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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7


life is as usual ..ok yaar nt vry gud nt vry bad
u tell???

same here!
But mostly its boring. Na jyaada updates aur nahi anything intresting on tv! Uspe abhi light bannd hai!
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Posted: 12 years ago
shona kahan hai tuuu
update kab de rahi hai
ab aur intazar na karaooo
rim jhim rim jhim😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

shona kahan hai tuuu

update kab de rahi hai
ab aur intazar na karaooo
rim jhim rim jhim😳

sorry for the delay!
But i wont make u wait long..
Updating tonight!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

sorry for the delay!
But i wont make u wait long..
Updating tonight!

Hum bhi intezaaring besabri se.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Hum bhi intezaaring besabri se.😃

thank u for intezaaring besabri se nishu dii😃
i hope aake intezaar ka fal aapko mitha lage!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-16(A)

That was the first time, she had cried for him, actually for anyone so desperatly! The pain was too much to bear. Her heart was hurt deeply.
Its really painful to know that the person who matters to you the most, doesnt even care if you exist or not! And thats exacly what she had felt at that time. That her presence or absence doesnt matters to him. Only the thought, itself was so painful. Her tears were not stoping, however hard she tried!

Admist of that immense pain, suddenly there was anger also. Anger at self & at him. Anger on self that why she was reacting like that? Why she was crying for such a silly thing?
And anger at him that he doesnt care! That he didnt even bothered to talk to her, forget saying a "sorry" instead he was busy with that new found friend!
However, the anger at him was more! Coz it was his fault and top of that he had ignored her!
After crying for so long & thinking about the whole thing, she took a decision. She decided that if he doesnt want to talk to her, then she will also not talk to him! She will show him that If he doesnt care, then she also doesnt care!
But was that so easy?

Next day, she started for school, determind to ignore him completely. And show him that she wasnt intrested in talking to him as well. She entered the class with these thoughts, running in her mind. But
Unwillingly, her eyes went to his seat, searching for him and realised that he hadnt came yet. She went to her seat. She decieded that she wont even look at him, when he will come.
There was still 15 minutes lefts for their first class to start. One by one students were coming. She started to solve some practice questions. She was trying to not to think about him & concentrate, but her heart was restlessly waiting for him to come. When only 3 minutes were left, a thought came to her mind, increasing her restlessness, "why he hasnt come yet?" or "isnt he going to come today?" with each passing second, her restlessness kept increasing.

The final bell rang and then the Teacher entered the classroom. And she felt disappointed that now he wont come! She was taking out the required books, but her heart was lost somewhere else! It was missing him. She felt her heart getting heavy. She looked down, trying to control her emotions.
After few seconds, she heard something which made her to look up instantly!
"may i come in sir?"...and there he was! She didnt even realised that how her restless heart was at peace suddenly! With just a look at him and all the restlessness disapeared.
After getting the permission, he entered. He was going towards his seat. And she kept staring at him, unkowingly.
As soon as his eyes met hers, he gave his bright smile to her and unknown to her self, a sweet smile appeared on her own lips too!

All that pain, hurt and anger was forgotten in that moment. As if everything..that pain, hurt ,anger, every complain.. all was gone with just that one smile from him! Her heart was clam & at peace.

And then they were once again back to their old self..as if last day's fight never happened. And she also didnt mantioned anything about his last day's behaviour.


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hi!
Sorry for the delay. ..was supposed to update yesterday..but my net was troubling me..so, i couldnt!
Anyways..here is the first half of the part 16 and the next half is coming in the evening.
Teaser will be included then.
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't know the logic behind being excited, because I am first, nonetheless I am first.😃
Oh the angst of teenage love. Pal bhar mein hasna, aur pal bhar mein rona. The highs and the lows of emotional tides, the feeling that your world revolves around just that one special person. All these were put forth beautifully, through Geet's emotional upheaval.
She is totally caught up in this love isn't she. Her sun rises and sets on Maan. But the hurt she felt is not resolved is it? And what about Maan's feelings? Still waiting for you to reveal his side of the story.😉
Yaar reading your story reminded me of a friend, who's cried buckets on my shoulder, during our teenage years, because of some guy. Man she was crazy about him.😆
Still waiting for the teaser: Rim jhim Rim Jhim😳
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
And his one smile solved everything...
aww...
Can i get any cuter???
Your geet is such a darling..
i so much can relate with her..Her decision of ignoring him and then restlessness of her heart at not finding him on his seat..
when he arrived finally,his one smile and all her resolutions of not speaking to him and ignoring him went in to drain...!!!
Love makes you "helpless" in true sense ...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


I don't know the logic behindbeing excited, because I am first, nonetheless I am first.😃{and i was excited to see ur "res" post..so fast! It made me smile.. Thank u!😃}

</div><div>Oh the angst of teenage love. Pal bhar mein hasna, aur pal bhar mein rona. The highs and the lows of emotional tides, the feeling that your world revolves around just that one special person. All these were put forth beautifully, through Geet's emotional upheaval.{am really glad that u liked it dii. To be honest..am getting nervous as the story is progressing..hope i will not disappoint any of u.}
She is totally caught up in this love isn't she. Her sun rises and sets on Maan. But the hurt she felt is not resolved is it?{yes! He has become her world...it doesnt matter if he has hurt her or she is angery with him...she cant stay away from him.
"Tu hi meri hai saari zami..
Chahe kahin se chalun..
Tujh pe hi aake rukun..
Tere siva main jaaun kahan...
Koi bhi rah chunu..
Tujh pe hi aake rukun..!"
and u will get to feel it more in next part!}
And what about Maan's feelings? Still waiting for you to reveal his side of the story.😉{Thoda aur intezar...plzz..}
Yaar reading your story reminded me of a friend, who's cried buckets on my shoulder, during our teenage years, because of some guy. Man she was crazy about him.{its the fact that we all hav felt these feelings to some extent in our teenage, wethear we accept it or not!
And that time one really need their close one's to guide & support them. And ur friend was lucky to hav u!😊}
😆
Still waiting for the teaser: Rim jhim Rim Jhim😳{Its coming in evening..i hope..u will like it!}

Thank u so much di...for a long comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh shona u r doin full justice wid dis teenage luv story dear😛
u know dear i was all in action 😆 n mentally chillaying buck up geetu ...jst IGNORE him😆
bt alas !!!!!!all gone in drain as she started missing him n panicking over dat gadha😆 ..n in last she gav him a smile...then i thought ... dats exactly how a teenage heart will react ...good job 👏
waiting fr nxt part eagerly dear 😳


Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago

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