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"Shayad Meri Kismat Badlegi
Aaj laga who apne dil ki baat zaroor bolegi
Lekin kya galti thi uski
Jo usne mujhe thukraya
Kyunki Tha toh Mai Ek Panauti
Humesha Ek Panauti...!"
**********
Maan Singh Khurana... An Ordinary Bank Employee... Sorry Ex-Bank Employee. Recently he got kicked out AGAIN...
"Maan Why don't you go back to your Father? You can easily rule his company... What is the need to lie in this gutter?" Adi asked Maan yet again after Maan lost his 4th job in a row in the same month.
"No! I won't go... I need to prove him... I am not Bad Luck... I am not Panauti...I am what I am by my deeds Not by his donation Not by his Charity Adi... I am here to prove him He is wrong... HE IS WRONG!!" Maan lashed out in frustration.
He still couldn't forget the insult with which he was kicked out of his own house.
"You are a bad luck... Simply a Panauti...Get Out!! You don't deserve to be here... To be Yash Singh Khurana's Son... Just Leave... You can never succeed in your life... You are a bloody loser!!"
Adi could see Maan being frustrated so tried to divert his mind.
"Okay Leave that... Lets Get Going... You need to make preparations Remember?" Adi elbowed him on his stomach. Maan blushed.
**********
"Flowers?"
"Check!"
"Lunch?"
"Check!"
"Champagne?"
"Check!"
"Ring?"
"Check!"
"Am I ready?"
"Check! Errr... What? Maan Are you sweating? Nervous?" Adi smiled.
"Ummm!" Maan replied.
"Don't worry!!! Everything will be alright..." Adi assured him though he himself was not sure.
***********
"Deepika I ..." Maan stuttered.
"Yes Maan You love me...!" Deepika said eyeing his oh so sexy features.
"I love you too!" She said promptly and hugged him. Maan sighed in relief.
'Part I accomplished ... Time for Part II...' He thought and gulped nervously.
Maan parted from the hug and held her by her shoulders.
He stood up making her stand up along with him. He stumbled with the table cloth whose one end was on the floor. In response he almost fell on Deepika. She moved back and fell in the nearby Swimming Pool. Maan had chosen the table near the swimming pool area because Deepika liked the "swimming pool" view.
She screamed not because of drowning as she knew how to swim but because her dress got spoiled. She slowly swam across the pool as Maan pulled her up by her hands.
"I am so so sorry..." Maan stuttered as he passed tissues one by one to the ever so irritated Deepika.
"Urgh...!!" She screamed in frustration but then calmed down herself pasting a smile on her face.
"I wanted to tell you..." Maan smiled nervously.
"That...?" Deepika was irritated.
"I lost my JOB!!" He said meekly closing his eyes tightly.
"WHAT????" She screamed. She breathed in and breathed out.
'I wont get this chance ever... What if he is jobless I can still enjoy...!' She smirked thinking.
"Its Alright baby I love you...!" Her hands crawled towards his back.
"When are you taking me to bed?" She whispered on his face. He was shocked. In hurry he again pushed her. She again fell into the pool.
"AAAHHH YOU PANAUTIII!!!" She screamed . She slowly swam across getting up on her own as Maan looked on.
"Your father is so right You are just a bad luck... I am happy to know this before hand...!" She spat on his face and walked out.
Maan was heartbroken as he held the ring behind his back.
A tear drop rolled down his right eye. He felt a hand on his right shoulder. He turned to find his childhood friend Adi.
********
Three Months Later
Maan put his bow straight.His Childhood sweetheart was coming back and he was going to propose her. He liked her and she liked him too. That's what she said the day he called her three months back.
"Hey Maan... How are you? Long time ? You forgot me????"
"Ohhh Sameera How can I forget you..." He said while picking up his toothbrush.
"That's why I like you..." No sooner had Sameera said this that the brush and his cellphone both fell from his hand and he bent to pick them up.
He was gleeing hearing her words as he resumed their conversation.
"I am coming to meet you tomorrow!" She said.
"I will pick you up..." He said promptly and the call was cut.
And so here he was waiting for her when he got a call.
"I am sorry Mr.Khurana but you don't need to come for the interview;... The candidate has been selected...!"
"Oh Its alright...!" He composed himself. No sooner had he cut the call when he saw her coming. He was shocked.
There came Sameera closely clinging to a man dressed in his fomals.
She just walked past him without looking at her. He composed himself calling her.
"Sameera!" She turned back and looked at him as she told her supposed boyfriend to wait.
"Maan!" She hugged him.
"You have changed,..." She said thrusting a mock punch on his face.
"Yes... Errr... He is????"He asked.
"He is my fiance..." She smiled.
"But you said you like me..." He made a crying face.
Sameera immediately realized herfault and she said " Oh no no I meant as a friend Maan! Awww My Poor Maan..." She hugged him again.
"Let's go home na... Let's have some buddy days like we used to have..." He pleaded gulping down his sobs and composing his broken heart.
"Come'on baby !! Let's go!!" The man called.
"Sorry Maan!! Baby is calling...!"
"Coming baby!"
She bid him and went away. And there stood Maan heartbroken again.
Aaj Mai phir haara
Mai toh hu Kismat ka Maara
Dil ko tha jiska intezaar
Shayad Kabhi Nahi aayegi woh paas mere
Kyunki Mai toh tha hu aur humesha rahunga
Panauti Sirf Ek Panauti...
Humesha Ek Panauti...
*********************
Four Months Later
"Dil Ko tha tumhara kab se intezaar
Aa Gayi tum aaj mai karunga apna pyaar ka izhaar"
Maan said bent on one of his knee.
"Haan Aa gayi mai mere pyaar ke paas
Nahi saha jaata yeh intezaar yeh..." She stuttered again.
"Pari What are you doing Concentrate please...!" He said and the lights went off. Both were practicng for their drama in their college. Pari was in first year and Maan in 3rd year.
"What the hell?" Pari murmurred and went away.
"Okay Let's start again...!" Maan said. He didn't hear Pari.
"Dil Ko tha tumhara kab se intezaar
Aa Gayi tum aaj mai karunga apna pyaar ka izhaar" He bent on one of his knees and spread his hands. Just then he felt a sting on his right cheek.
Lights came on and he found a lady drenched wet staring at him angrily.
"How dare you???? What did you think My sister is alone and you can take advantage of her???/ You despo creep!!..." She went on and on and Maan just kept staring at the cutie pie okay angry cutie pie infront of him.
"Sisss You are back!" Pari came and she hugged her.
"What is this despo guy doing here???" Geet asked angrily.
"Ohhh Sis! My Dear Siss We are practicing for our college drama!" pari said giggling and looked towards Maan.
Geet bit her tongue and put her hand over her mouth and went away.
Maan was still dazed.
"Ahem ahem Seems someone is still lost!" Pari cleared her throat hinting to Maan who immediately came back from Get land I mean Dream land.
"Oh aahh We will do the practice tomorrow...!"
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"Dev! I am here...!" Just then she saw him hugging a skimpily dressed girl.
"What the hell?" He cursed . He pushed the girl away and continued.
"Geet! This is not what you think... She needed comfort and..."
"And you provided her right Dev???" She gritted her teeth.
Dev was getting angry when the girl came and threw a whole glass of wine on Geet.
"You ******!" Geet cursed and started beating Dev with her hand bag.
"You scoundrel bas**** How dare you cheat me???? You ****" She screamed as the other girl went away.
Geet came home after lashing out her anger on her ex-boyfriend Dev. On seeing Maan like that she was extremely angry as her anger raised to the peak and she blasted on him.
"Poor him! Sissy What you did????" Pari said wanting to know what is Geet's feelings now that she was sure about Maan.
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Next Day Maan arrived early. He was walking fast when a soft body crushed into hs arms. He held Geet by her waist. Pari was giggling hiding behind the wall.
"Plan A successful!" She whispered.
"I am sorry! So so Sorry..." Geet blabbered while still in his arms.
Maan pulled her up , "Shhh Its Okay Geet ji..." He had asked Pari earlier about Geet and Pari had provided him all information without any hesitation.
Geet was astounded at his soft voice.
"Ummm..." She shifted from one leg to the other in nervousness.
"Ohh aahhh I need to go...!": Both said in the same time and laughed together.
*******************
They met again in a coffee shop.
"I am glad you came Geet err Geet..." He hesitated calling her by her name. When Geet blushed he got his confirmation.
"I got a job! A permanent Job!!" He hugged her.
He was so happy. He finally got it . Geet blushed more seeing him hugging her . She raised her hands to hug him back but rested them back again.
They talked for some more time and then returnd satisfied. Geet was blushing with her new found feelings while Maan was contended with the sudden peace he felt when close to her.
************************
It was the final day. The day they had the college drama function.
"Mai aa gaya... Nahi reh sakta Mai Tumhare bina..."
"Door nahi raha jaata Mujhse bhi tumhaare bina..."
"Aa gaya hu Mai Karne Apne Pyaar Ka Izhaar..."
"I love you Rob..."
"I love you Nancy..."
All the while Maan said all the dialogues staring at Geet. Geet was dumbstruck not knowing where to look. She was blushing redder and redder.
Their eyelock broke with the clapping of the audience.
Pari nudged him, "Go go go Confess!!" And he smiled widely and went running.
***********
They reached her home.
Geet went inside running. Maan saw her running and went behind her.
"Geet... Geet Comee out please...?"
"Search search Maan Try harder...!"
"Geet!!!" He rushed towards her and she moved away and he fell into the pool. Whilst he falling he intended to hold her hand. Instead he held her skirt which almost came off as both fell inside.
"Aaahhh Maan You cheapo!!" She screamed holding his hair.
"You WILD CAT!!" Man naughtily held her hair.
Both laughed as they came out of the pool.
"Back to Square One Ahan!!" Maan said blushing.
Geet raised on tip toes and kissed on his cheek.
"I love you Maan...!"
"Geet I want you to know something..." Maan was serious.
***********************
Maan told her about his family his failed love and his bad luck.
"I was always a bad luck Geet... Always!" He cried on her shoulder.
"And I am still ! Much less in status than yours! How will I afford things for you...!" He sobbed.
"The person who has my Sis can never be a bad luck Maan bhai!" Pari said interrupting them.
Both smiled watching their little cupid.
"Yes Maan! My Maan can never be a bad luck!" She said proudly hugging him.
And they never looked back...
********************
Six years Later
"Maan! Here comes your surprise...!" Geet said bringing someone in...
"Maan Beta!"
Maan turned in a second. He was in tears seeing his father after so many years.
"I am sorry Beta, I was so wrong...You were never a bad luck... Never!" He hugged Maan.
Geet blushed coming out of the room hinting at Maan.
"Papa I am sorry too!!" He said.
"And..." He smiled happily.
"I am going to be Papa , Papa!"
He hugged Geet staring at her lovingly. She came out of his hug and went to take elders' blessings.
Since he married her He simply progressed. He was promoted to higher posts. Finally gaining enough money He started his own company all supported by Geet.
They were happily married now and now going to be proud parents with their whole family.
Shayad Mai Panauti tha
Kyunki thi Mere Kismat ki Pudiya
Meri Dil Ki Gudiya Mujhse Door
Na raha abb Mai Panauti aur na hi Kismat Ka Maara
Paas Jo aayi Meri Meet
Aasmaan ki unn Bulandiyon pe pahuncha
Jis par Mujhe nahi tha Yakeen
Haar gayi meri kismat mere aage
Kyunki Nahi hu Mai Panauti
Nahi hu Mai akela
Ek jaan ko duji mil gayi
Maan Ko Mil Gayi Apni Geet...

Humesha woh bane rahe Humare MaanEet



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Posted: 12 years ago
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new OS ...

kya baath hai marsi hum par itni meharbaan kaise hogayi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bola tha na aapke liye surprise!!
M/V ke finish honey ki khushi mai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely idea...
kaha se aya yeh idea...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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but this much much much better than that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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He he nahi nahi Afterparty something else ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 15 ki comment mein ne abhi edit kiya 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woh mujhe pata tha :P
Mai bewakoof nahi GK :P
Marsi Devil hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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par tune bola nahi na..nahi hi gussa kiya...
socha tune nahi dehka ...
haan janthi hoon apni choti devil ko...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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he he abb choti choti baaton pe marsi gussa kyun kare???? commnt toh mil gaya na toh bas khatam

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