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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Part 12

Geet was stunned, Shocked seeing this news. She never expected this would happen. She was out of word or any emotions. She was speechless. again n again she was reAding and making her heart stress free. Since she came here, her mind was filled for security of her friends. What would happen of them if warden again sell them like her. She had no one, to whom she could tell her fear. A corner of her heart was dieing every moment for her friends but seems , she was babaji's best list, so he sent her savior in form of a human. Her savior did not ask her wish but understood. He did what no one could do, selflessly. She was indebted of Maan.

"nakul bhaiya'' she said with moist eyes. It was her regard for Maan. " maaji ne … '' she showed paper to him. Nakul read and was very happy. He knew Maan was kind hearted but today, his respect for Maan increased , beyond limit. "bhaiya I want to thank Maanji, per he gets angry always. How I would thank him'' she asked seriously. She remembered flower fiasco and got scared. Nakul too dint know what would make Maan happy. He suggested to call him and thank, that would be safest way. He gave her kc (khurana construction) number. Geet called kc . Receptionist said Maan is busy in meeting, Call later.

Geet wanted to go Orphanage and meet her wordy family. She was very excited and tensed for them. She asked to makul. he advised no to go as she was unknown to location but she convinced him saying would take newspaper with her for address. nakul agreed, gave her some conveyance and she left. both were unaware of what could have outcome.

Geet caught a auto and showed him paper, saying here to go. Driver stopped before Orphanage & said there is very crowded and could not go nearer. she came out and walked when her eyes caught reason of crowd. she saw big vans, machines, wires, people were speaking loudly in front of cameras. yes they were media people. They were doing interviews of girls. some girls were enjoying, some were scared. small girls were touching machines and some were covering their face in Dupatta (Scarf). some male reporters were hawking on girls like they would do postmortem of them then n there with their questions. it was girls place without any godmother so all were free to ask whatever they liked..

Geet heart started beating fast. first time she was facing all these . she could not decide should go inside or not but it was her home but how would she not meet her friends. Clutching her Dupatta (Scarf), gazing around, nervous, hesitating, with trembling legs she entered. reporters were asking a girls, who had been sold out in recent and girl innocently pointed toward Geet...

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Maan came back from meeting. he rested on chair and switched on tv. Orphanage news was coming but it was not live. something stuck in his mind. he called nakul

'' hello nakul did Geet read news"

'' ji sir .. she was very happy"

" hmm..achha suno dont let her go Orphanage now.. ""

" but sir wo to chali gayi.. maine bahut mana kiya lelin nahi Maani"

" what! ! damn" Maan cut and rushed to Orphanage.

ORPHANAGE

" miss Geet so you are the one who had been sold out... "

Geet nodded looking around.

" miss Geet since when you are living here "

" do..do mahine se"

" Geet was it first time you had been sold.. ya pajle bhi asa hua tha "

she was numb

" miss Geet did you know before about this deal"

she shook head nervously

" Geet was you alone in one room with that man.. kitne der tak rahi waha" " can you describe him?? ''

she was verge of cry

" Geet can you tell us what he did .. we want to know how bast** he was "

she started cry

" Geet how was you feeling .aapko kaisa lag raha tha jab aapko ek darinde ( beast) ke haantho becha gaya

she was hating all this.. she wanted to run.. go to mansion.. to her room. she was feeling so scared and alone. Somewhere she her corner of heart wanting Maan, to be there, to save her again.

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A car stopped on entrance followed by two securities vans. police and guard run inside and threw reporters away, out. these all was so scary for innocent girls. Geet was disturbed,thinking about those shameless questions . she didn't know when a strong hand clutched her hand and dragged her out of gate, when she sat in car and where she going now...

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" Geet !! " Maan called her... " Geet!! '' again called little louder. she looked him. he scared looking her eyes. it was dead red .

" Geet you dont need to be scare. everything is fine"

She looked him. She always felt a strange security being around him. she felt little better. " Maanji " she meekly said

" hmm''

" wo ye sab tv pe dikhayenge? " she asked

Maan stopped car and called someone. he ordered to stop all telecast of this interview otherwise they would have to face Maan Singh Khurana wrath. He was very angry. Geet looked him and thanked heartily...

They reached KC

" Geet I have to attend a meeting .. so you are coming office with me.. after that I would drop you mansion.." Maan was going out of car

" nahi iski koi jarurat nahi Maanji.. I hv money I can go myself "

" Geet..u dint listen what I said. you are not going alone anywhere. you are coming office with me and then we would leave together.. samjgi tum " Maan dint want her to ho alone as he knew media would not leave her in peace. She agreed looking his anger. both came out. Geet looked kc building and could not even blink. she became statue when Maan turned and shouted. " Geet are you coming or not. " she run to him but stopped at lift entrance. " wo I would wait here only. " she denied ...


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
geet was happy but next moment she was scared ..
,moron why cant the reporters ask some sensible questions to the victims rather than they hurt the more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... Thank God maan has come in ri8 time... Yea geet bilkul jhalli hai.. Interesting precap.. Yea Ladki Maan Ki Geet hai... Lol ... Waiting eagerly..
Edited by ManeetGurtiMG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awesome blossom update...😃...i knew it.hayeee maan again save her frm that stupid repoters n took away from there n omg maan actually took her with him at kc.😳...hayeee mein kya karu he just gradually owned her ❤️...per am scered of precap ...no way geet wub be face some unusual words...😔
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now that was a real SURPRISE to us also 😲😆😆
Nice.. 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb update lovu... 👏

yea media k liye kisi ki emotions ka koi value nehi hai...ushe sirf news chaiye😡😡...thank god maan aa gaya nehi to pata nehi aur kya kya hota...waise maan kaise nehi aata geet ka maan jo hai...usse to aana hi hai😊😉...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting twist buddy,maan being protective,...totally smitten by mk's authority and attitude...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago



poor Geet so scared of all these reporters and camera...

but Maan hai na how can he leave her alone...

awesome update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
media is sooo much
just want trps pathetic
thank god maan reached on time
nd maaneet to maan office interesting

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