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Posted: 12 years ago

FRIENDS IN LOVE


PART 20 (last part)


Maan knew nichol is right geet has been missing her family all those years in hostel ..n now he is also doing the same making her go away from him .. when he himself has assured her in-numerable times that he will never leave her alone 'but now what he was going to do '

All the smiles of geet n thr togetherness 'every moment just flashed infront of him making him doubt on his own decisions till now 'n suddenly his mbl buzzed with a call from adi ..

Adi : sir all is set here ..bas kal aapke papers sign karne baad thr will be no obstacle ..plzz sir trust me ..u can go ahead with this plan ..

Maan (with a new zeal n determination) : fine adi do the arrangements ..n send me the papers by tomorrow ..

Before he could finish the call ..geet came n snatched the mbl from his hand startling him ..n said

Geet : Mr.Chashmish plzz aap apni boring office talks kal tak ke liye meri friend se door rakheye warna I am afraid aapko isss dunya se buhat door jana parega ..

Adi : maan sir aapki awaaz

Geet : maan sir nahi geet aur abhi rakho phone jaldi ..

Maan (tried to get the mbl) : geet yeh kya kar rahi hoo ..plzz mera mbl do

Geet (disconnected the call n started dragging him) : baad mien 1st mujhe kuch dekhana hai aapko 'chalo ..

Maan (confused with this sudden change in her mood he saw her last time sometimes ago she was really gloomy n now she is so happy enthu about what he didn't knew but still he was kind of feeling good with her smile n to see her back to herself ..n then saw her leg which was having a bandage) : geet plss slow down ..tumhari chot 'dekho lag jayegi tumhain ..mien chal raha hoon tumhare saath ..

Geet (while running looked back) : no time Mr. Casanova Singh Khurana .. jaldi karo ..

Finally they reached at The center of Rialto Bridge ..n stood panting thr ..smiling looking at each other ..n then finally after thr breaths got normal ..

Maan : mujhe kuch kehna hai tumse '

Geet (bit serious n with a tint of pain in her eyes) : nahi pehle mujhe bolna hai ..

Maan : geet meri baat

Geet (placing her fingers on his perfect M-shaped lips looking straight into his eyes) : mene bola na mien boloongi 'tou abhi chup karo ..

Maan just blinked his eyes 'n kept looking into her hazel almond eyes that were soo much filled with love for him n only him ..

Geet : u knw aaj subha se I was planning for this ..n funny thing 1st time ever I didn't knew what am I gonna say 'n here I go mujhe nahi pata how to .. just how say it all '(a tear slipped from her eyes making maan step ahead with a pang of pain in his heart but she wiped it immediately turning side ways n rested her hand on the wall of the bridge)' u know I was soo happy when I saw u getting the best businessman of the year's award last year ' I was on really proud that moment like never before 'then after coming here knowing all what u have been doing since last years for dadi maa ..vicky ..KC it just doubled the amount of respect for u in my heart '

But then dadi ko dekh kar I was really hating my self 'agar mene .. agar mene iss tarha sab kuch chupaya nahi hota tou aap ko bhi yeh email tak confine nahi hona parta 'itna sab kuch akele nahi sehna parta 'aapne humesha sab ka khayaal rakha but ..i am sorry maan 'but now mujhe bolna hai aapko ..iss baar I wont let that gap come in between us 'I promise .. I wont '

maan came forward n made her turn towards him holding her shoulder firmly ..till now he was lost ..n confused as to y she is saying all this but he can never take anyone accusing his Jangli Billi not even her own self 'the smile hearing her appreciating his efforts for his family vanished the moment she accused herself to have left him alone ..n he interrupted looking straight in her eyes ..

Maan : pata hai geet jab dadi ka accident huya tou all I wanted was u beside me 'jaise har saal mom dad ki death anniversary par tumhain hug kar ke roota aaya hoon dadi ke time hospital mien bhi yahi karna chahta tha 'but then Vicky ko dara huya dekh kar apne aansoon chupa liye '

But I knew just one call away thr my best friend is 'lekin mene call nahi kiya coz I knew tum yahan nahi aa sakti 'itna saloon mien har khushi aur har takleef apne andar hi dabata gaya 'but jab tum se milne ka waqt aaya mien darr raha hai tha '

Pata nahi tha kaisa sambhal paaonga itne saaloon se chupaye huye jazbaat n I was right nahi sambhal paya '

Par iss mien tumhari galti nahi hai 'I know geet ..i knw iss dunya mien wohh ek insaan jis ko meri problem jaane ke liye mere batane ki zarorat nahi wohh sirf tum hou ' last 20 days mien 'itne saaloon ka har dard har zakhm tumhari hasi aur sharartoon mien kahan kho gaye mujhe pata hi nahi chala 'meri jangli billi ko mujh se yeh kehne ki zarorat nahi hai .. I know wohh humesha mera saath degi ..i know that ..

By the time maan ended geet was in tear ..her face covered with the tear trails wetting maan's hand as well but a strange happiness was thr in her heart ..n her faint smile depicted it 'may be coz of the fact that maan trusted her 'may be coz of the love she saw in his eyes 'she just can't point at a reason but yes she was happy 'happiest person on earth in that moment 'n next she hugged him like all she wanted was that 'to be with him in every moment of her life 'while maan reciprocated her hug embracing her 'wanting to absorb all that pain n gloominess from her n fill her with all the happiness in his world 'both smiled ..cried in that hug didn't knew what will happen next but this moment they wanted to pour out all what was there in their hearts '

N next geet with a slight whisper wished her ..n the fireworks started in the cloud decorating it with her wishes '

Geet : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MR. Casanova Singh Khurana

Maan was surprised actually with so much happening around him he forgot his b,day n now her full dimple smile made him so much happy n then the fact she was actually planning for his b,day ever since the morning 'a slight tear formed in his eyes with her selfless love n concern for him 'he wanted to say so many things to her in this moment but words failed him ..actually no words will be enough to express that bliss he felt in this moment '

Its true all a human heart wants is pure selfless love when it founds it ..the biggest fear it embed along with it is the fear of loosing it ..the feeling is soo strong that it has the ability to over power all our rhinking with just a slightest of idea that the person who loves us the most in this world is in danger sets this desperation in out self to protect just the way a small child wants to protect its fav child n keeps him safe with himself 'but that's the difference in our childhood n mature age 'a child's heart know the safest place for his fav toy is his hands n is sure of it but as we grow up knowing this world n its dangers we even starts doubting our own selves n our abilities just wanting to get rid of this fear of loosing 'n same happened with him 'with the thought of his love in danger he opt for the 1st safest option without even thinking for a second of its effects n now with the time each n every fact of what will happen in a result of his decision only made him insecure of that fact if that will make his jangli billi go out of the danger zone 'n now he knew its only his arms which can protect him 'as if the moment his fav toy his love 'his life was about to go away that little child in him got alive to clutch it close to his heart away from the whole world .. just for him 'with him ..

With all his emotions he cupped her face in his hands ..n admire her with all the love his heart holds for her 'said with slight mist eye n shaking voice ..

Maan : u r mad ..u r totally mad ..

Geet (with a faint smile n teary eye) : ab aesi hi hoon mien '

N without any second word he hugged her instantly startling her with his sudden move 'jerking her towards himself cocooning her in his embrace as if trying to hide her from all the world n said it all in a single breath ..

Maan : I am sorry geet ..i am really very very sorry 'I know ..i know I am total idiot to have created all this mess ..but trust me I never wanted to ..i never ever wanted to let u go away 'I am sorry please mujhe maaf kardo ..

With his sudden hug n then his words geet only got confused not at all understanding his demeanor 'with all her strength she came here ready to listen to his decision 'preparing her heart for parting ..n here he is apologizing 'her heart just could nt absorb it or rather say was too scared to believe if he was backing off his decision fearing to have any hope of such sort ..while maan continued to say it all parting from the hug in his own trance '

Maan : I am sorry yrr 'par tumhain pata hai na mien tension mien kuch bhi karta hoon 'jab wohh lawyer wali baat pata chali tou I planned coming here but wohh log yahan bhi puhanch gaye 'n just got scared 'mien tumhain kuch hone nahi dena chahta tha geet ..I REALLY LOVE U 😳😳 ..u knw it na humesha se jisko bhi pyaar kiya wohh ultimately mujhse door hugaya ..pehle mom dad than dadi 'I just didn't wanted u to go away ..NAHI JEE PATA TUMHARE BINA.. 😳😳 iss hi liye I did all this 'I am really sorry

Maan was all the while soo desperate to clear all the misunderstanding b/w them that never saw the confused state of geet n said all what he wanted to ..n geet just stood absorbing all the confessions frm him one by one 'she just couldn't fanthom as to hw she should react ..after soo much of a torture when she managed to accept the fact that she has to leave him he is saying that he wont let her go away 'should she be happy for this or should be mad at him to have made it soo confusing ..

Geet : maan yeh aap kya kahe jaa rahe hu ..? wohh tickets ..par ab yeh ..i am nt getting anything ..

Maan (cupping her face) : okie ..i am sorry ..mujhe yeh pagloon jaise tumhain London bhejne ka plan nahi karna chahiye tha ..i am really very sorry ..but now I knw mene kitni bari stupidity ki hai ..tou abhi aur kuch garbar hu isske pehle I really wanna say this ..(n geet interrupted).. maan app (maan stopped her ).. geet plss abhi mujhe bolne do warna ..plss yrr just let me say this '(while geet was looking straight into his eyes with a confuse expression n maan closed his eyes for a brief moment n left a sigh 'saying it with a hurry in single breath)' WILL U MARRY ME '??😲😲 😳😳

Maan looked at her with his eyes filled with love n hope 'while geet stood shocked paralyzed still wanting to get things clear in her head 'her lips moving but words failed to come out of her mouth 'her face confused 'questioning 'eye brows twitching in confusion then widen with surprise .. n then finally a confused statement came out of her mouth ..

Geet : (eyes brows twitching) han '(eyes widen with surprise ) par ..(then looked away) ..yeh

N before she could formulate a complete sentence maan hugged her in excitement 'that one relief that now he don't need to part away frm her 'made him so much filled with happiness that he could nt hold back while geet still didn't reciprocated the hug ..confused n then finally his words making sense to her .. all what he said 'a tear of happiness left frm her eye n a smile of relief appeared on her face with the realization that she don't need to go away frm him now 'that bliss to remember his confession ..n her arms went around him to embrace him but then the thought how much she has been tortured n hw he made her cry came to her mind n she pushed him away with a jerk making him come out of that la la land ..

Geet (with a raged voice n a slight mist eye) : tou yeh sab pehle nahi bol sakte thay 😡😡'zarori tha mujhe rolana '😭

Maan (looking down with a smile ..pushing back his hairs) : umm ..sorry

Geet (came 4ward n pushed him) : dusht danav 'sado kahin ke ..sab kuch garbar karte rehte hu 'pehle nahi bol sakte thay I LOVE U ..itna sab jhamela karna zarori tha ..

Maan (came 4ward carefully n held her by her arms n then moved towards her face cupping it with one hand removed the tear trail) : I said I am sorry na ..plss maaf kardo ..promise dobara aisa kabhi nahi karonga ..

Geet (pushed him away) : nahi karna maaf aur nahi karni shaddi ..jao aap wapis mien nahi aarahi ..😲😲 (n tried to walk away)

Maan (holding her from her wrist ..with a guilty yet deep voice voice depicting all his love) : plss geet

Geet (looked over her shoulder ..1st at his face than at hs hold n removed her hand n stood crossing her hands on front n said with a bit of arrogance) : ek shart par 'propose me n convince me well enough '.

Maan (surprised with her demand) : what

Geet : u heard me right Mr.Khurana 'n mind u I don't have all night to stand here so hurry up ..

Maan smiled seeing that fake anger on her flushed blushy face ..she was actually trying very hard to fake her anger n hide that smile ..n her glitering glowing eyes said it all '

But than he knew after doing all this he defo owes her this much 'so getting out the ring from his pocket he went on his knees holding it up in his hands 2wards her making geet step back with surprise ..


Maan : well fancy words n fanaticism don't go with me ..n u knw that ..i knw I am a total jerk when in anger n know the best in the whole world .. u already know the biggest secret of my life to be scared of heights 'so now I don't know how to convince u but all I have to say is knowing all my weird habits ..all my flaws ..Ms. Geet Rai Chaudhry will u still take this risk of ur life time to marry me 'n be with me till the end of this world '😳😳

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While standing at the far end of the bridge Vicky, Manvi, Nichol n Mathew wr holding at thr awkward position to have a better view ..

Manvi : di what do u think is happening thr ..

Nichol : I can'r hear them but maan is on his knees with something I guess a ring in his hand '

Vicky : so defo it means Bhai is proposing her na ..

Mathew : I hope geet say a yes ..

Manvi : what Mathew she loves him only ..we knw it

Vicky : but u don't knw she is MSK 's Jangli Billi ..expect the unexpected frm her ..😳 😆😆

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N thr geet stood with a smirk on her face 'n said

Geet : agar mien abhi aapko refuse kardon tou '😕

Maan 's smile just vanished in thin air replacing it with a confused blank expression n he got up on hs feet ..making geet smirk even more 'n next he did something which she least expected '

Jerking her towards him self ..he locked her in his embrace tight with no space b/w them her one hand pressing on his chest while his one hand holding on her left hand tight '

Thr proximity having a great effect on both 'geet's heart beat thudded loudly making him feel them n his uneven breath falling over her face ..

Thr eyes met n he said with so much of authority in them as if he owns her ..


Maan : well I am afraid u don't have that option Mrs. Geet Maan Khurana ..😳😳

Nn slipped the ring in her ring finger 'while she just lost her self in the depth of his eyes 'a tear trail slipped from her eyes as she lowered her lashes n glanced at the ring shinning in her finger in the moon light 'n then back at him as he placed his hand on her face wiping the tears away ..caressing her cheeks 'n she gave a wide smile to him ..n he hugged her tight in his embrace hiding her in his arms ..

Maan : I LOVE U ..

Geet (still the tears running down her eyes soking in his shirt) : fir se mujhe kabhi door nahi bhejoge na ..

Maan (tighten his grip over her waist even more) : kabhi nahi ..i promise kahi bhi nahi ..😳😳

Geet (sniffing her nose) : I LOVE U ..😃

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Manvi, nichol were busy teasing geet sitting by the canal side 'while maan was standing at a distance with a smile on his face ..admiring that cute red hue on his Jangli Billi's face making her look so damn beautiful 'n that contended smile of her face was all he could ask for '

Vicky came thr with lime juice 'n stood beside him ..

Maan : thnxx drinks kuch ziada hi hugayi thi ..

Vicky : tou jo kuch kiya wohh drinks ka asar tha ya ..

Maan : adi ki loyality ka tuhfa ..😳 😉😉

Vicky (confused) : matlab ..?

Maan : dance ke baad uska call aaya tha 'India mien aise 3 log hain jo geet ke liye threat ban sakte thay 'mene plan kiya tha ke hum unn 3 ke khilaaf proofs collect karke unko chaudhry sahib ka case bhool jane par convince karenge '

Adi ne 1 ke khilaaf tou evidence jama kar liye 'par baqi 2 ke liye usko waqt chahiye tha 'aur geet ko kal sab kuch batana tha '

I think he guessed about me n geet ..aur usne suggest kiya ke mien geet ko lekar kuch time ke liye ghayab hujaon aur wohh tab tak India mien geet ke liye sab kuch theek kardega '

Vicky (with a excited smile) : n u agreed '

Maan : hmm

Vicky : bro yeh pehle bhi kar sakte thay na '😡😡

Maan (with deep thoughtful guilty face 'looking at geet) : Vicky jab aapki sab se pyaari cheez ko bachane ki baat aati hai na tou job hi pehla raasta aapko milta hai aap usko apna lete hu 'bina kuch aur soche

Mene bhi wohi kiya tha 'bina kuch aur soche huye jo pehla rasta mujhe dekha geet ko khatroon se bachane ka mene apna liya ..

Vicky : aur jab samajh aaya key eh rasta aapko geet se kitna door kar sakta hai tou bardaasht nahi huya wohh khayaal '

Maan (smiling) : han ..nahi bardaasht huya '(took a sip from the juice)' BTW thank u '(looking at vicky's confused face ..said with a smile).. tumhare uss lecture ke liye 'kafi helpful tha ..

Vicky (smiled) : akhir bhai kis ka hoon '

Waise bhai tou ab plan kya hai 'yahan shadi karoge ya fir yun hi ..

Maan (with teasing smile) : yun hi geet ko ..😲😲

Vicky (his eyes widen with surprise to think his bhai is gonna take her with him without marriage) : bhai aap

Maan (started laughing over his face) : pagal ..agar mene yahan shadi ki tou media ke through poori dunya ko pata chal jayega ke Geet Rai Chaudhry kuan hai 'aur fir un 2 underworld dons ko kuan sambhalega '

Vicky (dis-appointed) : tou abb

Maan : tou abb ..mien geet ko lekar humare private cruise jaa raha hoon 😳😳..ill marry her thr 😲😲'n then after coming back we'll have a register marriage in front of all the world n our families ofcourse '😃😃

Vicky : wah bhai ..abb mujhe pata chala geet ne aapka naam CASANOVA SINGH KHURANA kyun rakha hai ..😆😆

Maan (in a stirn voice) : VICKYYY '!!!!!

N be4 maan could get a hold on him he ran away followed by maan n Vicky hide behind geet ..

Maan (trying to catch him) : geet move iss Vicky ko tou abhi dekhata hoon mien ..bahar aao

Geet (confused) : abb kya hugaya hai ..maan kyun bechare ke peeche pare ho ..

Vicky (smiling) : han geet dekho na bi-waja mujhe marne pe lage hain yeh ..

Maan : Vicky tou bahar fir bata hoon ..geet hat jao abhi warna ..

Geet (in stirn voice) : warna kya 'kya karlenge aap Mr.Maan Singh Khurana 'han boliye

Maan (maan stopped chasing Vicky who was hiding behind geet) : warna mien ..

Geet (putting her hands over her hips n stepped ahead almost hovering him) : warna kya ..

Maan (pulled her in his arms by placing her hands over her waist) : warna mien tumhain kiss karloonga '😲😲 😳😳 😉😉

Geet mouth widen in O-shape listening to his shameless comment n than her face went tomato red with the giggling n whistling of manvi n nichol ..

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Walking my the shores of canal 'they both were4 matching eah others steps 'looking away occasionally smiling over the previous memories of last 3 days '

Geet would never have thought in her wildest dreams that her best friends that Sado singh will flirt with her ever in this life 'forget flirt she never thought she will fall for this all time serious workaholic person '

But it is said na

Jo naam dil pe hu likha

Ikraar usi se hota hai ..

Tou geet ke dil par tou humesha se maan ka naam hi likha tha '

Seeing the all time red blushing face of his jangli Billi was a complete shock for maan 'but a pleasant one

He never knew this girlish side of his ultimate fighting queen 'she had always known the fact that the place geet holds in his life nobody can even reach near it forget replacing her 'but he never thought of himself to be good enough for this angel (in disguise😆😆) '

'.

Thr eyes met yet again n they looked away smiling repeating this similar act since last 15 min of walk 'n geet remembered his open flirting remark infront of all 'n she twisted her lips murmuring

Geet : Casanova Singh khurana ..😉

Maan (heard her saying something) : kuch kaha tum ne

Geet (shocked) : nahi '(after a pause) ..aapne kuch suna

Maan (confused) : umm ..nahi

After walking few steps 'geet asked with a humor

Geet : tou ..yeh aqal (sense) aapko itni jaldi kaise aagayi ..

Maan (said looking ahead with a teasing lost smirk) : well umm ..aqal tou 7 saal pehle hi agayi thi bas aaj himaat bhi aagayi '

Geet (Shocked) : what 'what did u said '7 saal

Maan (kept walking n said with a genuine smile) : hmm ..mene dadi maa ko tumhare liye apni feeling ke bare mien 7 saal pehle hi bata diya tha 😲😲'tab hi tou unhoon ne mujhe yeh ring di thi tumhain dene ke liye ..😳

Geet stopped with a shock ..n kept looking at the green stoned ring shinning in her finger 'n then maan came back after going few steps ahead n stood infront of her 'n geet lifted up her face n asked with a amused face ..

Geet : tou kabhi kaha kyun nahi ..?

Maan (bowed his head n said little low voice) : dadi ko batane ke 2din baad unka accident hugaya ..n then

Maan stopped in his words n geet lifted up his face cupping in her soft palm .. n asked looking straight in his eyes ..

Geet : than ..

Maan :: mujhe laga with all the responsibilities of KC ..dadi n Vicky ..i will never be able to give that happiness u deserve 'tou mene apni feelings ko hi bholna chaha ..😡 🤢🤢

Geet was just left with tears in her eyes with the thought he loved her al these years 'n yet thought of her happiness first ALWAYS '

Geet (with teary eyes) : u were right ..(maan looked up instantly).. u r a total jerk 'n mad person to be in love with '

How could u even think like that '😡

Maan just stood smiling at her love filled eyes 'following with tears ..n he cupped her face in his palms n removed the tear trails from her face 'n said ever so softly

Maan : sorry

Geet : what sorry aisa koi karta hai kya 'aur dadi maa aur vvick meri bhi tou family hai na ..aap kaise aisa soch sakte hu ..

Maan : I am sorry mishty ..i am really sorry ..uss waqt my immaturity n insecurity led me to this 'but jab 7 saal baad tumse mila '7 saloon ki saari kushish 7 second mien hawa hugayi 'n I just couldn't hold back anymore ..


Geet hugged him tight pouring out her heart with those tears while maan cocooned her in his embrace 'feling at peace to have finally said all what he wanted to 'the fact that now she is his 'Maan ki Geet 'that filled him with soo much of happiness that nothing else had any place for itself '

They were still standing thr at the bridge lost in each others warmth 'after sometime maan felt geet in deep thoughts ..

Maan : kya huya geet ..kya soch rahi hoo

Geet (coming out of his arms ..with a worried face) : maan wohh 'vineet uncle 'unko kya bolenge ..

Maan (smiled n cupped her face) : abhi koi bhi problem ki tension tumhain lene ki koi zarorat nahi hai ill fix it up 'u jjust don't worry ok ..⭐️

Geet (smiled n hugged him back) : hmm ..acha maan dadi maa ko pata hai aap ne mujhe yeh ring dee di ..

Maan (smiled) : hmm 'I guess adi ne abb tak bata diya huga ..

Geet : maan mujhe dadi maa se milna hai ..

Maan (with a bit seriousness) : mil lena but abhi nahi kuch time baad ..

Geet (pouted coming out of his arms) : abhi kyun nahi 'aap mujhe meri hi dadi se milne se mana kar rahe hu ..

Maan (smiled n pulled her in his embrace by jerking her through her waist) : mana nahi kar raha but agar tum dadi se milne chali gayi ..tou humari shaddi ka kya huga '

Geet (bit confused yet blushed at the thought of her marriage n said with a low blushy voice) : humari shaddi '

Maan (smiled seeing her face turning red) : hmm humari shaddi jo hum kal humari cruise par karne wale hain '

Geet (Shocked) : KAL ..woh bhi cruise par 'aap pagal hugaye hu ..

Maan (bit sad) : I knw tum dadi maa Vicky 'mamaji aur sab log ke saath yeh karna chahti hoo ..but u knw na India mien wohh sab 'we can't go thr .. aur Indian media janta hai ke mien yahan hoon ..aur agar hum ne sab ke saamne shaddi karli tou ur identity will be revealed in front of whole world na '

Geet (disappointed) : but maan dadi maa ..unke bina kaise ..unke kitne sapne honge aur daai jaan 'wohh bhi tou 'top of it Vicky 'hum sab ko chor kar kaise ..

Maan (saw her sad which he didn't wanted to so tried changing her mood) : tou theek hai bina shaddi ke hi bhag jaate hain '(geet looked up at him shocked with her face open in O-shape)' han that will be fun but I wonder tumhare saath '.AKELE '.CRUISE PAR 'pata nahi kya huga ...😉😉 😳😳

Geet just slapped on his chest n hide herself in his embrace ..blushing furiously at his comments ..while maan chuckled n embrace her tight in his arms 'n said

Maan : don't worry hum wapis aakar sab ke saamne bhi shaddi karlenge ..

Geet (got all the more happy ..n kissed his cheeks in excitement😲 😳😳) : sachi 'yeppii I LOVE U MAAN '😳

Maan was In 7th heaven with her sudden kiss 'the feeling of her soft petal on his cheeks just burned his inner self ..n his hold on her waist tightened while geet looked at his eyes turning dark with passion n desire n realized what she just did 'n lowered her lashes blushing like never be4 'tried freeing her self but couldn't n maan said '

Maan : waise thank u kiss cheeks par nahi ki jaati ..bulke ..😳😳

He trailed off his words looking at her soft petal like lips with his desirous eyes 'while geet's whole body felt the shiver with his husky tone n his touch 'thr body warmth setting them on fire 'n that building flames of desire didn't helped either ..maan lowered his head over her face fanning her with his breath 'making her knees turn jelly n she clutched his shoulder for support only arousing him further ..he lifted her chin up by his first finger '

Her eyes depicting the same 'love ..passion n anticipation lowered in submission 'all what he needed

Placing his lips on hers ..the simplest of touch made thr heart do the somersault 'a smile spread across thr faces 'n eyes closed eyes holding innumerable dreams 'thr hold tightened at each other n maan crushed her petals with his rough manly ones 'promising her to never leave ever 'promising to be with her in each n every step 'promising her to hers'

Lamha tham sa gaya ..

Waqt ruk sa gaya

Jo baat barsoon se dabi thi dil

Ek darr se majboor hukar aakhir aa hi gayi laboon tak

Izhaar huya ...ikraar bhi

Inkaar huya ..aur taqraar bhi

Par yeh tou humesha se tha iss rishtey mien

Phir bhi kuch tou badal gaya hai iss lamhe mien

Wada hai aaj ..iss dil ka uss dil se

Abb na roone dunga ..abb na door jane dunga

Saath hoon mien ..paas hoon mien

Ab har ghari bas tera hi ehsaas hoon mien

Jo shoro huyi thi dosti se

Aaj puhanchi hai manzil tak

Abb iss kahani ka kya ant karoon ..

Lagta hai bas abb hi tou .. zinda hoon mien ...

( 😳😳.. a poem by me ..😳😳 )

A lone tear of happiness escaped from the corner of her eye 'every moment spent together just flashed like a movie in front of her eyes 'thr moment in hostel 'they way they parted 'then meeting after 7 years 'the way maan rescued her from her father 'n then the way he tried to make her normal in those 15 days at KM 'his caring flirty comments 'those small eye locks the teasing comments of nichol n manvi 'vicky's confusing remarks everything suddenly became soo special like every moment was drafted by Almighty to make them realize thr love overwhelmed with her emotions she mouthed in between thr kiss

I LOVE U ..

Nazro se wo samajhte aur kehte gaye
Hum to bas unki or khiche chale gaye...

Dosti ka khubsurat rishta pyaar se aage badha
Dur rehke bhi ek dusre ka pyaar kam na hua...

Tanha mehsus to har pal karte the hum
Par halat se majbur jo ho gaye the hum...

Yahi tanhayiya humare pyaar ko nayi disha de gayi
Jab mile to saari khushiya maano us ek pal me sama gayi...

Kehna to wo bhi chahte the kuch
Sunana hum bhi chahte the kuch...

Apno ke hi diye dhoke se hum fir tut gaye the
Wo na hote to hum shayad aaj zinda bhi na hote...

Us haadse ne mujhe bahaut badal diya
Itni sehem gayi ki unse baat karne ka darr lagne laga...

Is baat ka darr ke wo mujhe chod na de
Us baat ka darr ke wo mere pyaar ko tukhra na de...

Dil hi dil main kahi wo baat dabi si reh jaati
Agar wo apne pyaar se mujhe fir apna na banate...

Unka pyaar mere liye ibadat se badhkar tha
Usi pyaar ke sahare aaj ye rishta aage badha tha...

Unke pyaar ne pyaar ka izhaar karne ki himmat di
Is dil ne unki har baat pe dil se ibadat ki...

Vaadein kuch unhone mujhse kiye
Unhe nibhane ki kasame meine diye...

Khushnasib hai jo dost me hi aise jeevansaathi mila
Pyaar se bhi fir pyaar ho jaaye aisa pyaar nibhaya...

Jab tak ab ye saansein hai hum yuhi saath rahenge
Apne pyaar se humari duniya yuhi mehkaate rahenge...

Duao me har pal bas unka pyaar aur saath maagenge
Jab tak jeeyenge unki ibadat se mohabbat karte rahenge...

(poem by rituja di ..🤗)


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n here starts a new journey ...

what let them kiss till when they want na ..😆 😳😳


do hit like button ...

n leave ur reviews for the last time ..plss


Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

tou finally FIL is ended ..😊
gosh i can't believe it took me this much long to put it to an end ..😆
well it has to be ..kyun ki mene yahan kuch plan tou kiya nahi tha ...
geet ke rescue ke baad kuch socha tou readers ke response ki waja se woh bhi pani hugaya ...😕

but never mind this my story which got the highest like ...😳😳
so its good in every way ..😃
n ofcourse had a lot of fun while typing ..n updating it
it was real fun imagining MSK on Chikni Kamar pe teri 😆😆...rolf

but without all ur support this wouldn't have been possible so thank u each n every person who came here ..read it n appreciated ...thank u soo much ...🤗

silent readers after giving double update each of more than 6000 words ..i guess i deserve at least single line comment from u all
plsss ... 😊

n now lastly just wanna say ...i made lots of friends here ...n i really don't wanna loose them but IF par i am nt tha active tou if u want to chat or be in contact with me ...
n IF U STILL WANNA BEAR MY SLOW PACE STORIES ..

visit here on my current SS
THE DARK ANGEL OF FATE ...


here is the link to all my works ...at deepa di's DAILY FF THREAD ..page 36 ...keep checking to stay updated ill be updating my link to each n every work here ...


thank u all
stay blessed ...n keep smiling ..
hope u all enjoyed this longest update till date ...😆
plss plss plsss do leave ur words here for the last time

luv ya all
sobia
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending to a lovely story
hayee it was so romantic
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb ending

finally their love over came all the problems

but maan was really a jerk

he loved her since long but never did tell her
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful double updates
loved maaneet awesome and lovely moments
i am shocked to see this ss is ended this soon
is it possible that we have epilogue of this ss
plz try
will miss this ss
thanx for the pm dear
hope we get epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
ittni jaldi over ho gaya 😭
😭

now abt update it was awesome update
full of crying masti love romance nnd alll

nd addi bht kam ka h yar uske bina geet ki koi v story nahi chal
sakti h 😃 aaj uske ideas ne maaneet ko ek sath kia😃

nd nichole nd vicky effort tooo
nd then the way maan expressed his feelings
to geet nd geet celebrated maan's bday all was awesome

then maan ki teasing nd plan of marriage
😳😳😳
sab bht pyara tha
nd really very big update
mereko 1hrs laga read karne me
hheheh lil slow i m 😉

but isse aacha end nahi ho sakta tha iss os turn inta ff ka
love u sobia for ur beautiful ff

chalo i will start reading ur another ff jaldi hi
nd all the best for exam
exam ke bad ek or mast wala ff nd os m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
read the last three parts in one go. Beautifully written. Each update was better than the last. Thank you for the time and effort you took to write such an amazing story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update:)atlast confess their feelings:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I shocked to read this SS end so soon ...loved the updates ...please update epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice parts..
geet surprise birthday party..maan proposing geet..
vicky helping maan...friends teasing themm..n not to forget adis loyalty n geet getting angry on it..
gud

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