NEW MG FF-DEKHA EK KHWAAB...!!! Part6/Pg24 25DEC - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update
waiting next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Bechari Geetu 😭
hate her mother n sis 😡
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PART 2


Awesome Dear 😃
kash mere pas bhi aise dost hote
Edited by Sheen-Coolkiwi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Update 😃
ehm ehm 😳
Waiting for the Next 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cia I am totally in love with this Cinderella story
Reminds me a bit of Disney's cinderella combined with Drew Barrymore's Everafter.
Both are two of my favorite movies.
HA! HA! HA! Romeo Tittu aur Pinky ka punarjanam ho gaya.
Though if I think back Romeo was really like an eager to please puppy and I can totally imagine Pinky as a plump little squirrel.😆
Waiting eagerly for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankyou so much 4 dis...

M overwhelmed with it... M flying in air right now... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad

Cia I am totally in love with this Cinderella story

Reminds me a bit of Disney's cinderella combined with Drew Barrymore's Everafter.
Both are two of my favorite movies.
HA! HA! HA! Romeo Tittu aur Pinky ka punarjanam ho gaya.
Though if I think back Romeo was really like an eager to please puppy and I can totally imagine Pinky as a plump little squirrel.😆
Waiting eagerly for more


M happy you are loving it... 😃

Nxt updt comng up... Do read...!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4

Geet was rolling on the lush green grass. On her side Romeo too joined her. Both were laughing heartily. Geet stopped for a while and saw a flower very beautiful but it came from a bushy weed. She tried pulling the flower from its stalk but it didn't come up. She turned to see an old woman with stick yelling out her name and running towards them perhaps bcz they came into her land. Before the lady could beat her she got up with a start. She sat on her bed looking around her and left a sigh of relief.

"Babaji… Dara diya mujhe…. Kitna bura sapna tha…."

She wiped beads of sweat from her forhead. Her Chhoti Maa was calling her from downstairs.

"Geeettt…. Behri ho gayyi kya…??? Jaldi utt… Bahot so liya tumne…. Ghar ke kaam kaun karega….??"

"Aayi Chhoti Maa….."

She tip-toed downstairs getting freshned only to meet a furious Chhoti Maa at the end.

"Tum itni aalsi kab se bann gayyi… Hun…???"

"Mujhe maaf kar dijiyein Chhotti Maa… Mujhe pata hi nahi chala kii itnii der ho gayyi hai…. Aur…"

"Aur kya Geet…???"

"Aura aage se aisa bilkul nahi hoga…."

"Thik hai… Iss baar tumhein maaf kar deti hoon…. Par agar tum iss ghar mein tikna chahthi hon toh yeh baat acchi tarh se apne chhote se dimaag mein bitha lon kii tumhein dobara maafi nahi milegi…. Tumhari behne tayaari kar rahi hai aaj ki pratiyogita ke liyein… Maine kaha tha tumhein aaj shikaayat ka mauka mat dena par tumhein sone se phursat milegi tab na…. Ab main tumhein aakhri mauka de rahin hoon… Jaldi jaa kar unnki madat karo…"

"Main abhi jaati hoon… Chhotti Maa…"

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Geet was preaparing breakfast in the kitchen when she looked outside the backdoor and her face brightened with a huge smile.

"Babaji… Yeh toh wahin phool hai na joh maine sapne mein dekhe thein…."

She brought few of them after preparing the breakfast and decorated them in a vase and set them on the dinning table. After some time the three chudails joined their too. Preeto taking a bite of the ghee drowned paratha spoke out excitedly.

"Pata nahi aaj ki pratiyogita mein kaun vijeta dehrega…???"

Nandini replied to her instantly with pride oozing out from her.

"Preeto… Tumhein pata hai kaun jitega…"

"Haan jaanti hoon… Main toh vishwas bhi nahi kar sakthi…."

Preeto spoke catching putting her palm on her cheeks in a dreamy way. Nandini gave her a smile for reading her mind.

"Mujhe toh lag raha hai ke maine bhashan bhi likh kar taiyaar rakhna chahiyein…"

"Par tum mere liyein bhashan kyon likhogi….???"

Asked a confused Nandini.

"Arrey abhi toh tum keh rahi thi tum janthi ho ki kaun jitega… Tum meri hi baat kar rahi thi na…"

"Nahi toh… Soch bhi nahi sakthi isske bare mein…"

"Chal jaa… Mar jaani…"

Yelled Preeto at Nandini. The Haveli's cat who was curious to see the strange flowers in the vase came towards it. He smelled them and at once sneezed out taking in the pungent smell. As a result of this the vase was jerked off and the water from it got spilled on both the sisters.

"Haaye Rabba…. Hamare suit…. Geeettt"

Both yelled in unison. Instead of blaming the cat they both started taunting her for keeping those strange flowers in the vase.

"Dekho Geet… Tumhari wajah se humare suit kharaab ho gayye…"

"Haan…. Ab hum pratiyogita mein der se pahuchenge…."

Chhoti Maa at once gathered the bunch of flowers and threw them outside the window.

"Chhoti Maa… Aapne unnhe kyon phek diya…???"

Asked a hurt Geet.

"Humein innki koi jaroorat nahi jab meri naajook kaliyon jaisi betiyaan hai yahaan… Yeh dono hi kaafi hai iss Haveli ki shobha badane ke liyein…."

"Hmmm.. He he he…."

Smiled teethingly both the chudail sisters.

"Aur jab main kehti hoon meri betiyaan matlab sirf MERI betiyaan… Issmein tumhara koi naamo-nishaan nahin dikhta…"

Spoke Chhoti Maa. Very rude enough to make Geet teary and depressed.

"Tum dono jaldi jaakar dusre suit pehnlo… Aur Geet innke yeh suit humare aane tak dhokar, such jaane chahiyein… Samjhi… Saath hi saath shyaam ke liyein khaane ko samose bana dena…"

"Kya main bhi chalu aapke saath…???"

Geet asked very earnestly and desparatedly.

"Agar aaj tumne saare kaam thik se aur dhang se kiyein hote toh…"

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Geet was rinsing the clothes when Romeo nudged her from behind.

"Kya baat hai…??? Aaj bahot kaam hai mujhe… Jaldi bolo…"

"Geet tumhein pratiyogita mein jaana chahiyein…." Requested Romeo.

"Haan Geet… Yeh bahot accha mauka hai… Kam se kam dekh toh aao…" Spoke Tittu.

"Aur rahi baat kaam ki hum sab kar denge… Chinta mat karna…" Spoke one of the squirrels.

"Ummm… Shaayad tum log thik keh rahe hon…. Mujhe dekhna hai aaj ke pratiyogita ka taaj kiss ke naam hota hai…"

Geet locked the Haveli with the only key they had. Pinky and Pinku gifted her the same flowers from the backyard.

"Aaj ki pratiyogita bhale hi tum jeet nahi paogi par hamare liyein toh tum hi har sundarta pratiyogita ki vijeta hon…."

Geet gladly took them and moved towards the town. On the way she met a carriage of their neighbor Jaspreet Chacha who was carrying hay towards the town. He gave her lift till town. She thanked him and moved towards the ground where contest was supposed to be held. She saw fireworks going on as the contest was about to start.

"Kitni der aur Preeto jaldi kar na…" nudged Chhoti Maa.

"Maa… Yeh kaajal laga dijiyein na mere haath kaap rahein hai…"

Spoke Preeto getting nervous holding her hand mirror. Chhoti Maa gestured her to calm down and helped her out. Geet reached near the them and at once turned away when Preeto spotted her in the mirror.

"Mujhe aisa kyon laga ke maine Geet ko dekha…???"

Preeto thought it to be her illusion. Geet let a sigh of relief hiding behind the compound wall.

"Geet sambhal kar rehna… Kahin aaj Preeto ne tujhe dekh liya hota toh….???"

She calmed her heart and moved away from them. She moved into the crowd where nobody could spot her. All the participants sat in a row. Nandini and Preeto sat together their head held high. Chhoti Maa nudged them from behind.

"Dekha tumne baaki ki kudiyon ko… Koi pratiyogita ke laayak hi nahi hai…"

"Haan Maa.. Unnke parande (Punjabi ribbon tied at the ends of the braid) toh dekho jhaadu ki tarah latak rahein hai… He he he…."

"Nandu… woh chod unnki chappal dekhi hai… Suit ke saath ja hi nahi rahi hai… Hahaha…"

The trio of mother-sis boasted and teased others openly. The contest started and for 1st round all contestants had a brief introduction with a ramp walk. The 2nd round had some witty questionnaire. The crowd hooted and clapped on each of them. But when Nandini and Preeto came on stage Geet was the most excited down in the crowd she clapped and whistled thrice for them No matter how mean and selfish they were but alas they were her sisters. The judges were taking longer than usual to decide for the winner. Geet had to leave early as well. She managed to come out of the crowd with lots of difficulty. On the otherside she saw her Chhoti Maa and her sisters moving out of the ground. The panicked and got terrified.

"Bhaag Geet bhaag… Lagta hai aaj teri khair nahi…."

She ran looking behind. Her Chhoti Maa climbed the carriage. Her sisters were having a talk. She had to reach the Haveli before they woul turn up. She was lost looking at their actions and at the same time running. She had no idea where she was running.

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He was having the sugarcane stick (ganna) in his hand. He wiped the stick to his kurta. Moved it towards his mouth. To take a bite of it and relish its sweet juice when God knows what pushed him. He tried catching hold of his precious sugarcane stick which tossed up from his hands. Something soft, something light fell on him amd he hit the hard ground with sheer force. His sugarcane stick (ganna) fell into a puddle of water. Splashing some of it on his face.

"Mujhe maaf kar dena…"

Geet apologized to him in a hurry, getting of from him and ran away. The guy got up and dusted his soiled kurta and pathani pants. He saw beautiful white flowers on the ground and lifted them, caressing them. Geet stood in a lane huffing-puffing catching hold of her waist. She bend down towards the running tap and drank some water.

"Main Haveli itni jaldi nahi pahonch paungi…. Chhoti Maa toh aaj tujhe kaccha chaba jaayegi Geet…"

She turned behind to see the same guy she dashed into searching her.

"Hayye Rabba… Woh mera piccha kar raha hai… Bhaag Geet…"

She ran like a cat whose tail was on fire.

"Hey… Ruko…!!!" Yelled out the guy.

Geet ran through the market. The guy still ran behind her.

"Ruko… Hey Ruko…."

She could stop running though she was hell exhausted. She ran crossing the bridge towards the woods which where close to her Haveli. The guy increased his speed.

"Ruko Hey… Ruko… Tum… Ruko…"

He caught hold of her shoulders to make her stop. She stopped sensing his touch and pushed his hands away from her.

"Dur raho mujhse… Maine kaha tha… Woh bas ek galti thi… Maine jaan-buchkar aapko dhakka nahi maara tha…"

The guy forwarded his hands showing her the same beautiful flowers.

"Yeh phool kya tumhare hai…???"

"Yeh mat kehna kii tumne mujhe sirf yeh phool dene ke liyein piccha kiya tha…!!!"

Geet asked him angrily and was about to shower some more words but he cut her.

"Main tumhein yeh dena chahta tha…. Yeh tumhari hain na… Lagta hai tumhari jeb se gir gayyi…"

He forwarded her the Haveli's key. She looked at it shrugging her shoulders.

"Meri chabi…!!!"

She gasped looking at it and checked her pocket and found it empty.

"Haan… Tum sahi thein…"

"Issilyiein toh main bhaag raha tha tumhare picche…. Main koi awaara ladka nahi hoon…"

He handed her the key. Geet looked at him with a sorry face. She felt sad for thinking bad of him.

"Tumne mujhe pehle bataya kyon nahi…???"

He scratched the back of his head and spoke.

"Woh… main bhaagte bhaagte kuch bol hi nahi paaya… Mujhe maaf karna par mujhe aadat nahi hai itni tez, itna door kissi ladki ke picche aisen bhaagne ki…"

With that he started laughing. Geet just looked at him keenly. He had black eyes which were dark and deep. He had a stubble on his face giving him a desirable look. His M shaped lips were perfectly carved out to make any girl insane with his smile. But a pout came on her face again when he apologized to her for no fault of his. She sank on the ground shedding her tears.

"Mujhe tumse maafi maagni chahiyein… Main tumhein dhakka deke bas bhaag aayi… Yeh bhi nahi puccha ke kya tum thik hon…?? Mujhe maaf kar dena…"

"Koi baat nahi… Mujhe jyaada nahi lagi… Par main tumhe sach mein daraana nahi chahta tha… Mujhe bahot dukh hai iss baat ka…"

"Main toh sabse badi jhalli hoon… Tum mujhe meri ek-lauthi chabi laakar dete hon aur mujhse maafi maang rahein hon… Maine tumhein shukriya bhi nahi kiya… Main toh sabse badi gaddhi hoon, ullu ki patthi… Babaji mujhe aap na bilkul maaf mat karna…"

Geet cried more now pointing at the Almighty on top. The guy looked at her antics amusedly hiding his smile.

"Maine kaha na koi baat nahi hai… Yeh lon tumhare phool… Yeh mere sabse chahete phool hai…"

He bend on his knees and forwarded her the flowers and looked at her teary eyes. He pushed the culs from her face and also wiped the tears which had trickled down her cheeks. She took the flowers but both didn't leave each others hands. Both were lost in each others eyes.

"Usski aankein… Jhil jaisi hai… Mann kar raha hai doob jaaun unn mein… Kaisa jaadu bhara hai unn mein… Kyon nashili si hai yeh aankhein tumhari…!!!"

"Tumhara chehra roshan kar raha hai meri saanson ko… Kaise hataau meri nazar usse… Jisse dekhne ke liyein shaayad barson se pyaasa yeh dil tha…"

Geet was the 1st one to come out of the eye-lock. She got up in a hurry.

"Bahot der ho gayyi hai… Mujhe chalna chahiyein…"

She started running towards her Haveli's route. He stood up holding the flowers, saw her retreating back and asked shouting out.

"Kya hum phir milenge…???"

"Haaannn…. Shaaayaaaddd…." She replied moving quite far away from him.

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Precap : "Adi… Kya aap humari madat nahi karenge…???"

"Maan nahi… Yeh dusri baar aap raj mahal se bhaag rahein hai…!!!"

"Aap behes mat kariyein… Bas hamari madat kariyein… Kissi ko kuch nahi pata chalega ke hum shehar mein awaara ki tarah ghoom rahein hai.…"

This is one is a very long updt compared to what I rarely write...

Plz do give me long and sweet comments..

Love Cia

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