke dress chk karo jaa kar ..

Geet (shooking her head at her stubborn daughter n went to sit beside her) : aapke dad office gaye hain ..abhi chalo aap bhi ready hujao jaldi ..get up sweetheart chalo fast ..

Sapna (immediately looked at her opening her eyes shocked) : dad chale gaye ..

Geet (caressing her hairs) : han wohh unki ek meeting thin a tou uska kuch kaam tha iss hi liye unko jaldi jana para ..abhi chalo hum ready hujate hain ..

Sapna (taking away her teddy n asked placing her head in geet's lap) : dad office kyun gaye abb mujhe school kuan drop karega ..

Geet (smiling making her sit up but yet with sleeping eye rubbing them) : maa hai na 'mien chalongi aaj aapke saath 'chalo (seeing her dull ..she lifted her up in her arms n went to washroom) ..hum ready hujate hain ..fir yum yum pasta kahenge 'pasta tou sapna ka favorite hai na ..chalo chalo chalo ..

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The whole day was a mess just coz she was late 'but things turned well with dadi's suggestions ..oppsss I forgot to tell u ..dadi maa is really better now 'she is now able to sit properly n roam in the whole mansion with her automatic wheel chair ..with her physiotherapy ..she is able to move her hand quite well n now they are working on her legs ..though it tok them 6 years to even reach this much but with all the efforts geet took to search for the ancient Japanese therapy it went well 'n now she is able to atleast speak with bit shuttering ..n stammering though 'still something is better than nothing 'in the hall geet was instructing nakul to arrange the table fast as maan n sapna must be on thr way to home 'n dadi saw her panick ..n smiled thinking how her devil great grand child can make her mom come on her toes for her ..

Geet never got the love of her parents ..but really wanted to every single happiness to her daughter 'n she did 'sapna's wish is like a command to both maaneet 'but at the same time ..they didn't forget to seed good morals in her 'n she herself is a pure hearted angel who only turns devil for her parents 'making them do things they never thought of doing in any life ..

Dadi's trance broken with the loud horn sounds 'well that's a sign that Miss Sapna Maan Khurana is here 'I said na like father like daughter ..😆

Like a storm she came in the house n running hugged dadi's legs ..smiling at her '

Sapna : hi badi dadi 'kaise hu aap ..see dad got me chocolates 'we'll eat them together after lunch ..okiee

Dadi : okiee ..bacha ..

Sapna (went 2wards geet) : maa u know I got star in my drawing test today ..

Geet (kissing her) : aww 'mera bacha ..congrats ..chalo iss hi khushi mien ur fav suchi ..n papa ka fav mouse bana hai maa ne ..

Maan (coming in) : mujhe bhool gaye kya sab yahan '

Geet (smiled sarcastically) : gi bilkul ..aap kuan '?

Sapna (jumped off geet's arms n hugged maan) : yeh sapna ke dad hain .. dad sapna nahi bhooli '

Maan (smiled n lifted her up kissing her cheeks he hugged her) : hmm I know sweetheart ..aap dad ko kabhi nahi bholte 'but see aaj aapki maa breakfast karna bhool gayi ..

Geet (coming towards them n took sapna) : sapna ur dad also skipped his ..

Sapna (making O-shape face just like geet) : haw dad maa ..breakfast skip karna is bad manner ..teacher kehti hai ..we should must have our bf warna we'll faint during work hours 'aap dono faint tou nahi huye na ..

Maan (smiled mischievously) : nahi baby ..wohh kya hai na aapki mom itni healthy itni hatti katti hain ..wohh bilkul faint nahi huyi hungi hai na geet ..😆😆

Geet made a O-shaped face n fumed seeing the father daughter duo giggling ..putting sapna down n prepared herself to punch maan hard ..but by the time she would rose up ..maan already knew his Jangli Billi has got her form n so he ran for his life 'but geet started chasing him ..they were running like kids in the whole hall while dadi maa ..n sapna were seeing the scene laughing thr heart out '

Geet : maan rook aaj nahi chorongi aapko ..mien moti hoon ..han abhi batati hoo ..roko ..

Maan : geet mien tou mazaak kar raha tha ..tum itna serious (with that a cushion hit him n he snapped) ..ouch 'jangli billi ..

Geet : aaj tou aap pakka gaye maan ..

While running geet saw nakul coming with a glass of water for sapna may be ..grabbing the glass she went to chase down maan n they went out of the mansion in the garden 'finally within few steps distance geet threw the whole glass of water on him 'n he stood still throwing draggers ..while geet gulped her saliva ..seeing his light '

Geet : umm 'wohh ..mujhe laga u wil escape ..😆

Maan : u r soo gone geet ..😳😳

Saying so he started coming towards her while she ran in the whole garden ..knowing he is gonna eat her alive 'n maan after few minutes of chasing grabbed the water pipe n splashed it on geet wetting her fully 'while she stood paralyzed for few second n then started running here n thr to escape ..n finally maan gave n left the pipe ..he came towards her lost in her wet form ..n grabbed her waist but she looked away pouting 'n he placed her finger beneath her chin making her turn towards him but she still didn't looked at him ..



Maan (sternly) : breakfast kyun nahi kiya ..?

Geet (angry) : aapne bhi nahi kiya ..

Maan (baby face) : sorry na baba.. bhool gya ..office mien kaam tha aur mera dhyaan nahi raha ..

Geet (still angry) : han tou mujhe bhi kaam tha 'lunch bana tha aur who malhotra wale project ka design bhi complete karna tha 'tou mien bhi bhool gayi ..

Maan : geet tum aisa kyun karti hoo ..

Geet : aap aisa kyun karte hu ..


Be4 the convo could proceed ..thr came thr angel sapna ..running towards them ..

Sapna : Batti hugayi '??

Geet looked away while maan made a puppy face ..knelt down n nodded in negative ..while sapna winked at him ..

Sapna : maa ..papa se batti karlo na ..

Geet (looked down sternly) : ek shart par ..

Maan (immediately) : manzor hai ..😆

Sapna giggled n geet looked at him confused ..n then continued ..

Geet : dad ko bolo ..abb se apne meals skip nahi karenge kabhi bhi ..😳

Maan looked at her in awe ..she can never ask something for herself n over last 7 years he got to know it very well 'all she wanted was her family with her happy n smiling '

Maan (kissed her cheek making her shocked n sapna giggled) : promise ..

Geet looked at him with a serious face then 'n smiled making him leave a sigh off relief ..FINALLY MAAN GAYI ..he thought ..but as sapna went in thinking BATII HUGAYI 'geet pushed him down ..n his face got covered with the mud 'while she giggled standing thr n went away showing her tongue n thumb 'shouting ..

Geet : yeh mujhe moti bolne ke liye tha Mr.Sado Singh Khurana ..

Maan was astonished with this sudden push 'n sat thr with a angry red oppss I mean muddy brown face 'n saw geet running in the house laughing ..n looked back showing him her tongue out ...😛

Maan : abhi bata hoon 'jangli billi ..

The life was full of fun ..happiness ..some problem but they were together to tackle them 'with thr most treasured possession 'thr daughter ..the were the happiest being on earth 'the y did got married in a grand way after coming back ...the happiness on dadi maa 's face was worth watching ...n daai jan was in tears completely by the time all the rituals ended ..maan did ask them both to live in KM ..but sid refused saying he will be in london studying medical ...n taking care of daai jan as well ...

Over the years 'with some fine incidents Vicky n manvi acknowledged the love n were now married for 2 years ..n currently Vicky was handling london's KC branch over which geet created a big fight ..that maan can hand over the company someone else thr y Vicky has to leave ..but then it was the point whr Vicky could prove his capabilities ..although he was sad to leave his darling geetu n maan bhai ..dadi n his jaan ..his crime partner Sapna but then he has to share his brother's responsibilities as well ..n now his maan bhai has done more than enough so he wanted to release him from at least this fact that he will have to travel to abroad leaving his 2 angels in disguise ..

He do visits KM quite often like twice a month ..but still geet has a long face whenever he leaves along with Sapna 'maan too wasn't happy about this off late missing his brother but he knew someone has to be thr '

Some sweet n sour moments 'n some hurdles ..the life is perfect in every situation when u have a perfect life partner ..all u need to do is ..hold them forever ..with u 'a little care er..few loving gestures n its heaven in ur home .. with ur life partner ur best friend 'thr marriage didn't affected thr friendship but only strengthened it more ..with them supporting each other in every walk of life ..


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HOPE U ALL LIKED IT ...

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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hey dear...
awesome work
cant express my feelings...
superb romance...
superb emotion...
all the flavours were jus PERFECT...
lovely epilogue...
ll be waiting for some more good work from yu...

Edited by mayapari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update DONE @ previous page ...😉

enjoy reading n don't forget 2 removes the res frm ur comments ...😳

luv ya all

going to update dark angel now ...

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow sobi kya end kia h love the epilouge
soo many beautiful moments were there in
these last two part
maan geet ko sabke samne utha ke le jata h
they had a full dreamy wedding with the presence og family from videocall
then there supper romantic tym
they got a beautiful daughter same like dadda
nd there masti still exist after soo many years of marriage
or kya cahie kisi ko jindagi me
ab nahi bolugi jada
let me cry thora sa my fav ss is ending nd
(hehheh)
this tym can't write waiting for next
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago

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