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MG OS : Batien Ankahi Si ...




Hi all,
Here I am giving u the 3rd OS of mine
People thr was a misconception in some of u thr …this story is not including any other couple but only MAANEET …
Sorry for the mistakes in the first look …
Enjoy reading …

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How mesmerizing The first feeling of love is …that tickle with just the thought to see him in front of ur eyes …the anxiety to know about him …the red hue which covers ur face every time with just his presence around u …
The beautiful phase of a couple's life from engagement to marriage …a serene time when u have all the right to see that person from far away n imagine all what u want …be it wild or the sweet romantic moments like those of SRK's movie …but yet u are nt allowed to near him n claim it in front of the world ….
The most funny yet sweetest part of this time when some1 is thr in every family function even when u know they hates it …the corner staring at each other without the other one noticing …that sweet care for one other …in short this is the most magical phase of life for people who believes in love ..!!

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Sitting in a crowded room full of girls …wearing heavy ghagras' n embroidered dresses …a girl hardly 22 was thr in a simple yet really elegant churidaar busy in msging not on mbl but on Facebook her hairs open flowing with the breeze teasing her by coming on her face that was adorned with the most enchanting smile in the world…n a sweet doll like girl may be 19 with a fully bridal look cribbing with her cousins …

Rajji : kiya yaar ..yeh papaji bhi na ..kya zarorat thi back side wale lawn mien jaa kar bethne ki …

Cousin : seriously chachu bhi na …itna bara hotel choor kar unko lawn mein jana tha …

Raji : lawn mien gaye theek hai …but backside wale hi kyun …abb hum party mien kaise jaaeinge ….(pouting with a teary eye) …aur wohh dekho Madam Geet Handa is still busy in her fb chatting …uff ho di yahan hum itne pareshaan hain aur aap ..uhhh

The girl now u know is geet handa …smiled with protruded neck n sending another msg went 2wards the door n came back after a minute with a shopping bag …with a dress in it ..



Geet : oh hoo meri nautanki behanoon …yahan roone se kuch huga nahi na ...tou abb ek kaam karoo jaldi jaldi yeh jewellary ki dukaan jo apne upar sajai hai na ussko hatao aur kuch semi-formal dresses pehan kar tyaar hujaao ..

Raji : but di agar papaji nahi gaye lawn se tou …??

Geet : tou aaj ki secret boys girls party ka plan cancle huga aur kiya ….

Handing over her dress ..geet pushed her inside the dresser n went 2wards the stairs leading to a huge balcony yet again chatting …

Rajji : uhh di kabhi tou acha bolo ...seriously aap se achi tou aapki dadi saas hain kam se kam try tou kar rahi hain …
ek hi tou mauqa hai mere paas Vikas ji ko milne ka …rista pakka huya tha tab se aaj take k photo dekhi hai aur meri sagaai kar di …di aap jante hoon na kitna tension …kaise kisi ajnaabi se shaddi kar loon ..

While geet was just listening to her with a teasing smile pressing keys on her mbl chatting again …n answered …

Geet : waise hi jaise mein karne wali hoon duffer …tou janti hai humesha se yahi hota aaya hai aur aisa hi hoga …shukar mana tou vikas ko mil paayi gi…

Rajji : ya right ..sachii di aap ki aur jiju ki tou rab ne banadi jodi …2saal ki engagement aur ek offial meeting nhi uff …how un-romantic ..!!

Rucha : exactly uss hottie ke saath tou meri sagaii honi chahiye thi geet di .. haayee kitna dreamy hai …aur uss ke muscles tou ..

Geet : shut up rucha …!!

Rajji (giggled) : han rucha kuch mat bol ..u see humari geet di mien bhalle hi itni himmat na hoo ke wohh apne hi mangetar ke saamne appni nazar tak utha sake magar fir bhi unn ke saamne koi unnke fianc ke upar nazar nhi daal sakta warna pata nhi kya huga yahan …

Cousin : seriously geet …sachi sachi bol wohh tere hi college ka senior tha 6 months mien bilkul bhi approach nahi kiya uss ne …?

The red hue adorned on geet's face just made her look soo beautiful but that gave her cousin another reason to tease her ..soo avoiding thr talks she just changed her position in the room …

Rajji : kaash mien aapke college mien hoti …tou delhi ke sab se hot n happening guy ..mere MAHAAN jiju se zaror pouchti unhoon ne kiya dekha meri Hitler didi mien ….

Geet : aww poor girl …teri galti mene thorai kaha tha science lee …le leti interior designing …

Rajji : di ek baat sachi sachi batao na …

Listening to her serious voice geet kept her mbl aside n looked at her …

Geet : bol ..!!

Rajji : aapko kabhi dil nhi huya jiju se baat karne ka …unko jaan ne ka ..

Geet (smiled) : rajji dekh tou jaanti hai humari family mien shaddi se pehle milna allowed nahi hai …aur yeh jaan ne ke baad ke wohh mere hi college mien parhte hain tu bhi jaanti hai darji ne 2 mahine mujhe college nahi jaane diya …aur jab unki Dadi Maa ne call ki aur unko pata chala iss bare mien tab hi mujhe college jane ki permission di gayi …HP mien darji bhi ne tou kitna bola tha Unn ke saamne yeh karna geet betiya yeh mat karna putta ..maa ka lecture sab kuch tou tu janti hai chutti … so technically hum poore 2 mahine bhi ek saath college mien nhi thay …

Cousin : wohoo geet di UNKI ..han naam bhi nahi loo gi …abhi kuansa HP se koi yahan hai fir bhi …!!

Raji : HP ka tou naam bhi mat loo …mana hum ek 19century ki sooch rakhne wali family se hain but hum dono humesha se Mumbai mien Maasi ke saath rahe waha parhai ki …ek azaad life ji …abb yeh restriction uhh I hate it ..mien apni zindagi ka sab se baa faisle khud nahi kar sakti …

Geet : but mama papaji kuch galat nhi socheinge humare liye yeh tou jaanti hai …

Raaji : mien doubt nahi kar rahi di but fir bhi …

Geet : acha yeh sab chooro hum jaa rahe hain na party mien …wahan dekh leena vikas ka behavior ..uss ki nature …I am telling u college ke toppers mien se tha ..he is a brilliant guy rajji …

Rajji : whatever di ….ek meeting n I will be deciding my whole life ..!!

Thr came a voice frm her mbl indicating another chat msg … n she gave up on making her understand …

Msg : Dadi will be calling u any minute I ve made ur dad move from thr be ready soon n ya ek baat soch raha tha mien …abb iss plan ke complete hone ke baad mujhe apni list se dlt karne ke bare mien tou nhi soch rahi hoo na tum ..?

She smiled n kind of blushed with the msg …n nxt heard Rajji's remark ..

Rajji : uhh di choro uss stupid mbl ka peecha din bhar fb par lagi rehti hoo … I wonder aisa kiya hai aur kuan jis se aap chat karti rehti ho ..

Geet : meri choti …apne chute se brain ko stress karna band kar aur sab ko jaa kar dekh tyaar huye ya nai ..

Raaji : waise I am thankful tou ur dadi saas ….unhoon ne hi maa ko manaya hum sab ko yeh party karne dene ke liye …warna tou aapki shaddi se pehle humari Mumbai se associated yeh aakhri yaad bhi kitni boaring hoti …!!

Geet : hmm ..ab jaa meri maa ..

Rajji : jaati hoon ..waise bhi aakhri chance hai mere paas aapke so called devar se milne ka ..

Cousin : devar ..??

Geet : han wohh Vikas dadi maa ki best friend ke bete hain tou close family friends n all …

Rajji : not to forget mere jiju ke best friend bhi …tou mien apni didu ke pass hi rahoongi bas ghar different hain …

Both sisters smiled n side hugged each other …while rajji went to change finally ..!!

Cousin : ohh I see …aap dono ki tou nikal pari ..di jiju se pouchu na unka koi aur bro ya cousin ya fir koi friends hi hu mere layak …

With all such teasing girly talks they got ready for the party excited yet nervous ….n then geet got the green signal call from her dadi saas to make her way towards party hall …n geet sended the final msg stating ..

Msg : okie hum aa rahe hain aap kuch bhi kar ke unko jaldi bola lo it's the last chance for her ..

All were heading towards the door changed into a more formal party wear but all in Indian dresses … Rajji was nervous like anything meeting her would-be-husband officially for the 1st time apart frm any family function ..although all the girls present were thr cousins ….
They all reached the party hall in of the hotel …n saw geet's Dadi Saas Savitri Devi Khurana standing thr with big smile on her face …

All girls greeted her folding thr hands n geet slowly came 4ward with her eyes down casted …the red hue making her look heavenly in her simple anarkali dress bending down she took her blessing while dadi embraced her ..avoinding looking anywhr else …

Dadi (in the hug) : acha hua aap gayi warna pata nhi yahan aaj kiya huta …

Geet smiled parting looking down knowing what dadi is hinting at …
While all made thr way in …with geet all the while looking down avoiding looking at her surrounding n greeted every devar of hers verbally with a slight smile n hugged her fiance's cousin sisters thr …trying to be just her self when her eyes caught the two thief eyes following her each step standing in a corner with a teasing yet admiring look in his eyes …making her turn red …with a slight nervous smile ..

while rajji was looking for her fianc pouting …with the teasing comments of her cousins about him ..

After some time when all got introduced ..some of her cousins came to geet who was standing with dadi ..n cornered her ..

Cousin : geet di ..wohh wohh dekhoo ..

Geet : kya dekhna hai …

N she looked away seeing they were pointing at her fianc who was busy talking with his male cousins …she saw him n his persona as usual held her gaze as if made her hypnotized …the useless flirting comments of her cousins wasn't even going in her brain for she was too lost to admire the most handsome bachelor of India her fianc ….n right at that moment he turned n he caught them drooling over him giving a loop sided smile n she dipped her head with embarrassment n she made a escape …while her cousins again approached her …

Cousin : haayee di yeh tou apni pic se bhi ziada hot lagte hain ..sachii kya luck hai ..

Geet was turning red with thr comment n looked evrywhr else than them but seems like even nature is against her thr was a mirror placed in the hall n he was standing just in-front of it chatting with his cousins ..n the minute her eyes fell on his reflection he looked at the mirror frm the corner of his eyes n she got caught again …

Geet (pouting with downcasted face murmured) : uff inki timing bhi na …kabhi galat kyun nhi ho sakti ….😆

Then looked up once again only to see him still seeing her over the shoulder of his cousin standing in front of him …

Cousin : geet di ..geet di bolona ..

Geet came out of her trance n tore her eye lock with him getting flushed with his smirk …n looked down hiding the crimson red color of her cheeks ..

Cousin : kya huya ..itna lal kyun hurahi hoo di ..

Geet : uhh nhi kuch nhi …!!

Cousin : uff di u r such a hitler ..itna acha handsome fianc hai aapka aur itna acha mauqa bhi …koi bara (elder) nhi hai yahan hum par nazar rakhne …koi bandish nhi hai fir bhi aap unse baat karne nhi jaa rahe ..dekhoo abhi tou aapki dadi saas bhi yahan nhi dekh rahi …mana ke Vikas ji ne dadi aur jiju se request kar ke party arrange karwai hai but mauqe ka faida tou aap bhi utha sakte hu ….(geet avoiding thr talks looking for rajji here n thr with her red cheeks ..when after a pause her cousin said)….mien help karoon …??

Geet : tum log na …apne dimag par zara kam zoor daloo aur khabaar daar jo kuch aisa kiya ya kaha ..yahan tum sab meri zimedaari hoo ….koi bhi garbar huyi na tou dekhna …koi zarorat nhi hai mujhe kuch bhi kehne ki unn se samjhi …

Rajji : di plss lecture band karoo apna ..khud tou jiju se bolte nhi humien bhi kuch karne nhi dete ..

Geet : aab tumhare mou par 12 kyun baje hain …aur thi kahan tum ..kahin khud jaa kar Vikas ji se baat karma tou nhi shuru hugayi ..ohh god rajji idiot despo ..kya sochienge tumhare bare mien …mujhe tum log baat maani hi nhi chahiye thi …ek tou dadi maa ne vikas aur tum shaddi se pehle milna chahte thay iss liye itni saari planning ki aur upar se tum ….mene bola tha bola tha unko yeh theek nhi huga ..but meri suntan kuan hai …

Rajji : uhh break lagao geet di ….plss break lagao nhi mili mien vikas ji se ..

Geet left a sigh n looked at the other side seeing the rest of her cousins who were busy chatting with other girls from dadi maa's side …then looked at the pair of eyes who were watching her with concern to see the tensed mark on her face ….an instant relief was thr in her heart like nothing to worry …n she smiled back t HIM that's when rajji turned her 2wards her ..

Rajji : yeh acha hai aap jiju ko iss tarha sab ke saamne drool karoo wohh sahi aur hum kuch Karen tou galat …



Geet (out of words n more over flushed with the sight in front of her the ever so handsome fianc of her with his mesmerizing smile seeing her plight n she pouted looking at the other way ) : nhi wohh aisa kuch nhi hai …mien tou who ..,umm ..

Rajji : chaddo di kisi explanation ki zarorat nhi hai ..aapki jiju ki tou rab ne bana di jori hai na …dono ke dono Hitler ek saath Khurana House ka tou upar wala hi malik ..

Geet : rajjii ..!!!

Cousin : what rajji …theek hi tou keh rahi hai di yeh …aap yahan humien control kar rahe hu being the eldest sister aur wahan wohh unn larkoon ko being the eldest heir of Khurana's the youngest emerging businessman of the year n the ever soo sexyMr.Maan Singh Khurana ….😳😳

Rajji : itni tareef mat karoo warna didu ke cheeks ka red color tomatoes ko bhi competition deega ..😆

Geet was flushed her cheeks burning with the red hue …n she made a escape from thr at a grt pace behind a pillar …only to see the worst nightmare …Maan standing thr talking with some1 on call ….



Her breath caught in her throat the moment he turned n looked at her ..first time ever in last 2yr.s they were ths much close in a family function the hesitance …the nervousness was clear on her face while he was just lost in the serene beauty infront of him standing with a cute worried expression n ever so beautiful red blush covered her milky white cheeks …
He was just mesmerized with her simplicity the fact he loved the most about this girl ..thr was nothing fancy or artificial about her always in her natural beauty shining like a diamond amongst many stones …seeing her glad in a white churidar with minimal yet elegant work of silver …her silky straight black hairs floating in the air …the serene hazel eyes epitome of innocence clutching her dupatta in her hands looking down blushing hard …a sweet smile adorned his face looking at her state n she looked at him from the corner of her eyes just to see what he doing standing thr frozen confused …n immediately looked other way to see his burning gaze over her n made a move from thr hearing the foot steps of dadi approaching thr …leaving a smiling Maan …

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After few minutes dadi maa along with her youngest grand-son n grand-daughter Nishan n Anvesha khurana gathered all the girls n boys together n started saying …

Dadi Maa : bachoon humien tou laga tha yeh party arrange karne ke baad humien yahan se jaana parega aap sab bachoon ko akele chor kar par yahan tou lagta hai humare bagair aap sab kuch kar hi nhi sakte ….

Geet was standing with all her cousins around her looking everywhr else than him ….knowing she won't be able to tore her gaze n again all will get a point to tease her n with dadi maa around she can never take that chance ..!!

While maan was cleverly standing at the back of all in pretext of taking a call but his eyes were fixed on his geet …admiring her dazzled state making her heart beat rose to an exceptional level …n he was just smiling thanking his stars to have given him this angel in his life ….

Nishan : ofcourse not dadi …I mean aap aisa kyun keh rahe hoo …?

Anvesha : tou aur kya kahenge hum Nishan …yeh party arrange karna aap log ki responsibility thi aur yeh yeh arrangement kiya hai ….uhh u r just good for nothing …

Nishan : what ….plzz aniee care to explain tumhain yahan kya flaw dekhai deer aha hai …

Aniee : sab se bara flaw yeh hai ke iss party mien koi DJ nhi hai …aur music ke naam par yeh faltu boring slow songs baja rahe hu …

Nishan : aniee tum na ..

Dadi Maa : acha bas aap dono tou shoro hi hugaye …..point yeh hai ke yahan siwai batoon ke kuch tou hu nhi raha …aur na hi aap log ne plan kiya hai …

Nishan (with a cute pout n baby tone ) : abb dadi bro ne kaha tha no misbehaving …aur girls ke saamne koi flirt nhi karega or he will see him … 😆😳😳😆

With this every1 broke into a fit of laughter along with geet trying to hide her smile failing miserably seeing the angry pout on maan's face n soon got carried away with their eyes lock session immune to the on going discussion n suggestions of all her cousins …lost in his deep dark eyes depicting the depth of his emotions ..speaking volume of his eagerness …admiring his looks giving silent compliments to his Indian attire unlike his usual self making him blush with a cute killer smile in that simple classic kurta …



But soon the silent eye talks of the two love birds got disturbed with a familiar loud voice making her release she was actually gaping at him standing in the middle of all cousins turning crimson red she tried to concentrate on what the other person was saying n got a shock of her life seeing her elder Devar, maan's closest friend n her sister's fianc Vikas standing in front of her demanding to sing a song from her …😳

Dadi Maa : really vikas beta ..humien tou apni bahu ke iss gun ke bare mien pata hi nhi tha …

Vikas : really dadi maa, mene sunna hai humari bhabiji buhat acha gaati hain .. tou iss waqt mauqa bhi hai dastoor bhi ..

Geet was clutching her duppata …looking down then towards every1 present thr looking at her soo expectantly getting hell nervous with all this ..

Nishan (placing his hand over his shoulder) : waise vikas bro …yeh tou batao humari bhabi ke bare mien achanak itni info aayi kahan se …😉(pointing at Rajji from his eye)

Then vikas looked towards the blushing rajji standing thr all red …yet smiling looking at him …n then lowering her eyes with the shyness ..while vikas smiled n went towards geet n made her sit on one of the sofa …bending on his knees himself sat in front of her …n said

Vikas : bhabi aap ki tou maan ke saath sagai huye 2saal hugaye na …par ek baar bhi milli nhi aap uss se ..

Geet lowered her lashes feeling her cheeks getting warm with the blush ..n smiled faintly at his gestures …

Vikas : par maan se milne se pehle bhi tou kitne sapne hunge na aapke …apne jiwan saathi ko lekar ..

Geet was tou all sharam se pani pani …didn't knew whr to look ..he is her devar n asking such questions ..while rajji stood thr behind her n saw Vikas gaze on her n get to know it was all for her he saying all this ..n smiled thanking her parents mentally to have brought this person in her life as now she is sure he will be the best for her …

Vikas : tou kya aapka dil kehta hai ke aap ke saare sapne maan poore kar paayega ….i mean kya itna bharosa ek anjaan insaan par kar paayingi aap ..?



Geet just looked towards the area whr maan was standing looking keenly at her response n all she could do was smile n convent that YES SHE DO …for she just couldn't gather enough words to describe that trust she had for him …n maan smiled back with the proud n satisfied look in his eyes to see the trust in her eyes …

N that's when rajji came to answer …

Rajji : but yahi sawal geet di bhi tou jiju se kar sakti hain na ..kya who itna yaqeen kar paayenge ek ajnabi par ke apni poori zindagi ...apne room se lekar apne jazbaat tak sab kuch share kar paayenge di ke saath …??

Vikas stood up n smiled knowing that was for him ….but before he could say something Nishan came n said ..

Nishan : yahan sab itni serious kyun hugaye ….vikas bro yeh kya sapne …trust …yaqeen laga rakha aap log ne ..hum yahan masti ki baat kar rahe thay ….aur aap log …

While geet ws lost in maan's smile n his blinking assuring eyes to say YES HE DO ….n the most inchanting smile adorned her angelic face with a slight misty eyes …she immediately wipe the tear layer away from her eyes n maan shook his head ..

Maan : miss.senti ..but still she looks really cute with that red nose ..!! 😳😳



N thr came aniee with her demand for her bhabi ..

Aniee : to think about ..geet bhabi Vikas bhai ne aapko song ke liye kaha aur mien keh rahi hoon ke aap koi aisa song gaoo jo aapke mere ..i mean har teenage girl ke dreams ko define kare …jo bhi sapne aap ne dekhe thay ….jo aaj yahan har larki ki aankhoon mien hai ….

Dadi Maa : bilkul theek kaha aniee ne …after all sapne poore karne ke liye jaan'na bhi tou zarori hai …(with a teasing smile)

Nishan : but dadi iss tarha tou maan bro ko bhi gana chahiye …

Rajji : han mene suna hai jiju apne college mein rockband ke lead singer thay …??

Vikas : well that's true …he was ..oyee Mr.MSK wahan kya silent spectator ki tarha khara hai …yahan aao ..

Hayee geet was tou soo nervous sitting thr …n stood up seeing him coming towards her her heart was doing somersault …n she was just praying to god for a reason which can help her escape this moment ….but most importantly from his captivating eyes …

Geet (st) : plss bacha lo babaji apni bachi ko …yahan sab ke saamne gana …meri tou awaaz nhi nikalti aur gana ….pakka koi na koi garbar karoon gi ..plss bachalo …plss 😳😳😆😳😳

N finally we could hear the most exotic manly voice making the girl drool over him …then themselves making each other come back from thr la la land …

Maan : well abb yeh typical teenage dreams kiya hote hain I don't knw ..coz meri life mien iss sab fazool kamoon ke liye kabhi jaga nhi thi but han kuch sapne abb zaror zindagi ka hissa hain ..😳😳

Vikas : yrr tujhe tou bhagwan ne yeh looks dee kar zaya kardi apni mehnat ..😛😛

While maan glanced back at him giving a typical MSK glare …while geet just stood thr confused to what all this is leading to ……but more than that she was having those butterfly feeling listening to his words ..confessing his feeling like this in front of every 1 …

Vikas : oyee hello yeh sab looks apne office mien dena jahan 3 saal se sab ka jeena haraam kara hai tune ….(giving a meaningful look) ..mujh se tera koi raaz chupa nhi hai samjha …
Chalo abhi chup chap sharafat se dono ek acha sa duet suna do warna ek ek kar ke yahan sare raaz khulta jaaonga …😉

Aniee: bhai ke aise kuanse raaz hain ….bolo na Vikas bhaiya …pls bolona ..

Vikas : sochlo maan …boldoon aniee ko …

Geet was turing pale in worry looking at vikas …n then maan n he left giving an assuring look to her like .. "don't worry nothing will happen" ..
N left leaving her in the middle of dozens of pleading cousins …nervous like hell …

N then came the music making everyone stop in thr track n geet stood thr only while everyone made thr way towards the sound source …only to witness the ever soo handsome MSK standing thr with a sweet smile on his sexy face hardly been seen off late …announcing glancing straight at the other end of the hall whr geet was standing confused or may be lost …smiling yet blushing looking down with all the teasing eyes …



Maan : ek geet unn khwaboon ke naam jo yahan mujood har larke ..har larki ne dekha …kuch alfaaz inke jazbaatoon ke liye ..aur kuch sur un ankahi baton ke naam ….

Coming in the middle of the crowd ..she said looking straight into his eyes pouring out her heart …

Geet : yeh geet unn yadoon ke naam jo anmol hain …unn khamosh lamhoon ke naam jo hawa ke jhoke ki tarha aaye bhi aur chale bhi gaye … uss umeed ke naam jo yahan sab ki ankhoon mien hai …magar phir bhi ankahi hai ...

All were standing in awe listening to thr talks ….witnessing the divine couple standing in one frame for the 1st time …the purity of thr relation depicting in each of thr gestures ….

N here both made thr way in the opposite directions ..

Geet behind all the girls ….n maan on the DJ table playing his choice of starter music setting the mood for her ..while she smiled with the way he helped her out of those nervous moments …making her confident enough to start …

N soon the hall echoed with the most serene voice …of a blushing geet who was walking behind her cousins ..occasionally looking towards the crowd n Maan ….

While every1 from her side was stunned with the lyrics ….but surprisingly all the members from Maan's side was looking awe struck with her heavenly voice hypnotized with her innocent beauty praising her …n rajji n vikas were lost seeing at each other smiling occasionally looking away getting shy

sorry people no U-Tube
here is another link
its a song from movie Hum Hain Rahi Pyar ke


Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkartaa …
Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkartaa …


N geet cam in front of Rajji cupping her face she stood thr singing n then moved her hands to twirl with hers' n they took a little circular round …
N geet moved behind her placing her head on her shoulder seeing maan standing thr with his hands crossed on his well built chest n a smile on his handsome face …
Both were lost in thr own world remembering thr first encounter ..the first time they actually met each other ..

In college campus where maan was as usual playing his guitar in the morning with his friends n many other student beside him in the college canteen be4 morning lecture n the way he was looking at her all the while singing the song THAT time…just the same look that he is having in his eyes at THIS moment …she smiled n lowered her lashes with the thought how she was hypnotized with his intense gaze THAT very first time …

kaash koi ladka mujhe pyaar karta
kaash koi ladka mujhe pyaar karta

geet moved 4ward only to bump into her friend meera thr from Maan's side n received a teasing smile from her …for thr eye lock session which didn't go un-noticed by her ..while maan was still following her with his eyes …remembering how he was lost in her simplicity …her innocent hazels captivating the whole world in them …how he couldn't help but admire her beauty …for first time MSK was lost in a woman's look THAT day …

remembering the 4 months of thr college when everytime he was falling for her …be it her intelligence …her childish nature …her sophisticated personality amongst all the flirt boys …or her smile n that slight blush every time thr eyes met ….



He shook his head seeing her doing the same thing here hiding behind every other person to avoid him …yet the small smile n that ever soo beautiful red shade of her cheeks which always makes him lost in her serene beauty ….

Placing his hand around Vikas shoulder he stood thr singing, making all girls go mad with his sweet magnetic voice …while geet was lost in his expressive eyes …which was the mirror of his heart n soul …depicting what was going in his mind …

Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkarti...
Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkarti ...

She stood thr with a thoughtful face remembering the day of college cultural party …when for the 1st time she was arranging all the function as told by the princi but as usual some guys were thr to flirt with her ...



after good 7months in the most prestigious college of Mumbai amongs these spoilt brats it was now very usual for a beautiful girl like her to tackle such flirt comments but that day she was nervous coz of the function prep. N than those irritating boys but top of it she was conscious as she knew her savior her Maan wasn't around her n those boys were looking drunk so only she made a escape but situation went worse n they started cornering her in worst positiong of her but soon a giant figure appeared in front of her protecting her from those perverts lusty gaze ….smaching their faces black n blue ..

kaash koi ladki mujhe pyaar karti ..
kaash koi ladki mujhe pyaar karti ..

geet broke out of her trance with Rajji's tab n looked around her restlessly n found maan standing just in front of her with a concerned look ..she sighed seeing him …n shook her head in denial like 'nothing' but maan was still nt looking convinced n started approaching her …



making her scared like anything she eyed him to stop but he being he didn't listen n just then Aniee came thr by her side n she pleaded from her eyes to stop …her baby worried face made him halt a bit n then every one surrounded them at either side of the hall ….

Music ..

Maan was still standing with his cousins looking geet talking giggling with all the girls thr ..but he could clearly see the tense lines on her forehead …n the way she was playing with her engagement ring …he knew what she was thinking …



he went towards a lone corner looking at geet admiring her relation with all her cousin sisters ….her love for her family ..the respect she holds for all of them …the way she has mingled with his family members …still thinking if he loves her more or respect her more for the fact he has never met such a innocent angel in his life …belonging to a high class society he often encountered many girls flashing around throwing themselves but SHE ….she was all what can define culture n intelligence although studying away from her house in a co-education she never forget the values of her family even for once in her life ….she is indeed the most divine angel of God sent by Him for him n only him in this world …

While geet stood in the middle of all ..yet immune to all the voices n words remembering the most serene words she ever heard in the most dreadful situation she was in ever ….
Seeing maan beating those guys furiously all the students gathered around with her friends consoling her …n geet stood thr with pools of tear flowing out of her hazels seeing maan red in anger clutching her duppata around her torn cloths she was dazzled with all what happened in few minutes listening to all the accusation those perverts were doing about maan-geet making her sob hard n next maan grabed his collar n shouted on top of his voice ..

Maan : han lagti hai meri ….kuch nhi SAB KUCH LAGTI HAI meri yeh larki … pyaar karta hoon iss se ..aur yaad rakhna dobara agar meri geet taraf aankh utha dekhna tou buhat door agar socha bhi tou zindagi ka dosra pal dekhne ke liye zinda nhi bacho ge …

Ooo …


Geet was yet again lost in his authoritive voice n her eyes got mist remembering the way she ran to HP the very next morning knowing that her family wont agree for thr relation n their life will be a total mess after that ..n then saw Maan standing thr in a corner still admiring her …n she got lost in the same love in his eyes she saw at THAT time when he proposed her at the BUS STAND in front of all ..

Maan : geet I kow jo huwa wohh aise nhi huna chahiye tha ….but plss believe me every word I said last night wasn't a lie ..yes I said it all in cheer anger but it wsn't an outcome of my anger I really do L…

Geet (with mist lowered eyes n chocked voice) : plss aap …aap chale jayee yahan se aur jane dijeye mujhe bhi …this is all wrong n I…..I don't have any feelings 2wards u ..just go away …



Maan : geet plss ek mauqa tou dee kar dekhoo mujhe ….i really wanna have that place in ur heart in ur life …I want to hold u right beside me as mine ..just mine ..Maan ki Geet …
I wanna marry u geet …plss just one chance …!!

Geet came back to reality with her cousin's tab ..n then her teasing look pointing towards maan who was still thr seeing her with the same look of love n respect n his eyes …😳

N she smiled faintly remembering how much she wanted to say out her feeling at that bus stand but couldn't …n sang the words …

Meri maang mein cand taare sajaata...
Jo mein rooth jaati mujhe wo manaata ..
Jo mein rooth jaati mujhe wo manaata ..

She walked towards Aniee n gave her a side hug which Aniee reciprocated n smiled while geet moved ahead n Nishan came in front of her giving her a rose she smiled n accepted it n saw vikas taking maan back with all of them ..
She smiled at him ..n looked down saw her engagement ring …a wide smile n a proud feeling enveloped her existence …next maan's valet fell on the ground n every1 present thr saw her engagement day picture in his valet ….the whole hall was by now filled with teasing comments n hooting making her go red even more if that was possible while every1 at his side was shut with one glare of his ….
N she giggled seeing him slightly blushing with his very own darling sis Aniee's naughty comments …n then looked at her hand which had a very small old burn mark she got duringworking in kitchen (just an accident nothing else 😃) ..her smile faded remembering those torturing moments in HP after she left rejecting maan on that Bus Stand KNowing the boundaries created by her family doesn't allow her to come with him …
The most toughest part of her life when in every moment she knew it would take just few hours to be in Mumbai with maan but then the thought what after that her family will nvr accept this love marriage n then the situation will be same …so only she left him thinking he will get over his attraction within some time …
n smiled with what she saw at present ..SHE standing thr in between all HIS cousin sister as HIS fiance ...

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PART 2

haalat meri wo jaanta ..
dhadkan meri pehchantaa ..

girl came around n started dancing in a circle in Punjabi gitta style ..along with boys …maan n geet whr accidently or fortunately opposite to each other in the circle …smiling remembering the way he came to HP with his family …



she was hell scared with her sudden alliance n the constant family pressure to agree as the groom was one in a million …
she looked at him …still wondering how he got to know all why she left but then smiled seeing him winking at her with no one else noticing …blushing she went away from thr n stand in a corner with dadi …

still in that very thought ….the day he came to HP 2 yrs back with dadi maa n thr meeting her room ..with that usual smirk of his seeing her confused state …n leaned on the closed doors …

she pouted remembering that sweet khatta metha first official encounter of thr …1st time they were talking casually …or rather say he was saying n she was listening stunned with the depth of his feelings …HE ACTUALLY FAKED THAT ARRANGE MARRIAGE ALLIANCE TO GET HER IN HIS LIFE N MAKE HER FAMILY AGREE …

apni bhi chahat ka ikraar karta
apni bhi chahat ka ikraar karta ..

she was lost in her own world …remembering each n every word he carved on her heart that day ..the sincerity in his word n the depth of his voice together with the oceans of love he holds in his eyes …she was just captivated in those looks just like THAT day ..

Maan (looking straight in her eyes) : hope abb tum mera proposal reject nhi karogi ..😉😛

Geet (with mist eyes guilty n confused) : par yeh ..aapko kaise pata chala mien …

Maan : hmm.. well lets say it as tum se ziada tumhari ankhein mujh se baat karti hain …😳😳

Instantly geet looked at him with soo much of respect thinking what this man has in his self that makes her fall for him every time …from the day she saw him singing his heart touching voice pulled her towards him like a fire to moth n then over last 7 months every day seeing him n his pure n serene nature she has fallen for him irrevocably …

Maan : sach mien itna bol diya bus stand par khare hukar …2 line nhi bol sakti thi ke GHAR WALOON SE DARR KAR MUJH SE BHAG RAHI HOO …

She looked every whr else then him …her eyes burning with fresh tears while he stood thr observing her state knowing it was needed to open her up just to insure his stupid MIND that yes she love me ….though his HEART knew it from the start that she is his only Maan ki Geet …but yet he wanted to knw it frm her once just once …



Geet (looking down with wet cheeks) : ghar waloon se nhi …aapko paa kar khone dar rahi thi ….mien janti hoon yahan koi humare saath ko pasand nhi karta aur apni family ke khilaaf jaa kar aapka saath nhi dee pati …iss liye ..

Maan's heart pained to see the pain on her face depicting how much she would have been going through since last 1 week …he took few steps in her direction n held her chin up with his finger n wiped her tear stricken face with the tip of his finger …looking at her with same love n longing ….

Both shiver with the 1st ever touch n geet backed a step with the all new tickling feeling she felt in her stomach n her body goose bumps while maan smiled looking at her tomato red face …blushing a bit with this all new feeling ..

Maan : itna bhi yaqeen nhi tha ke mien tumhain tumhari family ke khilaaf jane ka mauqa nhi donga ….😲

Geet looked at him baffled …n he looked at her accusing for a second to have hide her feeling then softened seeing her guilty respectful hazels loking at him with soo much of love …

Geet (lowered head muffing her running nose ) : Sorry ..😳

Maan smiled at her sweet childish act ..n then said in a baby tone with a cute pout …

Maan : abhi bhi SORRY …😆

Geet looked at him questioning …like THAN …??

Maan : mera jawab tou do …abb bhi proposal accept karogi ya nhi ..?

Geet blushingly smiled n lowered her head ..then turned opening the door with a teasing smiled said over her shoulder ..

Geet : Jawaab tou maa ko hi batana huta hai na …

But be4 she could step out of her room his voice made her stop …

Maan : well Ms.Geet Handa ….abb aapka jawab kuch bhi hu get that clear with next 2 years baad tumhara sir-name change hone wala hai …remember that …


kaash koi ladka mujhe pyar karta ...


geet smiled full heartedly …remembering that meeting n the way her family was happy on this alliance but she was actually very thankful to her Babaji for bringing this angel in her life who made all her dreams come true …today only coz of him she is an Interior Designer or her family won't have let her complete her graduation …she smiled seeing him talking with Vikas n other cousins while all her cousins soon made thr way towards them …

n maan smiled seeing her back to normal ..he sent a msg to her ..n she gt confuse as to way her mbl is vibrating since all r here then smiled seeing its an fb msg she opened n read it ..

Msg : itna mat socho mishty warna Rajji ke ques. Ke answer nhi dee paongi tum apne tomato red cheeks ke saath aur han ….mujhe abhi bhi mera jawab nhi diya tum ne mishty ….😲😲
waise aaj bhi utni hi pyaari lag rahi hoo musrukate huye …😳😳

N next she heard his voice this time rather complaining one ..

Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkarti ..
Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkarti ..

She just smiled n looked away from those most expressive deep ocean brown eyes in the world going in the middle of her cousins seeing him approaching her her heart skipped its beats n he with a smirk passed through them grabbing a glass of juice humming the lyric as if nothing happened while geet turned beat root red with the teasing comments of her cousins …
N went in a lone corner clutching her heart trying to slow down her heart beat which at the moment were in a somersault ….

kaash koi ladki mujhe pyaar karti
kaash koi ladki mujhe pyaar karti

n she remembered that blissful day seeing the engagement ring in her hand sparking …the day she got marked as his …the day of thr engagement she got dressed in his choice of cloths n went down only to get crimson red under his intense gaze fixed on her all the while until Vikas poked his shoulder ..n received an angry glare …a wide smile spread across her face yet AGAIN just like THAT day thinking his popped out big eyes …n his funny angry caught face ..n she chuckled mumbling DHUST DANAV …

Ooo

N next she felt her whole body shivering with his closeness ..didn't knew if he did it deliberately or nt standing just the right side of the same pillar behind which she was hiding …he said in ever soo romantic tone which made her lost her sanity n stood thr unaware of her surrounding ..thinking how every time he is able to make her spell bounded with just his presence around her …without uttering a single word to her directly he says n understand everything about her …


wo bechain hoti,
mein betaab hota..
nigahon me uski mera khwaab hota
nigahon me uski mera khwaab hota ..



she stood thr wondering how can he love her soo much ….what is it in her ….how can she be soo lucky to have him in her life …
2-1/2 years ….its been 2-1/2 year they met first but still he never tried to approach her for he knew she will never go out of her boundaries getting close with a stranger breaking the trust of her family with which they allowed her to study in a big city like Mumbai …
But still he was always thr for her …in every trouble silently helping her through others …sending Meera in her group his first move …then guarding her from all those nasty boys of college his second attempt in thr silent relation ..
She always knew he is doing all this but never she understood as to y he is doing all this …she knew she is highly attracted towards him ..his sincere nature n honest words distinguishes him from all other but the pure coconut like heart is his most best quality …she stood smiling with her own thoughts n his lines echoeing in her ears …

Her trance was broken by her cousins who came thr n caught her gaping at maan who was bye now in the middle of his cousins smirking at her puzzled face n confused pouting expressions …smiling …god that smile is my death she thought with crimson red cheeks only to receive the most teasing comments from rajji …n she made a escape 2wards Aniee ..
N he came thr with Aniee's favorite chocolate cake in a tray for all n asked the waiter to serve us ..n his baby sister Aniee pounced at him in a hug for this ….n she smiled seeing the adorable sight …
But he winked at her …well that means it was actually for Geet at first place she smiled n looked down knowing he heard Rajji n her talk, grinning ovr the desert to be chocolate fugde cake her favorite …
She looked at him standing at a distance while she was sitting with Dadi, Aniee, Rajji, Nishan, Vikas, an some other cousins on a table having thr dinner ..lost in thr own world for some special moments both lost themselves in the spell …



Standing in the middle of the decorated hall …she stood thr smiling blushing while he placed his finger at her n lifted her chin to make her look at him, she obliged …n both saw each other with a sweet smile …staring straight at each other …his hand moved to her wrist …she shuddered with the sensation building in her …n moved away …but he held her wrist captivate in his grip saying the most romantic verses …turning her around ..

sharmaa ke woh lagti gale
rakta use palkon tale

she turned around with a blushy lowered face ..smiling with his words n saw him from the corner of her eyes …n he smirked jerking her 2wards himself he locked her in his embrace making her breath go shallow along with his lost heart beats ..placing the hair strand behind her ear he stood thr admiring her for the first time soo closely that not even air has the permission to separate them ….

chori chori woh mera deedaar karti ..
chori chori woh mera deedaar karti ..

it felt magical …perfect like nature n pure like first drop of rain …he moved his head ahead to place his cold rough lips over her marble silky white forehead ….
but be4 that waiter dropped a glass n thr gaze tore away making them both come back to reality ..they looked away embarrassed as if the other one got to know what they were thinking …skipping from the awkward situation n geet concentrated on what aniee was saying trying to control her blushing cheeks along with her fast racing heart …

kaash koi ladki mujhe pyaar karti
kaash koi ladki mujhe pyaar karti

after sometime with him not being around she got restless n excusing from all she made her way to search him …n saw him talking with someone may be in KC ..she stood thr trying to read his face with the changing expressions from anxiety to happiness then all of a sudden serious …
she still remember the way she use to giggle whenever he got to shout at any person in front of her n then suddenly when he use to get quite with her around as if his mom saw him stealing something ….
Indeed he was a child by heart ….but seems to be a stubborn one …she smiled when she saw him scolding the manager for putting extra spice in some of the dish …remembering how much he use to scold that canteen boy if once in a blue he accidentally put extra chilies in his order …uff poor guy use to get hell scared ..but then maan always use to apologies to him for his temper after finishing is food …😳
The fact he never flashes his goodness she admires the most …though very serious n mature he is but still the way he was with his friends often made her confuse with the contradiction in him …

Over the time …the more she got to know him the more she felt non-worthy to even have a tint of such feelings in her heart for him coz he is a shining star in the sky shimmering without a single flaw but she ….she is nothing but a dust ..a mere dust n thus she never considered herself anywhr near him ..
But guess she is lucky enough to possess this star in her destiny …she went away from thr smiling when Aniee again asked her to sing …n she sang remembering all thr cutie memories of her college though they never intended to but guess destiny wanted them to be 2gether just she was nt listening to it …

Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkartaa
Mujhse mohabbat ka izhaarkartaa

N finally all got in the middle of the floor dancing with the music …n they both just looked at each other standing at either ends geet …
Remembering thr LAST MEETING BE4 THIS PARTY…after he made Dadi call her house to ask her parents to let her complete her studies …

She smiled with slight tears in her eyes with the memory of that Friendship Day she resumed her college …n he was thr for his last pre-board paper …they did saw each other in the morning as usual he was thr in the canteen but to her surprise he wasn't singing …that made her astonished as she knew it ws his daily practice to atleast play a single piece of music from his guitar but then Meer shocked her coming infront of her …saying with a wide smile ..

Meer : finally tum aayi …congrats (but geet was confused as she never told her abt thr engagement then) What ..ohh tum tou aaj bhi ek secret nhi janti .. well Ms.Geet Handa yeh jou duffer betha hai na tumhare samne (pointing at maan) mien galti se inke best friend Vikas ki choti behen hoon aur inn dono idiots ne mujhe hi use kiya tha yeh jaane ke liye if u have any feeling towards him ….

Geet was shocked beyond words …n lowered her lashes in guilt she will never be able to forgive herself for whatever she said to him on that Bus Stand ….for she knows how much she has hurt him at that time the mere look of his eyes was enough for her to know all …but be4 her hazels could shed a single tear down on the ground she saw a palm below her lashes n looked up to see …n who it can be other than maan who stood thr admiring her with look of longing same as she held in her eyes …saying sorry …but as usual he smiled indicating to need to say sorry …how beautiful it is to experience a feeling beyond words …

ankahe jazbaat bhi ..
khamoshi ki baat bhi ..
aur kuch khus'numa lamha'at bhi ..
(By Me..)

Vikas : chal beta abb tou gana suna'na hi parega after all bhabi ke aane aur humare college ke last day dono jashn ek saath mana hai humien aaj ..

Maan smiled n moved to his table grabbing his guitar singing his favorite song …while geet sat in front of him gazing him with all the love she had for him ….thinking what life will be with him if just being around him gives her soo much of happiness …

By the end of the day she was back to normal with meer n her other friend .. geet was always full of life but with this feeling to belong to someone just filled her another spirit in her …the thought in itself was incredible …
N that day was the best of her life …bye the end of the day maan left the college after his exam with a bouquet ..friendship band n a new cell phone for her in Vikas's hands …with a number saved in the cell with the name Mystic Owner …she smiled seeing the name it was his nick name with which she made his first sketch …yes she made his sketch being a interior designer she is master in it ….well today to count it is in-numerable but the first one he got was having this name in the bottom with her name on the header …

kaash koi ladka mujhe pyaar karta ..
kaash koi ladka mujhe pyaar karta ..

the music was fading …n soo as her clouds of the memories ….they bother stood thr living this moment knowing after this thr will be again a separation for next 2 months for be4 thr marriage no one will be having any function so no chance for them to meet …it will again be just some fluke excuses to have a letter or something with minimal chances …

Music …

With the party at its end Maan asked Vikas to go to the back side of the hall n geet made Rajji go thr ..so that they can have a bit of a chat …as all the cousins were bye now near the exit going towards thr respective rooms …
Maan n geet also made thr way out with all of them ….while geet received a paper from a waiter n she wiped off that mist layer from her eyes …n read

Msg : agar aise aansoon bahaoogi tou mujhe wahan akar dobara apne moti chun'ne pareinge …

Thr was an instant smile on her face ..n she started looking around to see him …last time one last time be4 leaving but he was no whr to be seen …she was desperately scanning the whole hall …n then her eyes felt on the single finger standing in a corner with a serious face which immediately formed a smiled seeing at her …



Maan stood thr with his hands folded on his chest …his heart paining seeing her going away ..he knew its for good …knew it will be the last time …knew needed for them to be 2gether till eternity but still seeing her going away heis heart was nt at all able to believe any single logical reasons from his heart yet seeing her mist eyes he couldn't resist but to send a waiter with a note just to make her smile a bit ….just to see that smile n capture it in his heart like others from her to live next 2 months ..



Geet stood thr gazing his face ..his serene smile n that pure deep brown eyes that hold the oceans of love just for her …smiling she just couldn't gather enough courage to walk away knowing it will the last time till thr marriage day she will be seeing him ..knowing she will never be able to listen to his exotic manly commanding voice even from TV…her eyes again got mist with fresh tears beaming in them

n he took 2 steps forward not able to see those priceless pearls slipping away like that ….but to his astonishment for the first time she didn't moved from her place neither she broke her eye contact as if she wanted him to come n wipe those tears away …as if she was standing thr to be swept off in his warm embrace away from all these boundaries of ritual …completely lost in thr own world of khamoshi they stood 2gether just few steps away looking at each other saying in-numerable things with just thr eyes speaking n lips static …a world they created themselves for themselves where nothing else mattered ..no ritual no boundaries …nothing just them two n thr love ..

but just then rucha came running from behind n stood thr seeing the 2 alone ...n coughed ..bith broke away embarrassed ...n made thr way towards their rooms .

geet was walking towards her room alone thinking about all what happened in the party smiling lost in his voice ..n bumped into Rucha ...

Rucha : ahh di dekh kar …

Geet : um sorry ruch I am really sorry mera dhyan nhi tha …sorry tumhain lagi tou nhi ..?

Rucha : nhi I am fine di chill kuch nhi huya ..waise chalo room mien hi jaa rahe hu na saath chalet hain waise bhi rajji madam tou apne room ka door open kar nhi rahi …

Geet (forceful smile) : ummm han who change kar rahi hongi …

Rucha : di sachi batao aap abhi Maan jiju ke bare mien soch rahi thi na ..sachi u both were looking soo adorable that time gazing each hayeee ...

Geet (looking here n thr ...blushing) : kya mien …mien kyun sochne lagi unke bare mien …

Rucha : han di aap kyun sochne lagi unke bare mien …god geet di plzz dekhta hain humien poori party mien ek minute ke liye bhi aap dono ki nazrein ek dosre se nahi hati …

Geet was smiling remembering all those moments …his smile his concern ..an instant blush spread across her creamy white cheeks ..

Geet : nhi rucha who tou bas ..

Rucha : arre di iss mien galat kya hai ..i know humari family kuch chatter box girls ki waja se aap ne party mien Maan jiju se baat nhi ki na jab ke waha koi elder nhi tha apart from ur ever soo cool modern Dadi saas ..warna yeh saari baat kisi na kisi tarha humari chahi ji …tai ji ..mami ji sab ko pata chal jati …😡😡

Geet : hmm.. Rucha tou tu janti hai sab log ko …mien kabhi nhi chahoongi ke koi bhi maa se koi bhi sawaal kare aur meri waja se maa ko sharmenda hona pare …

Rucha : I knw iss hi liye tou Rano mami ne aapke bharose hum sab ko bheja .. waise kuch bhi kahoo aap hu bare lucky …

Geet (smiled broadly) : hmm woh tou mien hoon …

Both girls looked at each other then laughed entering in thr room …whr Rucha went in changing room straight while geet stood thinking about Rajji's arrival n that's when she received a msg from Raji ..

N then laid on the bed but be4 she could read the msg …felt something below her pillow …she got up n checked …only to see a silver gift wrapped box …n then thought to see the msg …

MSG : on the way toward room luv ya di …u r the bestest …n han pillow ke neeche KISI KA surprise hai tumhare liye check kar lena …*winks*

Geet smiled reading the msg n held HIS gift in her hand admiring …smiling blushing …feeling thousands of butterflies in her stomach while opening it ..

Her jaw dropped down seeing the white gold bracelet with lots of hearts nMnG letters in between them hanging …glittering with diamonds studs …she smiled whole heartedly with the thought of his thinking to but this …n she saw the letter placed below it …she was soo much in love with this person Maan ….that now even she cant tell n see any boundaries thr around her love …smiling she opened the letter n started reading ..

MSG : well mishty pehle apni palkooon par se yeh jo mere moti girne ki planning kar rahe hain unko saaf karo …

Geet smiled wiping her mist eyes n then looked at the bracelet overwhelmed with his love n care …then resumed reading the msg..

MSG : hmm so abb hum tou 2 din baad aapka b,day aapko har saal ki tarha khud aakar nhi dee sakte HP mien tou socha aaj hi dee doon ..
U know wht geet mene jab yeh design imagine kiya tou ek hi baat mann mien aayi ke meri ek nishani tumhari ungli mien hai "ring" joh tumhare dil tak ati hai …ek nishani mien tumhain humari shaddi par pehna'donga jo theek tumhare dil ke paas huga "mangalsutra" but yeh mujhe aur mere ehsaas ko tumhare radial pulse ke paas humesha rakhe ga ….tou technically mien tumare paas honn ya nhi par tumhari har dharkan tumhain mera ehsaas karayi gi …har pal har samay mera pyaar tumhare saath harm or par rahe ga ..
Aur abb meri yaad aye tou rooo kar mere anmol motiyoon ko zaya mat karma …bulke enagement ring ke saath iss bracelet ke hearts mien chupe MnG ko saath dekh kar mujhe aisi hi ek mishty si smile dee'dena ..

Geet smiled with the purity of his love …thinking how very time this man manages to touch her heart with his gestures …he never approached her to meet in a lonely time though her last 2 years in Mumbai studying thr was best time for them but yet just coz he knew she will never want to go against her family's rituals he never made any attempt yet at every time he was thr for her ….thought it be to release her exam time tension through his msges n roses in her aunt's house whr she lived or be it her family constant attempts to make thr marriage early …he always made it a clear thorn free path for her …

N here yet again he is thr knowing she will be low leaving Mumbai to that strict family atmosphere of HP …with his own way to make her believe he is thr …though she very well know thr she will not be able to even see him thorugh those press conferences ….but the thought of his love n his care is all enough to make her smile …n thr she sat with a big broad smile ..remembering the last two b,days …

His visit to her house with different excuses either with meera or with his family to give her b,day gift himself …not to forget that one red rose ..

Maan on the other hand in his balcony smiled remembering her blushing face all the while in party throughout …n shook his head …

Maan paced in his balcony with coffee mug in one hand n In other his mbl gazing her picture on his wallpaper ..smiling remembering the college time when he use to secretly stock her everywhr …sitting in the library till late for her …just be around her gives him this much happiness then thought how it would be to have her with him around him 24/7 after thr marriage ..

He smiled n shook his head over his thought ….murmuring to the moon ..

Maan : kya bana diya tum ne mujhe geet …see a typical majnu god y love u soo much that even the thought of nt seeing u is making me this much restless …mene kabhi nhi socha tha ke meri zindagi mien bhi yeh waqt aayega jab kisi ki khamoshi bhi mujhe jeene ka aur jitna hosla dee jayegi .. abb tou soch kar bhi ajeeb lagta hai ke kaisi hugi wohh subha jab mien tumhara college gate par wait nhi kar raha hoonga …kaisa huga woh din jab meeting khatam karne ki jaldi nhi hugi ..tumhari ek jhalak pane ki umeed nhi hugi ….

On the other hand …She removed he lone tear escaping her eyes ..n grabbed the bracelet in her hand ….mutely crying sobbing with the thought she won't be in touch with him for nxt 2 months ..its been 2 years of thr engagement n now thr chat conversation is a part of thr life …then how come they survive without that ..the mere thought disturbed her …n she moved to her balcony ..
To have that soothing cold breeze sooth her restless heart …to feel the air with his essence ….again with the thought that after 2morrow even this air will be change …dull n pricking without his effect in it …

Geet : kya kar diya aap ne mere saath maan …zindagi mien kabhi kisi ka itna gehra asar nhi huya mujh par …2 saal se iss hi hawa mien jee rahi hoon magar kabhi ehsaas nhi huya ke aapki sansoon ki garmi mien yeh hawa meri sansoon ki zarorat ban gayi hai …aur aaj aapse door jane ke khayaal se bhi darr lag raha hai …

Restless both just couldn't have sleep tonight …the last night in the same air with 2 months separation …hell it was to even think of it …but then its another ritual which they will have to follow …

Remembering those small silent encounters both somehow went to sleep only with a hope to meet in thr dream land ….

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Morning came with a fresh feeling for all but the 2 souls were still gloomy sitting with all the elders of the family member in the dinning hall of the hotel having thr breakfast stealing glances with slighty red eyes depicting thr sleepless night …

N then finally the moment came of Handa's departure …everyone bid bye geet was busy greeting to all the elders of Khurana's n Vikas's side auntis thr ….listening to her marriage talk scanning the area to see if maan was thr ..while maan was thr with the waiter to chk if all the luaguage is packed along with Vikas …

Vikas : yrr yeh Handas ka aaj jana zarori hai ….i mean 2 ..3 din ruk jaate ..

But maan didn't paid any attention …as he was lost in his own devdas world …thinking how will he manage to see his mishty leaving so only he came here to escape that moment ..but hell he is not even able to stay away from her now only …without answering vikas he made his way towards all the family members to greet all …

Maan greeted all the members of handa family touching thr feets n went paas geet with a silent look of longing …but smiled for her to make her smile …

Within few minutes all the people started getting in the cars while geet n maan stood thr stairing at each other lost cursing all the ritual to have separated them …

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**

In geet's car ..

Rajji : ufff hoo di abb bas karoo piche dekhna …agar HP jaogi nhi tou wapis maan jiju se shaddi karke humesha ke liye aaogi kaise …

Geet looked at rajji with her teary hazels n buried her face in her embrace nt wanting the other to see her like this ….then recalling her words she tried making up her mind …n smiled faintly at Rajji coming out of her embrace ..

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Outside Car ..

Vikas : yrr meer dadi se baat kar ken a Maan ki shaddi delay kara dete hain ..

Listening this maan who was till now stairing at geet's car without blinking immediately turned 2wards Vikas n glared at him ….

While a confused meera questioned ..

Meera : what vikas bhai aap pagal tou nhi huye na …yeh kya keh rahe hoo ?

Vikas : han meer dekh maan ki wedding postponed kara kar handas ke saath geet ko bhi yahan hi rok lete hain …(seeing the tease on vikas's meer smiled n supported him)

Meera : yeah right option boora nahi hai …waise bhi iss waqt tou maan ko dekh kar aisa lag raha hai ke geet HP nhi yeh vida hukar humesha ke liye HP jaa raha hu ..

Listening to meer's word maan was shocked n angered …n glared her only to make her laugh …

Meer : now dnt give me that look …plss yrr tou aise senti hu raha hai jaise humesha ke liye jaa rahi hoo …janab zara sabar rakhye janab jab wapis aayigi tou humesha ke liye aapke paas hi rahegi …

Maan smiled slightly to the thought ..looked again at the cars …with the main entrance of the hotel opening maan panicked n said to meera ..

Maan : meer tujhe mera ek kaam karma huga …jaldi

Meer : phir se postman bana rahe hu ..

Vikas : oh hoo tou postman ban hi nhi sakti …bani bhi tou postwoman banigi ..

Maan : shut u two aur meer sun jaldi …

~~**~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**

Meer entered the car shocking Rajji ..Rucha ..n geet as well ..

Meer : what yrr mien apni friend se last time jane se pehle milna chahti thi ..

Geet smiled at her n both hugged each other tightly geet was slightly in tears yet …n meera brushing her in the hug whispered slightly ..

Meera : ek msg laayi hai potman ..

Geet instantly parted n looked at her astonished yet smiling with tears ..n meera said cupping her face ..

Meera : ziada moti waste mat karna meri sweetheart …hum jaldi wapis aayeinge tumhain sab se chora kar apne saath humesha ke liye jane ..😳😳

For Rajji n rucha I was just another teasing comment from Maan's friend but geet knew it was his words ..his way to make her smile …his gesture to have her last memory with him a simple smile from her ….
But still she couldn't help those tears spilling out of her eyes …that proud smile from her face ..that shine from eyes with the fact that thr is someone in the world who loves her beyond any boundaries of words …more than himself …he loves her …more than his gloomy heart he was still thinking of her tears …
She just couldn't thank enough the Almighty to have send him in her life ..n she hugged meera wiping her tears n said in a whisper ..

Geet : ek sawal ka jawaab mujhe bhi chahiye meera …mujhe bas itna bata do mene aisa kiya kara hai yeh sab apni zindagi mien pane ke liye ..

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~*~~**

Meera came out of the car n stood thr with maan n vikas seeing at her expecting to speak up but she was quite …

Meera : what …!!

Vikas : bol na devil bechara kitna intezaar karega abb …humesha aisa hi karti hai ..

Meera : poora ka poora postman bana diya mujhe tum don one maan (she pouted)

Maan : jo chahiye mil jayega madam ji abhi bologi tum …

Meera : well aapki madam jana chahti hain ke unhoon ne aisa kiya kara yeh sab apni life mien pane ke liye ..

Maan just smiled n stood watching the cars going away straight …n geet see out of her car window n smiled seeing him ..it was as if all they wanted was just a smile as thr last memory for this 2 month separation …

Vikas : hmm so chali gayi …waise maan aaj bata hi dee ..i have seen u geet jab gayi thi 2 saal pehle u were all down isolated …they way she rejected u with such harsh words even after that what made u believe she still loves u .. I mean don't get me wrong but still what it was ..

Maan (smiled) : vikas when u truly love someone u really dn't need words to understand them as words are just a form of explanation n love never requires any explanation …so I did what my heart wanted me to do …n see I made my words come true …its going to be exactly 2 years after our engagement in nxt 2 months n after that geet's sur-name will be changed ...

The trio smiled n went in with a new zeal in thr heart for the marriage n maan sighed with the thought that this meeting was the end of thr engagement till marriage phase as after that thr nxt meeting will be directly on wedding day ..the end of thr beautiful silent encounters …

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So this was what I wrote ..
I don't knw what u all have thought with the first look ..
But couldn't make it any better with my khatara writing skills

Hope it wasn't THAT much boring …

Waiting for ur replies …likes n comments
Luv Ya
Sobia ..

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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mujhe btaa nhi skti thi ki post kr rhi hu😒
bdi jaldi ho gyi 20 min
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ufff... its tooo big..
mn aapko read kr k btati hu hws it.. haan
😉😉😉
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hi thanks 4 da pmn superb emotional beautiful OS! Wonderfullly written! Waiting 4 more lol! Is der more??
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pmn superb emotional beautiful OS! Wonderfullly written! Waiting 4 more lol! Is der more??



glad u liked it ...😳

but sorry it is a single part OS ..😃
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me too sleepy sobi..
Vil read nd cmmnt 2mrow
pr is part ka 1 post padh lia hai..
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woo yaar superb... loved it...
1st toh laga ki its arrange marriage... bt den u surprised us..
loved maan n geet in this os...
n best part abt ur writing is d way u depict each n every emotions through words... its jst awesome...

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