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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys..its my first OS on maaneet
hope u like it
This OS will contain 3 or more parts it depends upon u guys
Still image of Maan and Geet from show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
PART 1
Maan is married to his long time girlfriend geet...thery know each other from the last 3 years...maan met geet in the acting school...Maan belongs to very high society whereas geetlives in girls hostel..as her parents died 2 years ago nd she is alone nd she needs money to get an admission into acting school...so she sold her house...
Dreams of maan nd geet are same both want to become superstar...when geet met maan she knows maan is very high tempered...full of attitude nd whereas for maan geet is bubbly hot nd sexy girl...Everyday there will be fight between dem as maan used to do stupid things to irritate her...nd never let her to concentrate on her work...whereas due to this all girls started feeling jealous of geet nd always taunt her of being orphan..nd says she wants only money...nthg else...bt she has one close friend NANDANI...nd always stay wid geet..nd help her...she is good friend of geet...
Its daily routine of maan to irritate her nd slowly slowly he started liking geet...nd day by day his likeness started turning into LOVE.
He always tried to make conversation wid geet nd she used to ignore it...on the other side geet also loves him as he is the only one..who doesnt make joke of her being orphan...nd always tries to make her laugh by doing stupid things...but his status comes in between as dere is a huge difference between dem nd dere is not even 1% comparsion between dem.

Its been 6 months in acting school(course is of 16 months).
After 6 months maan propsed geet nd geet refused his proposal..nd maan asks her the reason for her refusal...she said dat she is engaged...nd maan left heart broken...whereas geet also feeling heart broken..

Its been 1 month of the propsal...maan stopped talking to geet..nd all the girls still taunt dat geet true face maan comes to know...only Nandini knows how geet is feeling...as she knws dat maan propsed her...bt geet doesnt know abt dis...There is no single talk between dem...maan completely ignored her...
On the otherside geet health is not keeping good...as she is not eating properly from the last 1 month...as she broke maan heart nd maan changed behaviour...During the practise maan is noticing geet pale face...nd even noticing she is not able to walk...nd he asked nandini to take her to green room..nd make her rest,,,,nd he will bring sometime for her to eat...nandini decided its high time dat both solve dere problem...
Nandini knows maan will be coming to green room soon,so she asked geet abt maan...then she said dat maan propsed her last month nd she refused nd she even told him dat she is already enagged...nd both r heart broken...nd nandini asked the reason for dis...den geet told...that dere is huge difference between dem...nd no comparsion nd suddenly geet fainted nd maan hold her at correct time...
Now maan comes to know how much geet loves him nd his love towards geet increases manifold...

maan takes geet to the doc nd doc told dat she is not eatingproperly from the last month...nd she is already weak..nd asked maan to take care of her alot...nd den maan decided to take geet to his mansion...as he knows she is lonely...
Suddenly geet wakes up nd maan ordered her dat she will go wid him to his mansion nd geet refuses but maan one glare makes her shut up...

Then maan takes her to the mansion nd informed nandini to tell abt geet in her hostel..nd whereas maan paarents are very down to earth dey believe in humanity...nd dey r happy dat maan is respecting girls...as he ws very flirty types...

Its been 1 week dat geet is staying wid maan...maan parents r noticing maan changed behaviour,...nd he always makes geet smile...nd when maan parents asked from him abt his beahviour...he told dat he love geet nd even geet tooo...but
The status difference comes in between...nd geet feels dat is not right for maan..nd maan parents decided to talk to geet...
One day geet is resting in her room nd maan parents entered...nd dey asked her hand for maan..nd even said dat u r like my daughter...nd status difference doesnt makes ne effect...as we truely love u..nd maan also..
Maan enters suddenly nd propsed her in front of his parents...nd after seeing happiness on maan face nd on his parents face she says yes...all becomes happy...nd maan parents ordered geet dat she will stay wid dem...nd when dey will finish dere course dey will make dem married...
All people in the acting school comes to know abt dis...among all of dem...nandini is very happy..nd all r jealous...
one day they taunt geet abt her being orphan nd also said dat she is using maan money...nd says very cheap words...nd maan comes nd listens to all dis...nd becomes more angry seeing geet crying...nd just want to slap the girl...before him..maan mom slapped her..as comes to the school to take geet for shopping as dere course is coming to end...
After taking geet out...maan mom says dat dere r not ur true friend she y to think abt dem..just enjoy ur life..many people will come in ur life..who will feel jealous abt u...just care abt ur close ones...

Now maaneet course comes to end..nd dere parents got dem married...
Still image of Maan and Geet from show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
nd send dem to PARIS for deir honeymoon...

ok guys first part ends here...next part will be present...
TEASER
HOW IT FEELS...WHEN UR PARTNER BEHAVIOUR CHANGES TOWARDS YOU??
UR PARTNER FEELS JEALOUS OF UR SUCCESS.???
STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT PART

INDEX
PART 1-ABOVE
PART 2-PAGE 3
PART 3-PAGE 5
PART 4-PAGE 7
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
continue soon
me waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os
so maan woudl be jealous of geet's success
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear...
loved it...
maan proposed geet but she refused thinking she wont deserve him...
but because of nandini's plan maan came to know about geet's love and maan took care of her..
maan's parents are also happy with their relation and they both got married... wow...
waiting for next part dear...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKS FOR ALL THE LIKES AND COMMENTS
IT REALLY MOTIVATES ME
LOV U ALL
Still image from Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
PART 2
Its been more dan 1 year of their lovefull journey of life...Day by day their love is only increasing...Both are well settled in deir life and both are getting good offers for the movies...nd MAANEET movie are always hit...


But after every good things sometimes bad happens..its happening wid maan...form the last few months maan movies r gettng flopped...whereas geet movies r always hit...nd he is happy wid geet success...
Due to getting continous flop in a row he is not getting offers..due to which he gets angry easily...bt never takes his anger on geet...

Whereas geet also feels bad for him...nd try to spend more time wid him but shoots always makes her busy..nd somtimes she will come late at night..bt maan being supportive hushabd never complains to her...but sometimes in his heart he will feel jealous nd he usually avoids his feeling..
On the other side maan soo called friends r happy (acting school friends) and dat girl named AYESHA(CONSIDER MOUNI ROY) also who got slapped by maan mom is also happy...as maan career is getting down day by day...nd she wants to destroy geet happiness nd wants to talk mssn from her...as she loves maan...but the truth is different.
Whereas maan frustration is increasing day by day as its been more than 4 months he got any offer...nd he started drinking...nd his angry as well as jealous is cumg out...nd he started taking out his anger on geet...
Geet being good wife understands his situation nd decides to take a break from her career nd decided to give more time to maan...but her dis step makes maan more angry nd his ego hurt big time..nd due to which he starts fighting wid her...nd he says bad things to her in drunken state...and he also started cumg home very late..but geet never complains to him as she knows dis will make maan more furious...bt somewhere in her heart she is feeling pain...by seeing maan behaviour towards her as she is not in fault.
ALmost after 5 months..maan gets a film offer from a very good director and becomes very happy and decides to host a party nd informs geet about the offer...geet becomes happy...nd decides dat she will make all the arrangement for the party.
Maan also invited his so called friends as dey get a golden chance nd dey make a plan to destroy deir happiness.
Party is going and MAANEET MAKES A GREAT ENTRY
Still image of Maan and Geet

his friends also takes entry in the party along wid ayesha...wearing very cheap dress..
After cake cutting MAANEET hits the dance floor.
Drashti & Gurmeet as Geet & Maan in Geet hui sab se paraye
.and after the dance his friends makes him drink and even add drugs..in it...and after dis one of the guy starts making mockery of maan by saying that geet takes break from her carrer to support him as she thinks he is not compaible of doing movies nd saying all bad things nd maan mood his worsening nd anger is getting on the peak..nd AYESHA
comes and says he got dis movie because of geet as she requested the director to cast him in the movie nd director secretary also confirms the news as he got the money from ayesh and even says dat director likes geet alot nd soo he is giving a chance to him becuase of her only...he got really angry by listening to all dis..nd drugs even empowering his thinking soo he is not able to think abt good and bad...
Geet comes to maan to ask him to stop drinking nd he is already angery nd due to dis he insults geet alot in front of all the guest nd even says he will be more happy if u r not in my life and done biggest mistake by marrying her...whereas ayesha is smirking nd dere job is done..
Geet becomes numb
Drashti as Geet after engagment
Geet becomes heart broken nd her happiest day of the life becomes worse day of the life..beacuse after the party she decided to give him the biggest news...as dey r going to be parents...she is 2 months preg..
But after all dis..she decided to leave the mansion nd packs all her bags nd left the mansion...suddenly it started raining and she is walking alone on the deserted road and on the other side a car is cumg...because of the rain person is not able to see geet..nd car collides wid her...nd fainted...nd persons comes out of the car to check the person ..by seeing geet face person is shocked...

GUYS PART 2 ENDS HERE
WHO IS THE PERSON?
HOW THE PERSON IS RELATED TO GEET?
WILL MAAN COMES TO KNOW ABT HIS MISTAKE?
WILL HE REPENT FOR HIS MISTAKE??
PLZZ GUYS PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON ND COMMENT
ND SORRY FOR SPELLING MISTAKE
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congras dear i will read and comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good one dear Ur English is really good to be a good writer .U ll write more and more beautiful fiction I hop so Best of luck

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear.
can't wait to read next part.
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