SKYLIGHT LOVE (Part 7/Page 15/3rd Feb) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice updt...

waiting for next😊
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#32
wonderful update...

loved it...
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can you please give a long update?i start to read it & all of a sudden it's finished.it takes maybe 2 minutes to read the whole update.please i want long update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
loved it

why maneet separated ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
part 2
awesome part dear...
cont soon...

PS - plz edit ur title dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely story dear and welcome back 😊
i hope mk finds geet soon
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Nice update,
waiting for Geet's entry,
do continue soon dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...
waiting fr maneet to meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3



The skies were filled
with light clear and bright I looked at the land beneath from the small window of the airplane
The distance between the sky and earth reducing
As every single speck started to make sense the green grass the blue ocean
I looked excitedly this was the earth that was blessed to touch my Geet's feet
These were the roads that measured the length of her journey days and night
The roads where she might have walked alone'

Ohh love not anymore not anymore
The flight was almost about to land as the landing tyres screeched for the brake

I jumped out of my seat
The 3 hrs flight almost seemed to me like an eternity

And all I wanted to do now was meet the first breath of my life

My Geet my love '

Hope you had a nice flight Maan Karl asked and I just flashed him a smile

This could be the best flight of my life if I can just meet Geet
after it
All the best Maan go get her I heard Karl scream and I just smiled at the enthusiasm that seeped into my body just hearing those words'

Daryl I literally screamed
As I saw a tall dark guy around 50 stand at the gates of the airport
He smiled briefly nothing more and less than the professional one required

Hello sir
Hi Daryl'how is everything I asked
Everything is fine sir
Good did you get the information about Geet

Yes sir I did
Ok then don't wait Daryl take me to her

Yes sir
Daryl opened the opened the doors of the black and elegant Rolls Royce Phantom

I looked at Daryl's choice of car and smirked he knew me far well
I looked at the initials on the car number plate that neatly stated M.S.K the emblem of my ownership

I smiled and got down into the car hoping that Geet will take the similar pride in seeing my name etched with glory and grandeur

Its all for you geet I mumbled holding my heart that was beating frantically
Take me to my life Daryl
Take me to geet...
Next part coming up shortly...
stay tuned
Edited by ayushi.sinha - 12 years ago
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Part 4


The streets were little crowded and the traffic seemed to be the biggest enemy of my heart
While I struggled and rehearsed with my apologies that I have mumbled days and nights in my dreams Hoping that she will crush herself in my arms and forgive me for being so stupid and insane
We are there sir
Daryl spoke as he slowed the car down and parked it on the side
So finally I am here I mumbled and took a deep breath
Geet my love I whispered and gathered my strength
I looked at the bright day the sunshine bestowed upon as the sheet of loves warmth on the hearts of human
I looked at the nearby florist shop and decided to grab some flowers for my love
Can I get some yellow carnations I mumbled?
Yes sir there you go...
Thank u I said and grabbed them throwing some Euros towards him
I stopped in front of the house that was named
Casa de la luz (House of Light) beneath the name I saw finally carved Hebrew name of the same--??? ?? ???
Geet I mumbled as I traced the carvings on the wall
Remembering how she loved this language that was ancient she believed it to be the pure the complex structure of the alphabets
I took out my wallet and traced the words written there- {you are my forever Maan in Hebrew}
??? ????
????
These were the first she wrote when she learned the language
I looked at the paper now withered time
How I mocked at her on this silly attempt
I can still feel her tears in the merged alphabets
This was all she left when she leaved me forever too

I looked at the gates of the elegant house
And pushed them gently
Walking in hoping to meet my geet as soon as possible
Waiting to just melt in her arms
I will never hurt you again geet I promised
As I continued to walk towards her house

I looked at the doors of the house it was small but elegantly made of wood
That was my Geet's choice undoubtedly
But where is she ...
Are you here for the funeral senor?
I heard someone ask Funeral I mumbled back surprised and fear etched in my voice
Yes senor it is going on at the backyard
Geet I mumbled I want to meet Geet
Yes yes senora Geet he mumbled and sighed sadly
Ohh god no please I whispered
Don't don't don't hurt my Geet
I reached at backyard my palms sweaty and my feet weak
Was I too late I asked my heart'regretting every moment of my rudeness towards her
I looked ahead people in black cloths covered the whole ground
Few crying and praying for the rest of the soul
I walked ahead trying to see what was going on hoping on each step that it would not be my geet

In loving memory
of
Arjun singhannia
I read at the marble gravestone
Relief washed over me it was not Geet it was not geet
But then where was she And who is this Arjun
Singhannia
Maan I heard someone whisper
if dreams were true it was today that i believe it i said in my heart
Geet I mumbled I recognized the touch of her warm breath on my skin
I turned back to see her standing very close to me
Geet I whispered
I lived every moment of her sight and touched every corner of her skin through my eyes
She looked pale byt was dressed elegantly in black
I looked at her tear stricken face
Now you come
Now she screamed as she grabbed the collar of my shirt
Geet my love I
Don't Mr Khurrana
Why do you come now
When everything is lost why now Maan
Geet I whispered again and grabbed her hand
Why now Maan perhaps to mock on my misery is it
No No Geet
I looked at her face baffled
I knew she was in pain but this pain was not the one that I gave or perhaps it was but grown to be
much more worse than what I believed it would be
I felt Geet's hold loosen on my shirt I looked at her she was about to collapse on floor
Geet I screamed as I caught her in my arms
I looked at the people who were approaching us
Mrs Singhannia I heard someone call
And that was when my whole world
blacked out'..


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Edited by ayushi.sinha - 12 years ago

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