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Originally posted by: rsusmita
sorry guys i got stuck up with the work i wil try to update today
writing the story
PART :45
Seeing this maan concern increased , he understood that geet has started feeling cold
He remembered aunty words that she should not catch cold
He tried to control his heart beats which has increased
he laid down her on the cot , and settled quietly beside her
geet is not in her senses, but still shivering, maan quietly started rubbing her hands with his hands, her feet , legs are very cold , he slowly started rubbing her legs with his legs, it was giving strange sensation in his body, his hands roaming around her waist '. his warm breath was giving warmness to geet , maan a slight moan escaped from her mouth , still geet back was facing maan
( guys i am not that good in writing romantic scenes so please bear with me )
he slowly started patted on her hair so that she can sleep , she soon drifted in her sleep
seeing that maan felt relaxed,
he do not know when he slept
chod.. muje' please leave me'
maan ' save me'.
geet again started moving in her sleep'
seeing this and hearing these words maan started patted on her cheeks geet.. see you are there with me, see come from your thoughts..
geet slightly opened her eyes
seeing maan there, her eyes twinkled
maan you came I know you will come one day and take me from this place '
saying that she immediately hugged him
geet hands were around maan neck , she was hugging him tightly as if not allowing him to move, as if she is secured in his hug, maan '.do no leave please.. I cannot live with you '..her hands were roaming around his back
her simple confession made him shiver'
geet see iam here with you , nothing will happen to you,
he tightly hugged her, and patting her back as if consoling her, taking all her pains ,
maan..
shh.. geet you sleep saying that he quietly made her laid down on his chest
his hands were roaming on her back'. she was wearing only maan kurta ' her legs , thighs are almost naked , the maan kurta which was long , was now not in its position ,her body is almost pressed to maan body ,
she was in deep in sleep as if she was not sleeping for ages
maan was now feeling very uncomfortable with geet position,
he tried to shift geet from him and place her on the pillow, but she tightly hold his waist as if not allowing him to move
with no other option maan gave, up, he too drifted into deep sleep ..
the next day '
it was almost 10 'nakul maan kaha did he went to office early
nhai dadima till now he did not came down
what happened I will go and check
saying dadima quietly opened the maan door, which was closed near to
she was shocked seeing geet hugging maan and maan was sleeping peacefully
seeing this sight she felt very happy
maan ne mere bahu ghar leke agaya hai
thinking that she immediately went down
nakul to day you make kheer
kya baat hai dadima app intna khus hai aur why kheer
nakul maan ne geet ko ghar leke agaya hai ,
lagta hai bhagvan ne mere baat sunliye hai
ha dadima '.
Maan was first to woke up from the sleep, geet was still sleeping l laying on him, he quietly made her to lay on the pillow, properly covered her with the duvet and went into wash room to get ready
Geet woke up with the sound of the door, she saw maan was coming from the washroom
Seeing him like this she was surprised '.she started at him as if questioning him..
Maan understood what she was asking '
Vo kal raat tum bahut bheeg gayi thi to maine ghar leke aya tha'
Hearing those words geet remembered the previous days incidents'
She remembered how rahul try to behave with her and how she ran from that place .. and how maan came in searching for her , how she became unconscious
Maan saw her geet was in her own thoughts ..
He quietly came and sat beside her, are you okay'.
She did not reply'
Geet see get ready we have to go to the hospital'
But there was no response from her'
Maan did not understand geet was unusually calm
Which was not her nature
He knows how much geet talks but hear geet not at all talking , she was lost in her own thoughts
Geet he tried bring her back in this world,'.
See get ready we have to go to the hospital..
Saying that he went near to the cupboard
Geet tried to get up and saw her position she was in maan kurts and bottom is bare'
Ye'.
Maan tuned back hearing geet words
He understood geet thoughts
Vo kaal raat tum bahut beeghgayi thi I tried to wake you up but you were not in position to wake up so .. I .. changed your dress
Geet listened to his words.. but again she was feeling dizzy .. 'vo..
Maan saw her about to fall down
He immediately went near her , took her into his arms, and laid down on the bed..
At the same time dadima entered the room
Dadima app
She tried to cover her self with the bed sheet
Ha geet me bahut kush hu ki maan ne vapas le ye agaya hai
Saying that she hugged her
Leking geet.. what is this you are having fever
Fever ..
Maan immediately put his hands on her forehead checking
She was having slight fever
Maan it is not good for her in this stage '
Dadima apko.. ..
Ha maan I know everything .you have forgotten that your doctor aunty sujatha is my best friend
You caanot hide thses things from me. I was waiting for you that when you reveal this before me, and when you will bring my daughter in law to this house
Isa nahi dadima.. I did not hide intentionally
That time you were not well and so and I do not want to stress you more by telling these news
Geet was silently listening to their conversation
Okay geet get ready
I will give soup to you..
Telling that dadima went away
At the saw time maan cell rang
Ha aunty she is okay . I will bring to her hospital in 1 hour ,.she is having slight fever
Okay aunty '.
Geet get ready we have to go to the hospital saying that he quietly left the room giving her space
He knows geet is quite uncomfortable in this dress before him,
precape: still thinking
okay guys i think so i came to your expectation .. if any mistakes please maph karedena ...please
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