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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god what a tragedy
madhu never knew that her husband never cheated her and she wanted revenge from him in the next birth
and she did by marrying maan
and geet or madhu tried to kill maan but is there any way to get geet back
god what now
this is even worse than ever before
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiii...Awesome update...loved it...wowww...interesting flashbacks...hope maan can help geet...NT sooo sweet...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!!
😲 Geet trying to kill Maan...
How will they dissuade her from Madhubala?
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh now how will madhu realize true love of Rameshwar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read only two parts. Rest will read later lack of time. Vacation do family first and trying all writers... Bear with me.

I think this movie is inspired by one malayalam movie which then tamil, telugu Hindi and Kannada remake it. The movie name Manichitratazhu. Secret room and key reminds me that movie so imagination was easy.

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Edited by riafna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Parts 7 & 8

Awesome part..
Loving this story..
Keeping me glued to the chair..
Hope Maneets love overcomes all hurdles...
Pls continue soon...
Thanx for pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now what vil maan do???
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really feel sorry for rameshwar!i hope madhubala soul ko i mean geet ko when she turns to madhu that rameshwar was rite abt devandar!
So my guess was rite she was the one who tried to kill maan by putting oil on steps!
Iam sure maan wnt leave his geet's hand becoz he loved her in previous birth n loves her in present!
Cnt sn dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

The Palace of secrets Part 9

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Maan shed tears:I will always be with Geet.I will never leave her.I will always support her.
Everybody shed tears.
Aloknath:Geet is lucky to have a good husband like you.No wonder.You are the reincarnation of Rameshwar bhai.You are as good as his heart.You love her as much as Rameshwar loved Madhubala.

Maan stood near Geet and shed tears.
M:Geet'how will I save you?

After some time she woke up.Maan was upset seeing her innocent smile.He controlled his tears.
M:Happy birthday Geet!
G:Thank you'
Geet took bath and came out.She was surprised to see a red saree and matching ornaments on the bed.
She looked at Maan with surprise.
M:How is my birthday gift?
G:I loved it a lot.The ornaments are just like what a Queen must have worn long ago.
Maan's face became dim.He was reminded of Madhubala.
Geet took the saree to wear.
M:I will drap it for you.
She blushed.
Maan draped the saree for her.She was very shy.He caressed her face making her more shy.
He adorned her with ornaments.He filled the parting of her hair with vermillion.
Maan caressed her face and looked deeply at her:My birthday lady looks perfect now.

She blushed.
He went to the main hall where everyone wished her 'Happy birthday'.
G:Thank you all.
She touched the elders' feet for blessing.Everyone's heart pained while blessing her.

Aloknath blessed Geet.He gave her the painting of a historical place.
A:You like to collect the paintings of historical places.Right?
G:Wow!This is so beautiful dadu.Thanks a lot.
Mohindar and Rano tried hard to control their tears.They hugged Geet and gave her a historical book.
Geet was excited:Wow!Papa'Maa'thank you so much.
Sahil and Ganga struggled hard to hide their pain and smiled at Geet.
Ganga:Geet'your chacha and chachi made favourite Kheer.
Geet was surprised:Really?Sahil chachu and Ganga chachi always do wonders at making sweets.
Sahil:Taste it and see how we made it.
They both fed her with spoon.
G:Wow!So tasty.Thank you chachi chachu'
Maan became emotional.He thought:Geet is so lucky to have such a lovely family.All of them love her so much despite of the fact that she is giving them sleepless nights.


Geet blew the candle light and cut the cake.She fed Maan first.Maan fed her back.Then she fed everyone else.She was very happy.
He ran inside a room and cried.Aloknath went behind him:Damadji!
M:I can't bear this pain dadu.My Geet is so happy.She is so innocent.How will I save her?What should I do?
A:Madhubala's effect will leave her completely only if the Madhubala in her would be able to take revenge on Rameshwar,that's you.Madhubala's memories will leave her only if you die.
Maan went crazy.
A:But Madhubala does'nt know that the real cheater was not Rameshwar,but Devendar.Rameshwar is the person who loved her,Devendar never loved her.If Madhubala realizes that she will not try to take revenge on you,infact she will start loving you.
Maan had hope.
M:But how will we make her understand the truth?
A:I don't know.
Maan thought for a moment.
M:What if we plan a drama which shows her the truth?
A:Good idea.But is that possible.
M:Yes.We can recreate the past in front of her,so that she will be able to see the truth directly.I will be Rameshwar.
A:But who can be Devendar?He should be exposed before her.So he is the most important character.
M:Devendar should be someone who can act very well.We should find out a person to play Devendar flawlessly.
Naintara came inside:I will help you jeeju.There is someone who can be Devendar.
Maan was excited:Who is he?
NT:Dev!
M:Dev?
NT:Yes.My fiance.He is a very good drama artist.
M:Devendar is an excellent dancer.Can he dance?
NT:Why not?No one can defeat him in anything.
Maan smiled.

NT took Maan to Dev.
NT:This is my Dev!
They shook hands:Nice to meet you.
M:I hope Naintara told you everything.Please help me to save my wife's life.
D:Sure.I will do anything to help Naintara to save her sister.She loves Geet that much.
Maan smiled.He looked at Naintara:I never knew that you love Geet this much.Without understanding that i hurt you a lot.
Naintara became emotional:It's ok jeeju.Now we should plan how to bring the truth to Geet.
Maan looked nervous.
Dev:Be cool Maan.Be confident about our plan.I am sure that we will succeed in making your wife normal by erasing her previous life's memories from her unconscious mind.For that we will be able to remove her revengeful thoughts from her unconscious mind.Sure.
Maan was still worried about his beloved wife Geet.


Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago

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