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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblowing like always.
Just can't wait for the next update to know Wat Maan's next poem abt.
Plz cont soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ita a very nice and sweet story... Somewhere i m feeling bad 4r geet not because her scares but something in her narration i can feel the pain in her heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice part...under the table part was awesome we can image geet expression from GHSP outhouse episode...maan found out sameera true colours...she is just show off...
he must have written about geet and kids...nd der enthusiasm...
Geet is in pain...she is realizing dat she is falling for her boss...
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part...

now maan thinking about geet...

waiting for next...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read the last two updates...

both were just awesome...so now the crushed paper has a story now...
The first few lines were about her external beauty... wonder what would be there in the recent one as he seems to know the nature of sameera a bit now ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW... that was the only word coming out from my mouth after reading the update...

i loved the scene where geet was searching for the crushed paper under the table... it was just like reminiscing the beautiful memories of the beautiful moments of our serial...

i loved her suggestion of chocolate pastries... for the children over there it will be definitely a treat...

"You can't trust with hygiene at such places,maan"... such a fake and showoff person... her love towards orphan children was just a fake to show to the society how nice she is... and am happy that maan came to know about her true colours now itself....

My immune system is able to bear little "love"... i just love him

she realized she had fallen for "that" which could never be hers...😭 i really hope "that" helps her to come out of all her insecurities

maans crushed paper is becoming the obsession of not only geet but ur readers too including me... just like geet who search for it in every morning am anticipating it in ur every update... the crushed paper which has become a mirror to maans feelings and also portrayed so beautifully by u...

waiting for the next crushed paper to open up

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear
for the first time i liked ur work
don't b surprised
I pressed the like button for the first time 😆 ( as i didn't know i have to do that )
😃
so maan the writer also keeps his sole reader waiting for his works
i think this is the habit of all the wonderful writers 😃
loved maan and geet's brief eye lock and ur writing she felt naked before him
wow yaar
liked the way u showed the true colors of sameera and immediately she became miss kapoor for maan
and though geet thought she can receive all kinds of love except a lover'sove she still felt the love of a lover for the very first time
loved it so much ( though i am unable to express it properly )
and in the next update we will have UPDATE MEIN UPDATE
in ur update maan's next update 😃
and the last thing u must thank the little kid in ur neighbouhood
the kid helped u to complete ur phd in child behaviour 😆
ur description of children's activities are so real and so touching
and yes i totally agree if u can put a smile on someone's face it gives u immense happiness and contentment
this maan oh who will not be fida on him
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Hi dear

for the first time i liked ur work
don't b surprised
I pressed the like button for the first time 😆 ( as i didn't know i have to do that )
😃{There is no compulsion dear,if you don't want to press "LIKE" then don't press😆}
so maan the writer also keeps his sole reader waiting for his works
i think this is the habit of all the wonderful writers 😃
loved maan and geet's brief eye lock and ur writing she felt naked before him
wow yaar
liked the way u showed the true colors of sameera and immediately she became miss kapoor for maan{you are the first one to point out that...😊}
and though geet thought she can receive all kinds of love except a lover'sove she still felt the love of a lover for the very first time
loved it so much ( though i am unable to express it properly )
and in the next update we will have UPDATE MEIN UPDATE
in ur update maan's next update 😃
and the last thing u must thank the little kid in ur neighbouhood
the kid helped u to complete ur phd in child behaviour 😆
ur description of children's activities are so real and so touching
and yes i totally agree if u can put a smile on someone's face it gives u immense happiness and contentment
this maan oh who will not be fida on him

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5
awesome part...
so beautifully written...
now Maan's perspective would change about Sameera...
and Geet feel sorry for her just for her this feeling...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear i know there is no compulsion to press the like button but really i did not know that and i know that u know it very very well how much i LIKE ur work whether i pressed it or not
right dear

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