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heermeher

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

more than maan you are tadpofying us

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

congrats on the new thread de 😊

awesome update 😉

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sanu3108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

aik dam mast update thaa ... wah wah ...

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

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tamannA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

love it the way maan removing her little insecurities

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

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finally read it...ahhh it was breathtaking di..and me actually stopped breathing for a moment...their need for each other is intensifying with each passing day..and that emotional bond building up...
ahh i just love it like anything..and yes again i loved their being frank with their needs for each other!!!!
i love this chemistry of maaneet in this ff...beautifully written!!!!

ohh teri...phir se no precap...and y did u stop at the wrong time di???🤢
aarrrghhh now me will break my head over the upcuming twist till u dun update..!!!
dii aaj ek aur update nahi mil sakta kya????
aaannn...pleeej...😳

but must say... i had goosebumps reading this update...sweet...emotional..yet sensuous...!!!!
continue super duper soon..warna maan ke badle mein pagal ho jaungi!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago

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jenny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

That was a lovely update to dear..

Starting from the poem!! Superb!!! No extravaganza words being used.It was just an simple poem about Maan's journey from beginning till now. Kudos to the writer!!!

Coming to the update, glad Maan and Rahul had bonded really well. Loved the way Maan answered Geet. Its guys' talk.

Cutie Geet cried.. Why.. I think she was so much disturbed with what happened in the morning and scared Maan wouldn't take initiate to get close with her again, so when Maan asked her permission she couldn't take it and poured it out.

Their romance part was beautiful, it was Slow and steady.. Loved the way Maan washed away Geet's insecurity. His single kiss is enough.

Oh Ritzy, since when you became the vili@devil!!! 😡 Why are you torturing Maan!! Wonder what and how you planning to twist the story.

PS: I can't stop myself from asking, when is the next update.😆