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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Don't worry mona..
Study well..All the best for your exams
We will wait dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its ok dear,take ur time.
GOODLUCK for ur exams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shocked hain na friends??😆pagal shameless ladki mona is updating when she have exam tummorow😲
Something came in me and i wrote this to relax my mind..Update will be small becoz of scarcity of time..so bear with me friends till my exams finishes😭 and ha this part may be boring but it's needed..

friends here is the link to my blog😃


PART-11



geet's pov:

Life never seems to be the way we want it but we have to live it the best way we can!there is no perfect life,we can fill it with perfect moments..and i will fill my di's life with every happiness and make it perfect..

I never ever thought that my di has been suffering every single day because of jiju..She was all the while crying tears of blood..but she never let me know and pretended to be happy..even I was happy that my di got some one who loves her so much but never knew that he loved to torture her..


I was shocked when I saw jiju chi he should be called an animal..He was beating his wife for damn money..That day I came to know my di's life..That animal was torturing her every second and she didn't even let me know..I know she dont want me to worry for her as I have many already..


I brought her back with me but that animal didn't stop torturing us..He want di to go back to him not because he loves her but because he dont want to lose his source of earning money..I already had enough and was not ready to allow my di to suffer more..


We took a Sigh of releif after sending him behind bars but as if god loves to test my patience,I was asked by apartment owner to vacant our flat as they dont want any disturbances...I tried a lot to convince her but was in vain..



I hated my status of earning for the first time..I was trying hard to get shelter for my family but my every attempt has been going in vain due to my financial status..I cant afford huge amount of rent and also dont want my family to suffer...
Please god enough of your testing..I cant bear now..please babaji koi raasta dikhado...geet wiped her tears hugging her self with her arms.she was sitting on steps of gurudwara and was requesting god to show her the way...


As if god listened her she felt a hand on her shoulder..geet looked up to find priya..


Priya:geet beta kesi ho? She asked caressing her hair..tum ro kyun rahi ho? She asked worried..


Geet couldnt hold herself and cried in priya's lap..priya was confused and worried to see her crying..after a while when geet realised what she was doing withdrew herself instantly and wiped her tears..


Geet:sorry aunty wo mein.she tried to avoid eye contact with Priya..she always presented her self as a bubbly girl and kept smiling in front of others even when she had problems for her..


Geet...priya tried to know what's bothering her..


Aaj meri mama ki bahut yaad arahi hai aunty..geet said not looking at her..


Come with me..priya got up and held Geet's hand..ji..? Geet frowned in confusion..


Priya just held her hand and guided her to follow..

They both walked to park..both were silent for a while..priya made her to lie on her lap as she understood that geet wants a hand on her head to console her..


Geet cried like a kid in her lap as she felt solace..she so much wanted her mother's consoling touch,a hug that can take away her pain and she got that from priya..


They were strangers till the day they met but today they are sharing a bond which a mom and daughter share..sometimes strangers become our beloved and we dont want years to under stand what are they!when the latter understandards the one they unknowingly get attached emotionally..


Priya: it's ok bachha..she kept caressing her hair..now tell me what's bothering this innocent beauty? She asked wiping tears on her cheek..


Geet told everything as she felt to share..The one who never voiced out her pain is sharing it today..


Priya felt bad for her sister..some glimpses of past at once came in front of her which turned her son the way he is today..Which made him a man who dont believe in relations..


Aunty..geet shook priya who lost in her thoughts.."sorry aunty Mein ne aapka mood kharab kardiya na.."


Priya: chup dont say that again..we are friends right? Geet nodded..you can share anything with me..You are just like Maan to me..whenever you want your mom remember that iam there for you..hmmGeet felt so emotional as no one even tried to know what's going in her..any how she dont have any complaints about it because she never let others to know her pain..



Chale? Priya said and smiled looking at her frown.."dont you want to have a check before shifting in to a flat?"


Priya giggled at confused soul.."we have a portion upstairs which is vacant now "


Geet smiled widely and hugged her..thanku aunty.

"Ab chale?"priya asked and geet nodded..

Maan again smiled for the nth time in office which is so unusual..He was recollecting all the antics of geet which can make any one smile..it's been a week after the wedding and not to forget their friendship which happened in store room..He never accept it but he definitely had her effect on him..


"Wow Maan you and smiling that too in working hours without any reason..am i dreaming?aadi pinch me once.."naina said dramatically..


Aadi: ha Maan Sach bata kuch huwa hai kya? Asked anxiously passing him his coffee mug..


Maan: nahi but ab hoga..if you guys are not ready with blue prints in an hour you will be out from this project..so get back to work..he said coming back to msk mode..


Ufff he is back!aadi and naina passed a glare to their Mr.perfect and left the cabin..


Maan sighed in releif for not making fool of himself infront of his friends..but again when he looked a girl outside his cabin who bumped in to someone he recalled acts of his chalti firti disaster and smiled again. Ye ladki muje pagal kardegi he mumbled shooking his head..


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Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Wow..Great update mona..👏
Beautifully portrayed geet emotions..👍🏼
Felt very sad for geet and her sister..😭😭
Priya and geet conversation superb.👏.Loved the way priya consoling geet ..Liked their bonding..⭐️
Maan is thinking about geet antics and smiled himself😳
Wow..Geet going to stay near maan's house..😳😉
Waiting for maan reaction
Continue soon
And concentrate on your studies and All the best for your exams
We will wait😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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vow superb update
loved it
geet near maan house
interesting
waiting for more maaneet moments
cont soon
HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
oh you updated this one

yeyyy

i loved this part yaar..

it wasn't boring at all..

it was like geet and priya's bond being shown here

geet suffered and got a motherly touch from priya

she told her probs ...

hmm...

maan is lost in his new friend's thoughts good ... 😆

will be waiting for next

kiddo study hard now ...

shhhooo


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
it was awesome
Geet is shifting to Maan's house?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Lovely update..
priya gave her a motherly support...
maan is thinking abt geet 24x7..
wow!!what a change..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Happy New Year

part 11
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
-Gemini- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
lovely part Mona
geet will staying in maan's house
all the best for your exams

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