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Posted: 12 years ago
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The darkness has still not gone from the skies of the London city
I looked at the watch it clearly stated 3:30 A.M
Time to leave the house and get on a journey of finding her
I picked up my ticket and looked at it
Spain there is where she resides now
Geet I whisper and kiss my ticket which would take me to the place where she resides
I pick up my phone and quickly dial the numbers
Hello
Daryl...Maan here
Sir
I will be landing in spain today
I hope you did all the arrangements
Yes sir I did
Very well Daryl I will Text you my flight details then
Fine sir
And Daryl
Sir
I hope you found her too
Yes sir I have Miss Geet has been living here since last two years...her every
detail has been mailed to you an hour ago sir

Hmm thank you Daryl
Your welcome sir
See you in spain then
I will be waiting sir...
I kept down the phone and sighed in relief
Geet I am coming To win you back...
London Airport
4:15 A.M
Mr Khurana a british middle aged man call
Karl egen sir he said in his swift British tone
Hi call me Maan
He smiled ok Mr Maan I will be your pilot for today's flight
That's nice Karl I smiled When can we take off then
In 10 mins sir that is all it will take
10 mins Karl sounds like eternity to me
Haha he laughed you seem pretty restless Mr Maan seems you are going to meet someone
real precious...
I smiled back at Karl
Restless Karl add pain, patient and eternity of wait to it that is what I am feeling
right now
I understand sir he said as he touched the bands of his watch
Seems you are going to meet her after a long wait
8 years I mumbled
Hmm love he said and looked at me his fingers still tracing the bands of his watch
I looked at his eyes which held the same pain of missing someone
I looked back at his hand that had the watch

My wife gave it to me on our last anniversary that we celebrated together before
she died He said still tracing the straps of his watch
Ohhh I am sorry I mumbled suddenly feeling his grief
Don't be sir he said I lived a blissful life with her
I smiled hoping for a start of blissful life with Geet too
The plane is ready MR Maan shall we proceed
Yes Karl we should
I stepped into the plane
That was elegantly designed I looked at its every corner it was exquisite
I was proud of my choice this new fly bird was the new addition to my gadgets
I looked at the initials of the name carved on the doors of the wall
M.K
Hmm I own the world that has everything but not you, the one who makes me breathe, the one who made me own the power and possess the success
I own a world that has everything that makes me realise what is life without you
Geet I whispered as I felt the engines of the plane roaring to life
Today is the day I will finally breathe with the sight of your face my love
My heart will be alive
Geet...
I mumble again as the wings of the plane embraced the sky
I looked at the reddish sky who was still trying to hide its beloved sun
I am coming Love I mumbled as I saw the skies filling with the rays of warmth
Their is the update thank u for showering me with the comments
OOps Gotta Run 😉I am Still Writing
Thought Will Gv u one part atleast
Hmm but need descent amount of likes and comments no kanjoosi
Adios
Edited by miki14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Awesome update
loved it
maan off to spain to get geet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Superb update..
Maan's longingness was very well written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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In short nyc update but a short one though 😉
Waiting for Maam to meet Geet 😛
Next one soon 😉

Naureen 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan is on the way to win back his love Geet...

but if he loved her so much then why he let her go in first place...

why negative forces had so much power that in front of them love surrendered...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the start of the story...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hope to see geet also longing for maan the same way as he feels.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
hope geet maan ko mil jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So maan is all set to go...

Waitng to knw wat happnd btween them.

Conti soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
short n sweet update
he's so eager to meet her...gud luck maan... hope soon u'll get ur luv
waiting fr their frst meet... aftr lyk eternity (according to maan😉 )

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