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-Devil's Den-

-Part 12-

(c) Dazzling Divz Creations 2012-2012. All rights reserved.

It has been an hour they were here, over this beach for relaxing, hello! If you not forgetting it is their honeymoon and how can our sexy devil let a golden chance of romancing with his gorgeous wife roaming and showing her around the city of passion. But then the main reason was something else, to divert her mind, to make her come in certain terms with him and he knew the better is to face then running away. So here they were at Barceloneta Beach one of the most perfect designation for visitors of Barcelona, and the beach freaks, so the visit here at this place was indispensible. One of the dirtiest places, yet the pleasure of this area are something worth it. Vast stretches of sand with the shinny sun, shining bright over the heads giving a sparkling glitter to the high waves was a cherry on top. The loud music of drums with the dancing artistes on one or the other corner of beach was as entertaining as the beach games here. Drinks and the seafood arteries around the coast add the temptation of this place. So here were the two newly married people sitting in a crowd of thousands of unknown faces, with girls perfectly showing off their assets while boys gaining much of attention in their tanned bodies.

But Maan was one of those over occupied person who can never get peace or give a second glance to those over exposed bikini babes, giving flirty sexy looks drooling over his perfect abs displayed perfectly for their eyes to feast their lusty hungry eyes. But he gave a damn, drowned in his laptop he sat comfortably over his beach chair folding his legs laying half in a sitting posture keeping his laptop over his stomach, stuck between his torso and thighs, with a relaxing expression, totally forgetting about Geet, who has been missing since a time now, but the one oblivious to the vacancy in his side was lost in his own world. It was not something like he dint tried to accompany her, or add flavor to their time, but she was simply adamant since a time now and it was getting over his nerves, and finally took toll when she finally screamed over him in an evident shriek making the spectators look at them weirdly, it was then he finally decided to back off all attempts to have some fun time with her, planning to get a perfect pay back after giving her space and himself time to calm his over flowing temper down, he got himself busy back in his work getting his laptop out.

He had lost his count of time, even forgotten where and why he was, when some unwanted noises hit his eardrums disturbing his peaceful time, relaxing in his own way, doing his work over his laptop checking his mails, he shrugged off thinking, the mad people will calm down in a while or two , these poor craps have this weird habit to get hyper over silly matters, as if he care as far as his work dint got disturbed, but the screams got louder in a few seconds and annoyed of the irritating loud voices he pulled his head a little over his shoulders, turning a little with a slight effort carelessly in a casual way and looked at the direction fallowing the gaze of others. The crowd was telling the panic running between them, something sure was happening there, he smirked looking at the silly people getting hyper, shaking his head he was about to move his head again back to the screen he was working over since long now, when something caught his eyes, he turned in a brisk moment again towards the direction, the mounting exasperation tightened his throat chocking his breath with anguish, sitting in a proper position now, his hands clutched the arm rest of this beach chair in anger cursing his veins, toes curled holding the sand in them tight telling the rage building inside him, his eyes turned red with the fire of a burning volcano ready to burst any moment, raising his eyebrows high, he tried not to react as hot searing rage throbbed painfully at his temples, but the sight in front of him was enough to unleash the beast inside him, flexing his arms tight controlling an urge to take the damn wits out of those lusty eyes gazing over his possession he looked at the herd of people, men ogling with their watering tongues out, while those sexy bi****s having a burnings sensation inside them. Flexing his each tensed muscle his grip turned hard turning his harsh knuckles white, a gush of some unknown feeling surged in his entire body, Jealousy, was this jealousy, but it can't be, why shall he feel jealous, but something burnt in him, something he dint knew, something he thought does not exist in his life, something unknown to his being, heart!! Was it his heart which burnt, why, he was not suppose to have one, he is a devil and devils are devoid of hearts, aren't they, then why he felt so...

Hell with thinking, it was not the time to do that, the scene in front of his eyes was intolerable and the beast inside him had broken it's ridges getting out of the cage he was shutting him since long now, as he felt ht under the collar.

Geet came out of the shinning salty water with a jerk after a brisk swimming, moving his br***t and bu*****s in a seductive way, making the heart of all the dirty gazers lump in their mouth, drenched head to toe in that salty water adding more flavor to her already sexy body, giving a scintillating scene entertaining the hot flashes. The golden bikini cringed more to her prominent curves giving a feast to the spectators. Coming out of the water in a sexy walk carelessly yet elegantly keeping her feet hard over the soft sand she smirked knowing well the most desirable eyes of her devil was on her seething in rage, but she care less she have to make him learn a hard lesson for forcing her into all this, she shook her head jerking of the water droplets from her thick hairs, before tracing her fingers sensually in her hairs back. She moved her fingers down, tracing every curve sensuously with her own hands, making the mouth of spectators go dry with desire lingering over their tongues to see such a desirable mouth watering site in front of their naked eyes. She took her towel from side patting her face slowly, drying off the excess water away. For a second she looked at him, telling him, asking him, how was the pay back! And then moved her gaze away with a winning smile plastered over her face, and her heart jumping in rhythm to get a win over him, she looked back to her towel before throwing it far, in the jumping crowd. She ignored them all, knowing well she why she was doing so she need not pay any head to those filthy dogs. She took her sunscreen from side taking the little bit of the semi-liquid over her hands she rubbed them over her arms, to her elbow, seductively with a move of a sexy seducing witch, she took so more from the bottle, bending down a little she looked around at the madness in those eyes falling over her each and every revealed contour and curve with a lust oozing out their eyes, she knew those filthy butchers could have taken her pieces in their hunger, but she knew one thing more, clear, none out of these bloody blood suckers have those damn guts to face the devil who possessed her, which gave her a little strength of being safe even in such a vulnerable situation she knew nothing could touch her apart his will. And she knew she won't let him win over her, so that he have the right to touch her, she smirked inwardly thinking his power is the biggest strength to make him lose in front of her, and so she continued, applying with a slow smooth hand the milky cream on her supple skin of her legs, stalking up higher till her lower thighs, repeating the same with same seducing manner over her another slender sleek leg, from toe to thigh, with a mischievous eyes lingering over the dark orbs, which ready to take the worst step, she got the idea looking in those freaked of eyes the maddened rage running in his each neuron, and now finally it can be a call back to her plan, she was done with her payback, he lost it! And she won it! Or that was what she thought so. She winked once again at the crazy crowd and then bent to take her belongs, wearing the net short jacket of hers over her bikini when she felt a sudden grip on her arm and the next moment she knew she have been pulled and her lips were melting inside a demanding aggressive kiss, she need not know who was the owner she knew it can be only one, her devil.

And yes it was him, the unleashed devil in the worst state possible, jealousy, anger, desire, anguish cursed in his each ounce of his body, he felt adrenaline pumping inside him as he pulled her more closer to him holding her waist tight in his large palm, sucking her hard and harsh he tugged her lips devouring inside her, she was numb still trying to make it out what has exactly happened, the beast inside him was on rampage, and he dint knew how to stop the throbbing pain inside him but definitely he couldn't let go those ba*****s away with an ease after the feast, who dare give a second glance over his possession, he need to show them where she belong, who own her, it was sudden reflex of his sub conscious anger filled brain when he saw her moving away quietly with a winning smile for make him lose, he stood up with nothing just an aim in his mind to claim her in front of those bloody ***** who dare give a lusty eye on her, to tell them it is and will be only his right, dare do the sin again or else the damn earth you standing upon will be torn engulfing your last cell in it, he filled her in his arms more tightly as the thought of those lusty gazes felt alive in his memory injecting the venomous rage of desire again in him, and that was when she regained her lost senses coming back to the realty she looked at his anger rimmed red eyes looking at her with sheer disgust and somewhere hurt, she felt timid of her in front of his untamed self, holding his shoulder tight in her grip she tried remain steady as his harsh passion was making her each sense dizzy, making her loose her control, unable to stand still, but the disgust in his eyes for her pricked her heart, feeling low of her, her act came afresh in her mind when she realized how low she stooped just to make him realize his wrong doing she broke all her bounds committing a sin, but tears of guilt have frozen to flow, lowering her eyes she accepted her defeat making him calm a bit, when a stiffed muff dissolved with his breath he left her mouth in a sudden abrupt moment, throwing daggers her way in frustration, her head hung low in shame when he pulled her dress covering her fully, he turned around snaking his arm around her waist he looked back to her who was looking at him uncertain what and how to feel anything now! Breaking the contact he looked back to the crowed still looking at them dumbfounded when a single trail of his eye was evident warning to all to move away, without a second look everyone turned taking away their eyes, swearing not to look back when he hurried her off to the car gripping hard, turning her supple skin red with his grasp.

Precap: I Killed Him!

Divzi thinks wapis se Him...grr gusse aaying on this Him 😛


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Will update again soon!

Waiting for your lovely lovely feedback!

Till then

❤️ Divzi Signing Off!

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago
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superb update

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