Beauty2..Note for the readers-page 160,Feb 1 2014 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago


Really??😳

Dhinka chika dhinka chika...🤣

Thank u...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

U r most welcome Dear 😛

Dear is ok gal😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Caught up with this. Comment coming up...
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There's no point in me reserving a post really. Because I unreserve it in two seconds. Rofl. You know you got an admirer and as you know someone joined IF just because of you. This friend of mine got addicted to beauty and used to call me when I used to have that K spects on me, and had nothing to do.😆{Really..I am really glad to know someone was actually "discussing" MY beauty in this world..Honestly telling if you wouldn't have pmed me yesterday i was going to ask your friend about your health..}
She used to blabber non stop about how intellectual both the leads are and how addictive the story is. I wanted to read, there was this weird craving to read but since I couldn't i didn't
But yday night when I was tossing and turning in bed and was feeling down, I read this and boy did it lift my mood? Very very much. Yay because I was right about the story thingy. Yay again because mollycoddle said she was a fool and you have bold-ed those lines.🤣
Okay me and Mollycoddle have jaani dushmani so don't mind us slandering each other😆{She is such a sweetheart,my first reader who had given her tears to my work..Emotional attachment from a reader is biggest reward for a writer..many thanks to her..}
Jokes apart, every part of this story made my heart swell with pride for two characters. I can't decided whom do I like more. M or G. Honestly it is easy to like a girl. Very very easy. I always am favor of Geet. And there are very very less Maans I loved and respected here in fictions. This Maan jumped in my favorite list long long ago. {i think he is going to be my favorite maan too..he is going to beat "maan" in colors..}
The Ramayana discussion, the solid liquid discussion, the discussion on lust, everything was beautiful, and made me smile throughout. I support Geet in that lust topic. I always had and even have those thoughts about getting physical. Though it felt so good to read the other perspective and felt so damned respect for Maan for replying promptly about when he wouldn't feel lust for his wife when he sees her breasts, I still had this lingering thoughts of whether such men exists, just like Geet had. {I think they don't exist..and if they exist their wives/gfs would never let us know.😆.they are the luckiest women in the world after all..Hope if such men exist,God had made one "geet" for each of them..}
And about his question, beautiful depiction. Solid and liquid and their symbolism was beautifully written but did I tell you their choices also depicted what they are. A man would always chose a tough exterior while a woman would choose the soft interior feelings. {very well said dear..😊}
BTW on a side note why do you leave gaseous state? Isn't it necessary for breathing, and a part of our life? {yes it is..but maaneet were talking about choices..If their favorite colors were red and white,i would not have given description of all the colors in the chapter..Maan talked about his favorite state and geet hers..thats why i left gas,,and honestly telling i had only one thought about gas in my mind that we require oxygen for breathing..nothing else..so i left it..😆}
Oh yeah me being a weirdo asked another weird question haven't I?😆{no problem you can ask to another weirdo..}
Ignore me. And what the hell had I blabbered. I am not going to proof read. Rofl. Poor you. Have to tolerate all my nautanki...😆{you can't wait how eagerly i was waiting for this nautanki..i really missed you dear..and really mean real wala really..}

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...wow...wow...speechless...loved it...loved it alot...awesome one...wow..maan sir..yes geet is the one for u...now give me a hug...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where is my crumpled paper?
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story i really enjoyed reading this story very much

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Posted: 12 years ago

Luvd it...like always!
U know after reading ur updates...its really hard to comment...i didnt know wat to say!
When ever u make maaneet to discuss any topic...pehle toh the topic itself will be diffrent n unique...and uspe their views n opinion...as i hav said earlier, they both r clear n confidant about their views.
And they both hav logics to justify their choices!

And i hav a question...do u always think this deep about all things? With whom u discuss or debate to get diffrent logics?

maan is happy to be sucessful in his mission friendship...getting to know her personally...
...while geet is running away from "crushed papers"...nd khush hai..being with him!
...
"i am not paying u extra for this over time "( kanjoos!)
..
"i can bring tea for u as a compansation "( sirf tea??
Buiscit ya cookies...or pastries...kuchh bhi nahi??
Maha kanjoos🤣)

"How is she?"
"i dont know sir"
"i mean i hav never met this girl before, how would i know..how is she"(ye kabhi normally baat kyun nahi karte?)

Geet is insecure about her scars...k she didnt realise that maan is awer of her "inner beauty"
and his bonding with her indicates that "physical appeareance" doesnt matter to him!

" G is the one for me"( hamesha se!
Aur hamesha...sirf wahi rahegi!🤗)


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

I know both of them very well dear..
It was just the pic is very simple or ordinary as we used to click with our ordinary cameras,,and GC is looking quite different{simple you can say,not a hero like all other pics clicked by professional cameras} that was why i could not recognize him..and i thought the girl in this pic is you...😉😆


O myyy Gooodnesss 😃
Yew seriously thought its me 😉
I can twist n turn ur statement a little k yew thought Its me in the pic wid GC 😆
I wish aisa hota 😆
But I m on cloud 9 just thinking about it 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg.. ur updates are really beautiful yaar.. cant find any other word... pls update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

This friend of mine got addicted to beauty and used to call me when I used to have that K spects on me, and had nothing to do.😆{Really..I am really glad to know someone was actually "discussing" MY beauty in this world..Honestly telling if you wouldn't have pmed me yesterday i was going to ask your friend about your health..}
You don't know how jobless we are. We discuss about duniya bhar ki baatein except for studies🤣 How nice na? And btw had you PMed her, she'd have died and gone to heaven. She loves you. Ishq wala Love you see😆

Okay me and Mollycoddle have jaani dushmani so don't mind us slandering each other😆{She is such a sweetheart,my first reader who had given her tears to my work..Emotional attachment from a reader is biggest reward for a writer..many thanks to her..}
Rofl. Mollycoddle will give you her Nautanki shortly. Btw m pre warning you so that you don't get aheart attack. She calls herself swapna sundari and aasman se utri hui pari. Rofl. But frankly yes, if a reader gets involved so very much and laughs and cries with a story, that is the biggest reward any writer could have :)

This Maan jumped in my favorite list long long ago. {i think he is going to be my favorite maan too..he is going to beat "maan" in colors..}
You can't compare chocolate ice cream and Hyderabad biryani. Both are special in their own way. Comparing them is really pointless since they aren't similar. Similar is the case with both of your Maans. I can't ever compare them. They are speical in their own way. Okay I reread my analogy and felt stupid. Ignore me😆

I still had this lingering thoughts of whether such men exists, just like Geet had. {I think they don't exist..and if they exist their wives/gfs would never let us know.😆.they are the luckiest women in the world after all..Hope if such men exist,God had made one "geet" for each of them..}
Well here we go, welcome to the gang😆 Maybe they exists may be not, who knows. But yeah touch wood on your last line :)

Isn't it necessary for breathing, and a part of our life? {yes it is..but maaneet were talking about choices..If their favorite colors were red and white,i would not have given description of all the colors in the chapter..Maan talked about his favorite state and geet hers..thats why i left gas,,and honestly telling i had only one thought about gas in my mind that we require oxygen for breathing..nothing else..so i left it..😆}
Ooh yeah so toh hain. I was thinking what else could it be depicted like and I gave up because I wasn't in a philosophical mood then. I was pissed off about something so I rolled my eyes at myself and slept😆

Oh yeah me being a weirdo asked another weird question haven't I?😆{no problem you can ask to another weirdo..}
We seriously should open up a group. Science weirdos.😆
Ignore me. And what the hell had I blabbered. I am not going to proof read. Rofl. Poor you. Have to tolerate all my nautanki...😆{you can't wait how eagerly i was waiting for this nautanki..i really missed you dear..and really mean real wala really..}

*Runs in slow motion to give you a jhappi*🤗 I missed you too 😳



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