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Posted: 12 years ago
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NO UPDATE
MAY BE I WILL DISCONTINUED IT

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
no please finish it but don't discontinue



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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome os dear..
loved it a lot.
hate that ayesha so cheap...
because of that drugs maan went into coma and geet left the house... she is preggy... wow...
she met armaan...
geet came to know about maan and is shocked and maan is recovering after her talk...
and now maan lost 2 months... but is shocked to listen what he did...
now what armaan told to geet... interesting dear...
continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
pls update yaar..at least finished the story ...pls pls...😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
THANKS GUYS FOR ALL THE LIKES ND COMMENTS...
IT REALLY MOTIVATE ME
LOV U ALL

PART 5
After listening to armaan geet is shocked...she never believe that ayesha will do such a thing...she ws thinking of dat day
FLASHBACK
one day maaneet were coming back from a party..nd maan ws driving the car,..when dey reached to the hioghway a truck suddenly collided wid deir car from the back...leaving
maaneet uncounsicous. Afetr some time maan wakes up nd sees geet lying in a pool of blood...as dey were late nd on the highway...no cars were present at dat time...so maan
took geet to the near by hospital...docs told dat geet is very serious...nd dere is too loss of blood...he arranged the blood going to various bloodbanks..nd save his love of life..
FLASHBACK ENDS
armaan shakes geet to bring her back from her thinking...den armaan tells ayesha plan dat she planned to kill geet first...den marrying maan nd takes all the property...nd will make the life of maan nd his parents hell...as maan mom slapped ayesha...as she insulted geet
but maan loves bring back geet...
Geet started crying nd armaan hugs her...nd outside maan is listening to all dis...nd one side angry becuase of ayesha...nd jealousy as geet is hugging armaan...bt he knows dere must be strong friendship between geet nd armaan.
first he want to look into ayesha matter...
After one week..maan is still trying to talk wid geet...bt she is not ...nd try to avoid maan..nd maan becomes furious..nd stops her...nd becomes angry nd suddenly geet started feeling dizzy nd she fainted...at dat no one is present at home..so he picks up geet...while picking her he notice dat geet is little bit heavy,...
nd he notices her baby bump as she ws wearing loosse suits..
nd maan becomes happy dat he is becoming father nd calls doc..nd doc after checking geet told dat her bp gets increased dats y she fainted..just take care of her nd gives her more friuts nd liquids...

Armaan enters in the house nd sees maan is crying holding geet pics..nd he goes to maan nd asks whts the matter nd den he told dat geet is not talking to him...whts his mistake..nd geet is preg nd she even dont told me...being a father i have a rite to know abt dis...nd says how much he tries to talk to geet but she is avoiding him...
he wants to die after seeing geet behaviour..nd says why he come back from coma...nd suddenly he get a high blow on his face...as geet slapped him nd says after insulting me soo much u think i will forgive u...nd says if u dies wht will happen to our child nd shakes him saying u r bad very bad...nd hugs him by saying I LOVE YOU...nd said
v cant live widout you...
Maan nd armaan becomes very happy listening to dis..nd armaan even hugs geet but maan one glare is enough to make him to step back...armaan knows dat maan is jealous because of his nd geet bonding...
nd he always makes him to feel j by hugging geet in the presence of maan...
Maan,geet nd armaan talks abt ayesha..nd dey said its high time for her...dat she suffers now...nd armaan friend informs him dat ayesha takes drugs nd her illigal activites
wht extra all 3 want...
dey make a plan for ayesha...
After one week...maan goes to ayesha house nd says dat he is sorry for his behaviour towards her...nd by doing lovely talks..ayesha is full on lato over maan talks.,,
Maan says ayesha to arrange a party so dat he can say sorry to her of his behaviour infront of everyone..nd ayesha wants publicity nd she is ready...
Party begins geet enters wid armaan...ayesha impress wid the looks of armaan nd becomes jealous as all hot boys r wid geet first maan nd den armaan...
Maan offers drink to ayesha nd dance wid her..nd on the otherside geet becomes angrey..as dance is not in the paln..nd starts dancing wid armaan as armaan told geet dat maan is jealous of him nd geet friendship
sooo she makes maan j...armaan thinking wht both r doing dey r making each other jealous...
On the other side police enters the farmhouse nd arrests all the members of ayesha group as dey were nejoying in the garden area of farmhouse...nd collects all the evidence against ayesha from her friends..
ploice enters the hall of the farmhouse nd arrested ayesha nd thanks maan nd armaan for deir support...nd geet hugs maan nd ayesha becomes furious nd tries to slap
geet..bt maan comes inbetween nd slaps her...nd even geet slapped her for making deir life hell...
police takes out ayesha from the farmhouse nd ayesha chapters end dere
armaan wid maaneet cumes back to the house nd gives the good news to deir parentes abt ayesha
all becomes happy...
nd dey slept having an enjoyable night...
next day armaan decides to go back to london...
geet becomes sad because of dis...nd armaan promised dat he will come back to INDIA..as maan nd armaan to becomes friend..nd maan offers armaan partnership to start
new company..
Geet becomes happy nd...nd kissed rk...
THEY LIVE HAPPY FOREVER ND TOGTHER
END

guys i m very unhappy wid the response...
soo i m not giving u an epilogue..i ws thinking of writing...
but now i will not..it really disappoint me
sorry for the spelling mistake
tamanna1391 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
ayesh 2 slap kam the but finally happy ending



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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
too gud goved d update so finally maaneet lived happily everafter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome update
we want epi dear 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@uteem: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
JUST FOUND IT AND READ IT IN ONE GO
THE STORY WAS VERY NICE THOUGH YOU SHOULD IMPROVE WRITING METHOD

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