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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

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double post galti se...lol😆
nichey comment hain😉

Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

*breathe ashy breathe*
am literally breathless diii...
*taking a deep breath i...n leave it out.."
aftr this update me tho full

but on a serious note...i just loved this update like anything!!!
usually i don't comment boldly..but this update just broke that in me!!!
i think this is the 1st time am ever reading such kind of romance in geet forum..but honestly am in love with it...and i could actually feel the passion!!!!
and aapka tho pata nahi..but i say unmarried girls shouldn't read this update!!!☺️
my own thoughts are getting very naughty...
and that phone sliding scene...it gave me goosebumps...u r such a gifted writer di..
u can write everything..drama to action to romance,...just beautifully written!!!!!
am still not out of its effect...
and i played tht song on my system coz youtube was not working but that feel...i just cant tell u what i felt!!!! it was hot..passionate and sexyyy...
precap sounds all the more interesting di
continue super soon!
and hows rhia now? what hapnd again? me worried abt her

(aaj anu di mera comment padhegi tho maar dalegi hehehe)😆

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Haila... First let me slow down my breaths...

and Let me calm down my heart.. Its beating too fast...😳

I never knew ye song aap is tarah potray karegi...

I mean it was way beyond my imagination...

Firstly.. Thank u for Dedicating it to me...

And Hayeee update ka kya kahu mein...

I still can't get enough of it u knw...😉

" Aaj tere aagosh me khona chahte hai

Tujh me puri tarah se khona chahte hai...

Dur hai fir bhi aaj ek hone ki pyaas hai

Pyaar ko aise mehsus karne bhi khaas hai...

Ye jo aag bin chuye tum laga rahe ho

Sholo si is dil main tum jala rahe ho... "

Hayeee agar dur rehke itna pyaar hai(Hot and passionate...)

To socho socho jab paas aayenge to aag lag jaani hai...

It was superb update di...

Luv ya... Hugsss

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

OMG hot passionate update dear..maan is romancing geet in phone...😳

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

wow lovely lovely update.. te way my maaneet missing eachother was so lovely.. but ritzy u real devil bechare my maan burning in desire ur adding more fire, better make my maan to cum fast and claim his geet.. i love te update so much, me too craving my maaneet ka passion in real

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ETRIKA

@etrika

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

it was a smoking hot .romantic and passionate update and above all a mobile romantic naa aaj tak kabhi padha aur na hi ssocha .mobile par bhi koi itna passionate ho sakta hai par jab maaneet ho to kuch bhi ho sakta hai.

hayeee me thinking jab phone par hai to itna hot ek saath honge to kya hoga.

di apne next ff ka eh glimpse to do.

hope ur daughter is fine. Take care of here.

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

God!!!!

Kya imagination hai...

Kya idea hai...

Girls to save dis part n make ur hubby's read it.
*wink*wink*

arre kuch toh fayda uthaao...lolz!

Hatsoff dear fr such idea n apt song...

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Hot hotter n hottest...passionate updt

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

OMG!! That ws Fantastic update

Loved very much

Smoking hot😳..me still blushing☺️

Maaneet feeling were Amazinglywritten Di👏

can't wait for next update

continue super soon

thankx for pm

😊

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

Sorry for late commenting ,was out of station and hope rhea is doing fyn now .

Thank u very very much for acknowledging my thoughts and i was touched and had tears in my eyes by seeing your gesture . It really means a lot to me and appreciate ur humbleness to acknowledge readers pov .👏

cuming to last update,bikerace was enjoyable .so,they r enjoying each andevery moments of der life and loved the dialogue by maan shabdon ka izhaar bhi zaroori hota hai . loved the update .

cuming to present update , may b ur starting note is for me 😆,not very comfortable with scnes so read randomly but reading d comments of readers and and seeing forum is in aag 😉loved telly me commnts ,sahi mein bacchiyon kya hoga ritzy abhi to shuruwat hai 😆and aishu commnts ,chalo koi baat nahi its ur age to enjoy all this so bindaas enjoy ,momzy gussa nahi hogi 😊

And Ritzz sahi mein bahut naughty ideas aate hai aapko ,hope u enjoyed it .loved ur comments too .

great going ritzy

Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago