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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Choco pie, it was amazing but right now me in hurry and you very well know that i will comment at peace rather in hurry.

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pingu-tingu

@pingu-tingu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Yar your are awesome ! Seriously i love you for this update ! Yar how can you write so beautifully ! While reading your i felt something wet on my cheeks n than i realized i was crying ... I know its not that much emotional update even i am not so much sensitive but i think this update deserves my tears !

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

this is indeed a beautiful story..geet is always an angel...pls cont soon...

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#394

amazing update

god that sameera is really cheap

so not sita maa

maan is so sweet

n geet found her next crushed paper also

wondering what he wrote in it

update soon

waiting eagerly

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Such a beautiful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So geet does know' she has fallen for 'that' which cannot be hers...u described all the situation in one simple sentence...

Maan now may know the difference between inner beauty and outer beauty...the warmth that geet missed in the eyes of sameera is shown by her actions in the orphanage and maan could also sense the change in his view after her opinion on the orphanage situation...

Now waiting eagerly for the poem in the crushed paper along with geet...

Update soon...Waiting for it...

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

I am awed at the beauty of these characters you have created. There is a simplistic charm and heart tugging manner in Geet which has nothing to do with her outer beauty. Maan written by you is so perceptive and honest and kind. Sameera who has the veneer of goodness and yet cannot bring herself out to enjoy the joy of receiving love from a child makes me pity her. Totally look forward to reading your updates. Thanks for updating.

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Mansi Tripathi

@mansi.tripathi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Amazing...
Loved ur style of writing...
Geet falling for maan...

Maan feeling repulsive of sameera...
Waiting to see what maan has written this time...

continue soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

wow it is so amazing to read ur stories...

u knit ur stories very calmly and beautifully...

loved the update...

thanx for pm...

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#399

maan felt suffocation with sameera words geet fallen for maan maneet bond with children

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alfik

@alfik

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#400

That was a cliff hanger...i am as desperate as your Geet to know whats in the 'crushed paper' ok coming to the update its still not clear whether Geet's squint has gone or not...chocolate pastries yuuummm...

the way Sameera reacted to the little girl's offer i can only write that she is pretentious and there is no doubt in that...guess Maan got the little insight of Miss. Kapoor...

coming to Geet feel bad for her BUT since her accident she has been patient and never regretted her decision of choosing the child over her outer beauty so she will get the fruit too...'uparwale ke ghar mein der hai lekin andher nahi'...

just because Geet was enjoying with the kids he didn't want to disturb her and as a result he canceled his meeting...this shows how humble and kind he can get...may be he has understood the difference between inner beauty and outer beauty???i feel may be he knows that Geet reads his work and so that is why he leaves the 'crushed papers' behind???(its just my thought i might be wrong)

sorry to write this but more than the update i am desperate to read the next part of Maan's story...really hope that you will fulfill our wishes(update) soon...

and last but not the least please keep up the good work...you are a great writer...