ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 56

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Posted: 12 years ago


ye kya ho gya maan ko????????
y he is doing this????
lolzzz geet.. hayeee...😭
lolzzz maan kha gayab ho gea????

di u like my cmnts kya?????????
i alwz give with lots of love..

Edited by simrancuty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was superb👏.loved it.wondering wht myt hv happend to maan😲?
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT WAS WRONG WITH MAAN
IT LOOKED AS THOUGH HE COULDNT WAIT FOR HER ANY LONGER
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 32
nice part...
what the heck is wrong with Maan?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
wht happened to Maan suddenly.. precap is scary.. update soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago


Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊


Part 33



Phone fell down from her hand. "Where is he!!!'' she asked to infinity. "Kahi mere behavior ke wajah se ' '' .. '' no no Babaji..!!'' ..she became restless. Throwing blanket from over her she stood up and run to door.. she touched her neck "mera Dupatta!!'' she came back and found her Dupatta.. keeping it on place she run to door again.. "Babaji wwo kaha honge!'' she had went mad.. she run on corridor. Her feet felt cold.. she searched here there.. "My shoes !!'' she searched it, wore .. again rushed to main door. She opened it, came out. "Why its dark here??'' she looked around. "oh! Its night still..'' she self talked in no sense. "Auto... I need auto !!! ' '' she searched for it, found none in dark. "What I do now??.. Haan mai Pinky ko call karti hu.. '' she searched her hand.. "Where is my phone!!'' ' she searched on road. "no.. I left in room I think!!'' she runs inside.. to her room and took out phone, in single breath. She run to door again when her phone rung...



"Helloo.. Maan!!'' she spoke impatiently.



"No Geet.. its Adi''



"Adi sir did you find Maan?''



"Geet you dont worry.. I have contacted our detectives to find him''



"Detectives!!'' her heart started sinking in anticipation.. "per kyu.. ho sakta hai he -he has gone for any meeting!!''



"No Geet.. '' hearing his tone Geet guessed, something was wrong..



" Maan ki Dadima ka call aaya tha.. wo yesterday it was his parents death anniversary aur iis din har saal Maan baichain ho jaate hai. Yesterday he had called Dadi and was saying no one loves him. No one care for him. He was crying saying feeling so alone. He was sounding so depressed like he had done some sin.. he again and again was saying for apologizing to someone. Dont know what had happened to him. Dadi was saying she never had seen him so dejected before..Dadima is scared he might can do something to him in this bitter condition.'' Adi said everything in one breath.. " Geet.. can I ask something.. ''



Geet who was listening everything with storming emotions, knew, what Adi wanted to ask.. "Hmm!'' she spoke with sealed lips..



"had anything happened between you and Maan.. yesterday?''



Geet started crying bitterly. She covered her mouth in Dupatta not to do any sound that anyone could hear her pain. Sensing her silent cry Adi guessed and thought to be quite as it was their personal matter, better not to do interfere between them.



"Its okay Geet.. you don't worry.. he will be fine'' and he cut the call. Geet could not stop her cry and it came out snatching her soul out from her fragile inward. She broke down , falling on floor, leaving her sense behind..



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It had been one more day when Maan could not be find. There was no clue where he had vanished. Everyone was more than worried for him. Media was hell bent on publishing his news but from khuranas it was strict order not to give any news about him. Adi with the police, was running everywhere to look for him. And in this all, Geet.. who had locked herself in her room. She dint want to come out, see anything, know anything.. She just wanted to pray for him, want to be fulfilled her only wish from her Babaji which, she was chanting since the time she had got her conscious back. The wish for her Maan safety, the wish that could lessen her guilt which she was feeling intensely. She was thinking she was the only reason of all this.. for all Maan devastation. She wanted to held Dadi feet and ask for her apologies. She wanted to die if it would make her Maan better and alright. She would do anything for him.. she should have done before when Maan had needed her. "Why I dint listen him!! Why I dint give him time to open up before me!! Why I reacted so differently when I know I am only him!!! why why why babaji...!!!!! '' ' "Why I dint like his touching me when he is the only who have every right over me!!! why babaji.. !!! '' she had become insane that everything was seeming it was her fault only and thus it was exceptionally painful, unbearable for her...



She dint know when Pinky came and consoled her. She dint know what Pinky had told to bauji.. she had no idea she had gulped any single drop of water or not. She dint know anything.. she knew only that her Maan was missing from two days and she would not live in peace until see, his smiling face, back..



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Third day,



"Geet.. Maan sir ka pata chal gaya.. he is in his house'' a excited male voice shouted on phone..



Geet dint give matter to think who he was. Within minutes she reached.. to him, to Maan . In rush she opened door and runs to his bedroom.. she was not taking any breath in. all breaths were waiting for their turns to go inside and give her aliveness which she had forgotten somewhere in happiness and enthusiasm.



She saw Maan. He was laying on bed with eyes closed, seemed was sleeping peacefully. And this was the moment, Geet finally opened the door of her heart, to invite breaths inside.. to make her live again. With heavy steps she headed to him. Sat beside, very near to his sleeping frame. She knew she might was looking horrible with tears trailed face and untied hairs but was it mattered at those moment!! .. No way.. Not at all. The all mattered was Maan was before her and she was seeing him breathing calmly.



She with a smile between tears cupped his face "Maan'' softly called him. He responded something, very slow that she couldn't hear. She nears her ear to his lips.. "I'm sorry Geet.. ! '' her beats paused. Her eyes releases fresh tears. "I'm sorry Geet ..'' Maan was chanting continuously..



"Maan.. '' she caressed his face lovingly, tried to make him come in sense. "Maan what happened to you.. '' She patted his cheek, kissed his head.. caressed his hair.. "Maan hosh me aaiye.. what happened you '' .. "Maan..!! ''



Geet could not make him awake. She didnt want to leave him in this condition, after finding him days like ages. She rested back beside him, took his head in her lap. Soothed him, consoled his burning heart and head.. when she too slept, no one knew..



Precap : "Where is Geet!!!!! '' Mohindar asked to Adi in anger


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Hope You All Liking This ----

Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely emotional update,,.. te way geet searching my maan and was numb missing my was so lovely .. te way she thinking and chanting , and te way my maan was in pain oh god, lovely scene.. te way geet seeing my maan and maan saying sorry very very emotional scene..i love te update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. The pain and the longing Geet felt was beautifully written. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting so it was because of his parents death anniversary he was behaving this way ehh
why didnt he just tell her of this
and whats gonna happen now
her father wont be happy when he finds out about maneet right
but when is the story gonna come in the present time
uff so much confusion and complication in their story naa
where is geet now i wonder

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