In The Arms of Death ...(chapter 4 page 5/7 nov) - Page 2

Originally posted by: .bloom.

all d best !!! wht abt ur ss title dear??

thanku n suggest me one ... i m blank ek thriller + omantic story ka title nahi sujh raha hai😭

loved it...a bit confused but will wait for story to unfold...continue soon

Originally posted by: shabnam22

loved it...a bit confused but will wait for story to unfold...continue soon

thanks n u will get a idea n clarity when the past starts unfoling😊

Hai priya,
Jst read the prologue,first and second part of ur story.Its great,i always love stories with mystery.
The name of the ff attracted me the most,so i thot of reading it,and turned out to be good.Grt going grl,continue.
And there's another reason of my luv for u,you share ur name wid my sis-PRIYA.
Pls pm me d upcoming parts.

thanku guys,
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here's the next part

Chapter-3

Maan: geet we will talk about it in the morning for now just sleep Geet: hmmm

Wishing her good night he left for his room which was next to her closing the door he sat on window pane to find some solace .. no he was not hurt he was rather scared for geet he had seen various shades of her in this week from happy calm composed innocent bubbly girl to matured strict practical person n a fire in her voice having poisonous anger which could destroy anything and everything in her way but what confused him was the environment she came from was a way to homely, safe, '. They did not relate him to her personally. This was not the first time she was saying not to marry her.. but he could not do that not deny though it was an arranged marriage for her but a love marriage for him yes it was a love at first sight for him but that was not the reason for him of not denying he would have definitely denied but he has seen something for him in her eyes he wanted to take a chance and give this relationship some time so that things start working but it again came to square one from were it started though not to forget this was the first time she tried giving some explanation for her denial but still he was happy she was opening up to him. Just in the morning wasn't she sharing for childhood n then again the same line n every thing reverse, back to square one in just the matter of few hours'..

He was confused hurt more than everything scared'.he didn't know when he slept thinking about all this '. Early in the morning he woke up due to sharp pain in his body and went on the bed though

He could not sleep even on the bed due to pain n the buring sensation that's when geet came to his room with a cup of coffee..

Geet woke up n after her daily routine went n made 2 cups of coffee went out in the garden but could not find maan so went to his room to see if he was their n nooked on the door which was slightly open n saw maan restless turning from one side another n did not bother to take his permission went in side n keeping the coffee on the side table sat beside him..

Geet: maan kya hua aapko .. not feeling well u could have called me maan said checking if he had fever.. maan seeing her concerned face says nothing just little body pain will be fine ''..

Geet: will u except if I treat it trust me u will be fine in next halfen hour promise just let me help u pls '. I know I don't have the any right before u ask me question like last time but I let u dress my wound yesterday right soo u will have to allow me pls..

Maan : geet it's ok relax n m fine ..

But geet cut him in the middle n with a finality in her tone said u r just gonna be on bed till I complete my work that's it n walked out of the room' maan smiled once again having a huge grin on his face.. that's when geet entered the room n sat beside him n was about to apply the oil but maan hold's her hand n says I didn't permit u Miss.Handa in his MSK serious n strict tone'' but then he saw the need n how desperately she wanted to take away his pain n sighing said ok but only if u share your childhood experiences with me n geet smiled a little'n started applying the oil n again started thinking from were should she start as if guessing her question he said from very frist day u remember or u have been told all the fun geet every moment'.

Precap: Geet's past'

Thanku guys for the likes n comments from now on u will start understanding the story as after few parts of her childhood n then the present situation u will start understanding maan's pov n then the story'

And I wanna know how do I PM u guys the link of the update it gives an error says newbies are not permitted to send a link in PM😭

Do press the like butten if u like ofcourse else please let me know the flaws '

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Hai priya,
Jst read the prologue,first and second part of ur story.Its great,i always love stories with mystery.
The name of the ff attracted me the most,so i thot of reading it,and turned out to be good.Grt going grl,continue.
And there's another reason of my luv for u,you share ur name wid my sis-PRIYA.
Pls pm me d upcoming parts.

thanku 😊 n will defiantly PM U..

Waiting to know geet's past.
grt update.

loved it
waiting for geet's past

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