In The Arms of Death ...(chapter 4 page 5/7 nov)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi...

I have been a silent reader since a while now n loved all the stories to core... Have something to share with u guys do let me know if I should continue...

Concept:

She is nave n he is fire,

She talented n his desire,

They meet as strangers n situations make them friends...

Lets see how they make through their journey of life...

Character Stech:

Geet Handa: Is an b-tech student doing her computer engineering is in 2nd sem. Is a business women but her identity is kept a secrete...

N rest u will come to know as the story progress

MSK: our very own maan same as the serial ...

Captain Abhimanu Rai Chauhan & Major Armaan Pathi geet's friends n body gaurds..

Will inturduce the rest of the members as story continues as per the need

let me know if I should continue...😳

INDEX
chapter 1: page 2
chapter 2: page 3
chapter 3: page 4
chapter 4: page 5


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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya sure ! plz con soon !
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is it an ff ?is it aff ?
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did npt decide yet..😊 for now it's a SS
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Originally posted by: PRIYA_123456789

did npt decide yet..😊 for now it's a SS

all d best !!! wht abt ur ss title dear??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chaper 1

Thanku guys'..

Here's the first part''.

Flashback:

Rano: aapke ladle abhi tak so rahi hai '.. uthaiye use'..

Mohinder: sone do use hath dho ke peche paad gaye ho mere bacchii ke

Saying this goes to his darling room.. oh has satisfied smile on his face seeing his princess sleeping peacefully n slowly calls her n wakes her up'

Mohinder: geet shona '..aww mera baby uth gaya

Geet: hmm papaji' said pouting n hugs him wishing a goood moringg

Ok geet get ready varna mumma apko aur mujhe hum dono chaccha chaba jaiyege aaj

N both gigged n geet goes for a nice shower'..

Present:

Geet : pata hai maan mumma na bahut strict hai pehle se he n papaji is a my darling'

Maan making faces says par darling toh mein hun na'says making weird baby faces..

Geet : aap pe suit nahi karta maan n aap se pahle mere dad hai aap na 2 ho'

Hwww says maan dramatically as if hurt n then sighs looking at his princess worried n sad

Maan: mazzak tha geet n takes into a side hug.. smiling

Ok tell me shone how did u end up into all this u know'

Geet: pata hai maan papaji never wanted me in all this he simply wanted his daughter to be a bussniess women n have comfortable n easy life.. but u know thing just are out of control some times n don't end up as expected ''.. but you what I don'nt regret it'says smiling'.

Tring tring''''''''.

Maan phone baaj raha hai uthaye na '.

Hmmm says maan n picks up the phone'.

10 mins says geet Amy ka phone tha u have to attend the meeting with them in an hour shone he says it's sumthing urgent'

Hmm says geet sighing n get ready ...

let me know how was it ...

well guys story filhaal flashback mein chale ge atleast for some 4-5 updates ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do continue dear!!!!!!!!!
It is very nice!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note
ek help chahiye guys ek romantic thriller ka title i mean this story is
a romantic cum thriller story
pls suggest a title for the ss...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting story.. pls cont soon.
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thanku guys ...
rizwanaq, keerthi90, sanam1234u, maaneetmaahi, dona86, -dia-,


here's the next chapter

Chap 2

Armaan : hi geet

Geet: hi amy

Armaan (amy): shona kya hua ……. He could sense her being disturbed or sad she was restless and he could feel it in her actions. He called her twice but she was lost somewhere…the journey was quiet n silent . they reached their destination meeting got over n then again they were out for dinner…

Geet: Amy can we pls send the guards back ….. after a pause I just wanna be alone for sometime I will drive back home just drop me near the lake..

Armaan : it's not safe princess for u to be alone right now n geet started making faces sighing he said ok baba we will send the guards home but let me atleast be near u as friend I know u can take care of ur self par mere itne baat toh manege na meri princess….and geet nooded smiling .. whats bothering u shona .. mujhe nahi bataoge

Geet: bata ke fayda hota toh bate says in daze still in thoughts..

After the dinner they went to the lake sat their for a while where geet was lost in own world having a far away look on her face………… then both reached home..geet wished him gud night n entered the house only to see maan sleeping on the sofa in the hall like a baby……….n a lone tear roled down her eyes n in trance she hit the vase n broke ..with the sudden commotion maan woke up n rushed to geet side who step on the glass n was still not aware of that she was hurt she was in her thoughts n was tensed he could guess that with the look on her face……. Gently he picked her up in her arms it was only then geet realised he was awake n was holding her…………

Maan: geet u ok dhyan kaha tha tumhara dekho kitne choot lag gaye hai tumhee n geet looked at the concern on his face n smiled n said it's nothing… he carefully placed her on sofa n then got the first aid kit n carefuuly bandaged her wound..he could sense hesitation in her action so did'nt probe into it n simply carried her to her room gently placing her on the bed n tucked the blanket around her kissed her on the forehead n wished her gud night with a slight smile …was about to leave the room when heard geet's voice n stood rooted

Maan mere itne chinta maat karo itne kareeb maat aao please just refuse please don'nt marry me….. Looking at his hurt n questioning eyes she again continued my life is really complicated maan don'nt waste yours with me, dad told me to meet u spend time with u n then decide …. N trust me dude u r an awesome preson n the girl who marries you will be really lucky it's just that we don'nt fit inn..bas yahi kahna tha good night ….

Precap: what will be maan reaction ??

guys here's the next part tell me how was it n comments n criticism all are welcome...😊

the story pace right now will be slow n will go in past for some time in the coming parts please suggest me some tittle ...

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