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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika




oye sia kal mujhe chutti mil jaaye hopefully fingers crossed apni bhai toh pareshaan mat karna thik hai good mrng 😳


mil gayi kya Chutti
hopefully mil gayi ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
osum SS
CONGRATUALTIONS FOR NEW STORY...
i mean one more diff thought
well i love these lines


Agar maan ko Casanova banana pada I promise ill quit writing, I am damn serious with him being only geet ka maan!!!
waise tere FF SS ka title use karne ka tareeka acha laga
use dekhte hi aisa NASHA chaaya,
ki aur kisi ka na khayal aaya,
use paane ke liye kardi humne saari BESHARAMI KI HADDEINpar,
ki mil gaya chaand hume har baar
hum baata denge use ke
sirf MUJHE HAQ HAI tum par,
humaara pyaar kabhi BANDISHEIIN MOHABBAT na hoga us par
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONGRATULATIONSFOR NEW STORY...Loved the concept amazing start
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice beginning well majboori he lekin geet ko maan jaise humsafar milega
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Posted: 12 years ago
any chance of a teaser
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

osum SS

CONGRATUALTIONS FOR NEW STORY...
i mean one more diff thought
well i love these lines


Agar maan ko Casanova banana pada I promise ill quit writing, I am damn serious with him being only geet ka maan!!!
waise tere FF SS ka title use karne ka tareeka acha laga
use dekhte hi aisa NASHA chaaya,
ki aur kisi ka na khayal aaya,
use paane ke liye kardi humne saari BESHARAMI KI HADDEINpar,
ki mil gaya chaand hume har baar
hum baata denge use ke
sirf MUJHE HAQ HAI tum par,
humaara pyaar kabhi BANDISHEIIN MOHABBAT na hoga us par


meri sia ne diya yeh poem mujhe shailu😳 credit goes to her🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

any chance of a teaser


will give by night sweety😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hellozzz...

I know I am a bit late comer over here but was hell busy for last few days... I am sorry dear...

Well, the concept is of course off beat... but I wud like to see how wud U mould it..

I trust U & one more reason is that U always stick Maaneet to each other...

waise don't mind but I wanna ask 1 thing.. :

" U mentioned Geet being uneducated & illiterate then How The Hell she speaks or think in English ????? " 😲 😆

If the story wud hv been based in US, UK or some elsewhere then I wud hv digested but yaar India mein toh either she shud be knowing only Hindi or the regional lang.

Plz put some light & don't take creative liberty wala excuse !!! 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anky_s

Hellozzz...


I know I am a bit late comer over here but was hell busy for last few days... I am sorry dear...

Well, the concept is of course off beat... but I wud like to see how wud U mould it..

I trust U & one more reason is that U always stick Maaneet to each other...

waise don't mind but I wanna ask 1 thing.. :

" U mentioned Geet being uneducated & illiterate then How The Hell she speaks or think in English ????? " 😲 😆

If the story wud hv been based in US, UK or some elsewhere then I wud hv digested but yaar India mein toh either she shud be knowing only Hindi or the regional lang.

Plz put some light & don't take creative liberty wala excuse !!! 😉



poora ka poora hindi dialogs rahenge toh ladkiyon ko samajh nahi aaraha yaar they ask me for meanings issi liye kya karon eng mein dena pada kuch i was expecting somebody to ask me this question😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER:

All the girls were made to stand in a line as the men started to stare at them with sheer lust. As it was for the first time geet started to shiver literally fearing, as if being tied while a man of around 40 inched closer to geet in half drunken state...ruko yaar pehle Mr. maan singh khurana ki baari hai as for the very first time he is here for such party kya kehte hai maan saaheb, Mr. chopra trailed off


girls i donno if i shud demand here for likes bt plz try giving my target on PART 1

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