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aa gai 😆😆😆😆
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hiii alll i am here with part 4








PART 4



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Maan : mera matlab hai' upar dekh kar baat karo..( I mean you can look straight while you talk'

Geet very innocently answered making him to loose in guilt and her and a certain rage erupted for the rituals that were damaging the life of young innocent children'

Geet : hum aapki taraf kaise dekh sakte hain aap toh hamare pati hai na' maa ne kaha tha aap se nazrein niche rakh kar baat karein..

( how can I talk looking into your eyes .. you are my husband .. and maa said I should always keep my eyes low infront of you')

A certain guilt surged through him ' getting married being husband and wife were just words for him and even for her' but the intensity and heart with which she was trying to cope up was making his heart swell with some unknown pride and was nurturing the seeds of respect and love that will be unconditional for her just for her'

" kuch rishte naa chahte hue bhi hume apne me band dete hain'

Kuch jazbaat lobon pe na aakar bhi zehan me bas jaate hain'

Ek najuk dor se jude do masoom dil jo na milkar bhi ek dusre se judh jayenge'"

She was innocent , nave and utterly beautiful.. and why cant she.. she is a teenage girl who is actually looking for some new enjoyment some new friends.. these responsibities are no less than any burden for her'..

Maan whispered just to make her look In astonishment'

Maan: I am sorry'.

Geet was so confused first this marriage now her husband is saying sorry to her when she is at fault ' she actually fell unconcious'. She was actually feeling light and carefree now.. his presence was soothing her worries '. Maan was getting a new glimpse of his wify.. when he unconciously uttered sorry..he could not miss her so cute and actually eatable expressions'. She was looking at him with confusion biting her lips.. actually kind of eating her lipstick..

Maan st:she need not to have any lip gloss .. she is already pink princess .. so smooth'.

Geet tried to ask him why did he have to say sorry to her but thought may be she hear wrong'.

Geet : kya humne suna.. ye hume sorry kyun keh rahe hain.. galti toh umse hui hai na' hawww..babaji.. kahin aisa toh nahi ye humse mafu mangwana chahte ho'. Hum bhi na'.

( did I hear correct ..why he is asking apology from me' when I am actually at fault' aww' babaji is it that he wants me to apologise .. geet you are really a fool'.)

Maan could easily hear her soft self talks' she was now sitting very close to him' still now feeling a bit uncomforatable.. he could see her feeling hot in that red bridal attire and extremely heavy jewels' one side his mind cursed the elders and chided his wife.. that she didn't even feel to get rid of that attire'.

Seeing her having difficulty ..he very slowly leaned towards her and tried to find the pin that was holding the heavy dupatta.. finally he got success .. but to his horror there were bunch of pins that were holding the single dupatta.. today he wanted to yell on top of his voice' one day and his life is in utter mess.. and not forget THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA is now married and that too at a harmful age'

Maan finally tied to open one pin.. that was holding the heavy and deadly piece of cloth only to get a painful wince ' she flinched in pain.. he actually pulled her hair'.

Geet: ahh'.

Maan: sorry'

Geet was now wating to go.. with some minutes second sorry.. she will now faint' she never ever heard that the men in her family will apologise to anyone..especially to the wowen of the family.. sometimes she heard her father and uncle to shout on her mother and chachi but never he heard any apology and here her husband was actually asking sorry for every small thing'.

Maan finally pulled all the pins and when he was about to pull of the last pin'. The dupatta very softy fell down.. revealing her in the deep red choli and lehenga' she was feeling extremely shy' and tried to go when maan acually pulled her to him.. making her fall on his chest.. her face was hidden in his chest and she was enhaling the deep cologue mixed with his manly scent' for the first time she was getting tensed , shy and feeling jitters in her body' her tummy was aching for something that was still unknown'.

On the other hand hand maan was no less disturbed and feeling weird sensations'. Her fruity fragrance was actually sweet and entralling like her.. she was like a sweet cherry deep red..he could imagine her flushed state and eyes closed'..

His hands went to her back and opened a not' her eyes suddenly opened feeling a sudden burden off her.. he unclapsed all her heavy neck lace.. in the process his warm breath was continously teasing her senses and she was actually feeling lost In his embrace'..

He pulled her slightly and took off the neckalce' next was the mangalsutra ..he was blout to take it off when he noticed her shivering hand touching him..and her eyes pleading telling him'

" ise humse juda mat kariya'. "

( don't part this from me')

He felt an unknown pride and beloging towards her.. and smiled assuring her that it will be there only for the coming lives'.

Somewhere the innocent hearts have accepted there fate that they are bounded to each other by destiny '

Slowly maan turned her around.. plastering her to his back..and very slowly took off the haeavy earings' nad the maang tika' her hair were still in a bun that were actuallly adorned with flowers'.. he was not having any urge to remove the flowers from the flower that was now in his embrace when he heard a sweet plea that was asking for his help'.

Geet: aap ye phool nikal dijiye please hume ye bilkul ache nahi lagte'

( can you pull remove these flowers from I don't like these '..)

He couldn't help but smile at his innocent and super cute wifyy and now like the loving and an obedient hubby he removed every single flower from her hair.. along with the hair pins and accessories only to get a clear glimpse of her waist length long hair'

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Awww..Maan ki cute Balika Vadhu...Rabbit 3 smiley 071
He is so caring...muuaahh banh bao 2 smiley 007
WOW!!!! do ke tummy me kuch kuch ho raha hei...Super onion smiley 020
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww, they were married at such a tender age. loved their sweet and innocent interactions.would love to see lengthier updates pls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kr diya Sweety...
Time lagta hei...Jaanam samjha karo...Leaf smiley 003
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
maan is cursing elder bcoz they made them married at this age
but later maan will thank them for sending his cute little innocent wife in his life
nd the way geet is unknowingly or knowingly accepting this marriage
made maan heart to swell up in pride
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update 😛
Lil wify is so cute 😃
Maan too is so cute n caring 😳
Loved It 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
MSK HELPING HIS WIFE😉..MAAN ADMIRE HIS CUTE LITTLE WIFE😛😛..MAANEET CUTE ROMANTIC MOMENT.😳YE KITNE BAR SORRY BOLEGA😆

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