Beauty2..Note for the readers-page 160,Feb 1 2014 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
M totally on love wid ur story! Way 2 go..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
m loss of words... actually its a simple heart to heart conversation between d duo bt here simplicity at its best...sometimes it is tough to be simple
d chapter is vry close to my heart coz of geet's one line "Liquid defines fluidity and adaptiveness"....dats wat i luv abt liquid, actually my theory of "liquid" means water😆, especially rivers😛
"adaptation" something in which i absolutely believe nd it definitely does not mean dat we r surrendering in front of d circumstances ...bt its "survival of the fittest"
"fluidity"...life is not stagnant, it goes on no matter what.
well wat to say its a simply superb chapter...luvd each n evry bit of it.

""G" is the one for me.."...well well m listening dis song n i think its perfect fr maanu janu.. he found his woman😉

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4a_k4MNeLc[/YOUTUBE]

Rehna tu hai jaisa tu,
Thoda sa dard tu, thoda sukoon,
Rehna tu hai jaisa tu,
Dheema dheema jhonkha,
Ya fir junoon,
Thoda sa resham tu humdum,
Thoda sa khurdura,
Kabhi to add jaaye ya lad jaaye,
Ya khushbu se bhara,
Tujhe badalna naa chahu,
Ratti bhar bhi sanam,
Bina sawajat, milawat,
Naa zyada naa hi kam,
Tujhe chahun jaisa hai tu,
Mujhe teri baarish mein bheegna hai, ghuljaana hai,
Tujhe chahun jaisa hai tu,
Mujhe teri lapat mein jalna, raakh ho jaana hai..

Rehna tu hai jaisa tu,
Dheema dheema jhonkha,
Ya fir junoon

Haath thaam chalna ho,
To dono ke daaye haath sang kaise,
Haath thaam chalna ho,
To dono ke daaye haath sang kaise,
Ek daaya hoga, ek baaya hoga,
Thaam le haath yeh thaam le,
Chalna hai sang thaam le..

Rehna tu hai jaisa tu...


Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: palindrome


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<font size="2">Thanks for such a wonderful comment dear..</font>
<font size="2">Hope you won't mind me asking..who is that couple in your profile pic???</font>


Y wud I mind dost, its GC n his wife Debina 😛
Dear plz clarify if yew want to.. that yew didn't recognize Gurmeet or yew don't know Debina as his wife ?

Naureen !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
You are always giving me surprise after surprise with Geet!!!!
And me enjoying these surprise with Maan!!
Awesome update!
Congrats on new thread!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
the best part of this ff is , i get to learn something new, in every new update...
never had given such a serious thought to the three state...and tried to understand its significance...but this interpretation was very poignant and profound...that it left me with a feeling ...what a big fool i am , for having turned a blind eye to such small yet important facts of life...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Diva7

m loss of words... actually its a simple heart to heart conversation between d duo bt here simplicity at its best...sometimes it is tough to be simple

d chapter is vry close to my heart coz of geet's one line "Liquid defines fluidity and adaptiveness"....dats wat i luv abt liquid, actually my theory of "liquid" means water😆, especially rivers😛
"adaptation" something in which i absolutely believe nd it definitely does not mean dat we r surrendering in front of d circumstances ...bt its "survival of the fittest"
"fluidity"...life is not stagnant, it goes on no matter what.
well wat to say its a simply superb chapter...luvd each n evry bit of it.

""G" is the one for me.."...well well m listening dis song n i think its perfect fr maanu janu.. he found his woman😉

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4a_k4MNeLc[/YOUTUBE]

Rehna tu hai jaisa tu,
Thoda sa dard tu, thoda sukoon,
Rehna tu hai jaisa tu,
Dheema dheema jhonkha,
Ya fir junoon,
Thoda sa resham tu humdum,
Thoda sa khurdura,
Kabhi to add jaaye ya lad jaaye,
Ya khushbu se bhara,
Tujhe badalna naa chahu,
Ratti bhar bhi sanam,
Bina sawajat, milawat,
Naa zyada naa hi kam,
Tujhe chahun jaisa hai tu,
Mujhe teri baarish mein bheegna hai, ghuljaana hai,
Tujhe chahun jaisa hai tu,
Mujhe teri lapat mein jalna, raakh ho jaana hai..

Rehna tu hai jaisa tu,
Dheema dheema jhonkha,
Ya fir junoon

Haath thaam chalna ho,
To dono ke daaye haath sang kaise,
Haath thaam chalna ho,
To dono ke daaye haath sang kaise,
Ek daaya hoga, ek baaya hoga,
Thaam le haath yeh thaam le,
Chalna hai sang thaam le..

Rehna tu hai jaisa tu...


oh diva,,believe me we do share some sort of connection in this universe..
Today i was up with this song in my mind while thinking simultaneously that diva had not read chapter 10 till yesterday..She might be busy somewhere etc etc..Hope everything is going good with her health..
and then when i logged in IF this morning..here was your comment with this song...
so now my turn for a song..
"tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi...
yu hi nahi dil lubhata koi..."😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Koolsmile


Y wud I mind dost, its GC n his wife Debina 😛
Dear plz clarify if yew want to.. that yew didn't recognize Gurmeet or yew don't know Debina as his wife ?

Naureen !

I know both of them very well dear..
It was just the pic is very simple or ordinary as we used to click with our ordinary cameras,,and GC is looking quite different{simple you can say,not a hero like all other pics clicked by professional cameras} that was why i could not recognize him..and i thought the girl in this pic is you...😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

the best part of this ff is , i get to learn something new, in every new update...
never had given such a serious thought to the three state...and tried to understand its significance...but this interpretation was very poignant and profound...that it left me with a feeling ...what a big fool i am , for having turned a blind eye to such small yet important facts of life...😳

I think i should stop writing as i always provoke "negative thoughts" in you..Either you cry on my updates and now you are thinking yourself a fool......ohk kidding..😆
you are not a fool if you did not see the things or think about them like this before..It means your mind is busy doing something good and productive..unlike the "idle mind" of mine who has nothing good to do...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: palindrome

oh diva,,believe me we do share some sort of connection in this universe..
Today i was up with this song in my mind while thinking simultaneously that diva had not read chapter 10 till yesterday..She might be busy somewhere etc etc..Hope everything is going good with her health..
and then when i logged in IF this morning..here was your comment with this song...
so now my turn for a song..
"tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi...
yu hi nahi dil lubhata koi..."😛

"jane tuuu ya jane naaa "😆
now toh i believe, we definitely share some kind of connection😛
yes evrything goin gud wid ma heath...was jst a bit busy yesterday😊
so how r u???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Caught up with this. Comment coming up...
Edit:
There's no point in me reserving a post really. Because I unreserve it in two seconds. Rofl. You know you got an admirer and as you know someone joined IF just because of you. This friend of mine got addicted to beauty and used to call me when I used to have that K spects on me, and had nothing to do.😆
She used to blabber non stop about how intellectual both the leads are and how addictive the story is. I wanted to read, there was this weird craving to read but since I couldn't i didn't
But yday night when I was tossing and turning in bed and was feeling down, I read this and boy did it lift my mood? Very very much. Yay because I was right about the story thingy. Yay again because mollycoddle said she was a fool and you have bold-ed those lines.🤣
Okay me and Mollycoddle have jaani dushmani so don't mind us slandering each other😆
Jokes apart, every part of this story made my heart swell with pride for two characters. I can't decided whom do I like more. M or G. Honestly it is easy to like a girl. Very very easy. I always am favor of Geet. And there are very very less Maans I loved and respected here in fictions. This Maan jumped in my favorite list long long ago.
The Ramayana discussion, the solid liquid discussion, the discussion on lust, everything was beautiful, and made me smile throughout. I support Geet in that lust topic. I always had and even have those thoughts about getting physical. Though it felt so good to read the other perspective and felt so damned respect for Maan for replying promptly about when he wouldn't feel lust for his wife when he sees her breasts, I still had this lingering thoughts of whether such men exists, just like Geet had.
And about his question, beautiful depiction. Solid and liquid and their symbolism was beautifully written but did I tell you their choices also depicted what they are. A man would always chose a tough exterior while a woman would choose the soft interior feelings.
BTW on a side note why do you leave gaseous state? Isn't it necessary for breathing, and a part of our life?
Oh yeah me being a weirdo asked another weird question haven't I?😆
Ignore me. And what the hell had I blabbered. I am not going to proof read. Rofl. Poor you. Have to tolerate all my nautanki...😆
Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago

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