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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
nice update😊
why is geet behaving like this 😕
i feel wantedly she is making herself look like this to avoid any attention frm men
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting update...

geet's behavior is really strange...when other girls with weak eyesight don't want to use specs here she is using without need...she is applying so much hair oil where as now a days girls don't want to apply any oil on their hair...

is it some type of mystery...

this FF is going very interesting...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting to know more about geet past
lovely update
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
awsome i m liking it but itna suspense
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
awesome updates dear, read all the 4 parts. It is such a cute story but not able to understand geet. I think she is doing all this wantedly may be something happened in her past that she is behaving like this.
continue soon dear, thanku for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinni10

awesome updates dear, read all the 4 parts. It is such a cute story but not able to understand geet. I think she is doing all this wantedly may be something happened in her past that she is behaving like this.
continue soon dear, thanku for the pm



thanks dear for loving the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...
i think cz of some reason geet is trying to be like this...wonder wt it is...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think there is nothing wrong with Geet...She is doing all these Jhalli acts knowingly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnaks dear for loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thankyou friends for your lovely comments and likes and encouraging me


PART-5

BUT he cannot avoid now , dadima now days putting a lot of pressure for marriage , and started searching for the girls

dadima I am dealing with some important projects which will take at least 6 month which are very important to our company, in these process I may travel a lot '..if you want you can ask dad

after wards you can search for girls

if you have any doubts you can ask dad ,

haina dad

ha maa..

okay maan I will give you 6 months time after wards iam not going to wait

maan breated slowely thanking god at least dadima has given 6 months time

bro why you are so much against marriage.. why cannot you marry

dev iam not against marriage.. but .. until now I did not find any one whom I can marry,

the servants were busy in preparations as per order of dadima

maa you are taking risk by this, if maan will come to know this

I know priya , but maan is not here, he went to Mumbai , and no one will be going to tell him about that rathod has come , maan has told that he will marry after 6 month, but he did not told that not see the alliances , we can not stop searching, at least we can see the alliance , and if we like her we fix the marriage rasika is very good girl, I saw her photo she is very beautiful , a perfect match for our maan

Dev was little afraid of this, he know his brother temper , if he comes to know this '

But ma what priya is telling is true, if maan comes to knows this

Ram are afraid of your son, don't tell that

Iam not afraid maan but'..

And where are kids '.. iam more afraid of the kids, you know what happened last time. That sukala has come for the alliance, seeing the kids, how the naintara spoke against kids and maan got angry

Dadima do not worry about that geet told that she will take care of the kids

Okay meera what happened to the snacks ,

Do not worry dadima I arranged everything

When rathod family came all received them , dadima was were shocked to see rasika in the modern dress

Vo kya haina raam khurana we love our beti a lot , we will not go against her wishes , she love to wear like theses dress.

Rathod was giving explanation

Raam understood that rasika was pampered a lot ,

They were quietly seated, they did not understand how start the conversation

Ma I will bring the snacks saying that meera quietly went into the kitchen

Raam started the conversation talking about business,

At the same suddenly they heard shouting of the kids.

Pranv and arnav started shouting and came into the room where all the seated , at the same geet came behind them to stop them to go inside the room, but kids were already entered the room , kids seeing them started dadima bade ma bade ma '..kaha hai '.

Priya could not understand what kids were talking pranav..bade bade dadima ye he hai '

Nahi dadima ' vo nahi hai'

Bade papa hai na .. to bada ma kha hai.. geet didi ne bataya tha bade ma will come.. aur there will chadi hogi.. aur masti hogi'.

All are listening to their arnav talks..

Arnav and pranav come here , see we will go inside'.

Nahi didi we want to see bade ma'

Aunty how could you appoint like this girl for looking after the kids look at her how she is ,her dress, her face'

all were shocked listening to the rasika words '

but the rathod was just listening to her talks , and not trying to control her '.

What she is teaching to the kids..

Bade ma'..is that the way to look after the kids ..

Geet was just listening to her words with her head down '

Now seeing all these ram could not control himself..

Just enough rasika '

I think so rathod , it is better you can go'

But mr khurana , we were thinking about the alliance,, know'after for a employee why do we break this alliance

See rathod the girl who cannot respect the others.. cannot treat her as human.. how can she be the bahu of khurana

You are insulting us uncle for mere a servant

Dev was listening to these he tried to come in between .

But ram immediately signed him not to come in between

Rasika I feel geet is more beautiful than you

Khurana you are insulting us , you called us for an alliance, and now you are insulting us, we will see your end

Hearing these words dev could not control himself

Me rathod until now I do not want to come between because of my papa words

Do you think is that easy to see the end of my papa

Me rathod you have forgotten that he has 2 sons' dev and maan singh khurana..

I think the name itself is sufficient for you, or I have to give full introduction for you

Hearing these words . rathod immediately tried to control his emotions

But rasika was no mood in stopping. She continued with her words

I think so rasika you are not fit to be called as bhabhi so it is better you leave this place okay.. before I take some drastic steps

After rathod left the place they saw geet was no where to be seen

Ram immediately went into the geet room to check her

He saw geet was hugging one photo frame and crying

He could understand how much geet was missing her parents

He quietly went near her and kept his hands on her head

Geet turned around and saw ram there

Iam sorry uncle because of me this alliance has broken .. iam sorry ..

Shhh,.. beti.. this is not your fault.. see .. do not take it your heart.. actually she is not fit to be bahu of this family okay'

Okay..

She you are such beautiful eyes' why you always hide them in that big spects'.

Geet was very happy getting fatherly affection from ram , which she missed since her parents death

The atmosphere was again lighted with kids voices'

Didi pleasss help me'

hearing shruti voice

what happened sweety

Oh didi we are having painting compe

Ok sweety I will help you.. saying that she went left the place..


precape: depends upon your opinions




note: guys i want to know your opinions whether to end this story within 2 update or you want to me to continue the story, if you want to end the story, next 2 updates will full of suspense , if you want to continue then .. i will unfold the suspense slowly



Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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