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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
maan har din apne feelings ko openly share kar raha hain and geet getting shy
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Hayee.. Firstly me jumping.. woohoo...


First to comment... Waiting ka kuch to fayda hua.. Hehe😆

Now coming to update... Har subha aise nahi ho sakti kya...
Hosakti hai Na...U need to just get a guy like that😉

Hayeee... Me all... ☺️

It was superb update di... I never kNew ye vivah ka maan aisa bhi ho sakta hai...

Sachi I mean from starting he is so mature and serious type ka.. less talk...
Geet ne badal dala...pura ki pura..naya jaisa

But now kaun kahega ye wahi maan hai.. Hehe.. Besharm hai sachi muchi...

lolz di aapne kya kiya maan ko... Pura naughty naughty bana diya hai..

But I m sooo loving it... sooo very much.. Its cute & ☺️☺️

And then boyz out plan me Rahul also.. Sachi antic piece hai ye maan...


And Thank u ka punishment jaldi jaldi likho update...

Waiting for it to come true.. Hehe... Me also have became naughty.. u knw na..😉

It was mindblowing update...

It would sound stupid 😆 but can we get one more update...
Naughty Ritu...next update Thursday ko...pakka

Dnt trhow jutis.. I knw we will not get.. but puchne me kya jata hai.. 😉

lolzz... Meine bahaut kuch bol diya na aaj.. Hehe...

Waiting for Next.. Continue soon...

Luv ya... Hugsss

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... you updated... 😃

and that was an awesome blossom one...

I completely loved the shirt wala part... They both were just awesome... The despo maan is absolutely a treat to read and Geet enjoying all of it that she missed... He has become completely besharam and more than that he is accepting openly whenever he gets a chance...

Ab tho he has told his fantasy to her... cant wait for the next update... Geet in office?? thats gonna be interesting...

continue soon... and thanks a lot for updating today
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry dear...

last update missed to comment... you know my weekend are packed with family so bas update per liya tha...

wow wow wow... meri chehre ke smile to rukee hee nahi rahee hai...last two updates me kya jadoo chalaya hai... OMG OMG OMG... ritzy... this was one of the most beautiful/romantic update...

Maan besharam... per bechara kya kare... itnee bandishen hai to besharmee se hee kaam chala raha hai...

but i love this besharam Maan who makes Geet sharam se pani pani...

Today i felt... bas parte jaoo parte jaoo... Hai MSKI and uskee Fantasy... kaise sambhale ge Geet apne chote se nazuk dil ko is Maan se...

ohhh Ritzy... this was super yaar... lovely beautiful update... sabd he kam per rahe hain... smile ruke tab na

😳😳 update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Sorry for not commenting for earlier part..(no net)
Loved both the parts a lot...
Maan s becumg besharam these days... and i m loving ds naughty maan..
when geet shared abt her menstrual cycle I never thot maan vl look at the point where she vl have a blood loss pblm..
NW maan has the fantasy to her in his shirt ONLY... haye..
dont worry maan..geet vl fulfill it.. nahi toh ritzy di hain na...😉
it vl b gud to c a scene where maan and rahul together leg pulling geet..

Thanks dear...
Got a family leg pulling scene...but u need to wait just a little bit
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gudmeet

wow loving this loafer maan so much

and loving maan and geet's closeness in all the senses.
i really admire u that even in such romatic updates u remember including family .
loved it when maan included geet's bro in his plans
and loved it also when maan said he is geet's exclusively
very nice update dear
will wait for geet's punishment and reward for us 😉

Thanks Dear...
Yes I just can't take family out of the equation 😉...i am sure some of you would hate me for this...
Geet's punishment - well let's see... it is going to be different
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Posted: 12 years ago

Kya Doll Ka asar aap pe bhi pad gaya... ???
Uski tarah aap bhi bol rahe ho need to get a guy..
Dnt wry agle saal tak parents dhund lenge.. Hehe..
and hayeee thursday... Me waiting...
Muuahzzz... Luv ya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchshah

Hot hot update...☺️

Shirt fantasy...bring it on!👏 nice to see Rahul-Maan- Dev bonding... waiting for Geet's visit to office...i remember that site visit n encounter with Shasha😃😆..lets see what Geet does! Thanks for the PM!

LOL, you remember that. I had so much fun writing that sequence...
baap re ab yeh fantasy pata nahi...I am scared seeing everyone's expectation...well i am thinking something different so let's see how it comes out...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu


Kya Doll Ka asar aap pe bhi pad gaya... ???
Uski tarah aap bhi bol rahe ho need to get a guy..
Dnt wry agle saal tak parents dhund lenge.. Hehe..
and hayeee thursday... Me waiting...
Muuahzzz... Luv ya...


ha ha ha ritzz kamini..shaitaan ka naam liya..aur shaitaan haazir hehehehe
u idiot...job ka kya hua tera????
and aaj kal itne poems... kya baat h bhai...someone really in a very poetic mood...😉😉
ritzz...tu kinni badli badli nazar aa rhi h aaj kal..hmmm😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

to say loved the part will surely be an under statement... just imagine i read it 2 times before commenting and after this i am going to read once again...

the morning hubby wifey session was just mind blowing... even i was blushing when maan asked geet "dress me up"... sach much how was this maan in the initial days aur ab dekho kya ho gaya hai... just like geet was saying he is now sachmuch become a loafer, badmash, besharam...but to tell u truly, am just loving this waala maan... 😉

am now looking forward for geets punishment... now dont tell me am besharam ... kya karoo... maaneet ne aise bana diya yaar...

i also liked how maan included rahul in his plans...

just wanted to tell u one thing... plss cant u extend this awesome, fantastic, mind blowing, out of the world, the best ff a lil more... plzzz am trying to make the best face i can...

continue soon

Thank you Thank you so much...I was so looking forward to your comment...
Yes Maan has changed a lot nahi...
Geet's punishment...frankly speaking I had thought of leaving it initally as reader's fantasy as well...but now I have written something...let's see how it comes out because it is ...ummm...different
As to your request for extending...well I don't know. I feel I have told a story and if I extend it anymore it will become just a series of sweet cute OS...
Let me think but my mind is now partially taken up by my new FF as well...planning to post Introduction next week...

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