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Posted: 13 years ago
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~Ajeeb Dasta~
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PART 6


'Maan... Maan!' MK had to admit, hearing the full name he wasn't something not used to, maybe that's why there was a slow reaction from his side to respond to Geet's shout. 'Maan...' she ran across few meter before pushing MK to the floor. Her body smashed on top of him without any warning, while MK, he just enjoyed the close proximity. A smile formed on his lips, barely noticeable as the shock was more vibrant on his face. Geet looked back once at the direction where the shot came from, and seeing a usual face was enough for her to shiver the soul out of her body.

'get up! Get up! Get up!' Geet screamed amongst the panic crowed with few more gun shot. MK confusingly looked at Geet, wasn't this all fake? Should he say or enjoy this little closeness? MK smiled and than jumped up, with Geet. He looked at her strange avatar as she snapped half of her dress, and than ran taking him along with her.

'what's going on?' MK acted out, like he was in confusion world.

'we have no time to talk! We have to move!' MK carelessly ran, like barely bothered. However he was concern to take Geet somewhere alone.

The panic crowed ran like a lunatic, while Geet and MK ran in to a small silent room. She took her gun out, observing a little window and than outside.

'Maan... Look!'
'call me MK!' Maan distracts.
Geet rolled her eyes with agitation. 'ok... MK... You have to escape!' she stood in front of the small window that barely was letting any light from outside. She quickly points towards the window with her eyes, 'through that window!'

MK confusingly, yet amusingly looked at Geet. Should he disclosed that all this is set up, and a fake act! 'Geet, I think you taking this too seriously, let's escape through the normal way!'

Geet confusingly looks back at MK,not understanding what he really means...

'you might fancy killing your self however I have no intreast to dye now... I have many responsibility... And I ain't dying without finishing them!' she spoke without any breath.

'ow ow- ow... This is all...' MK couldn't finish his sentence when a high speed bullet in lightning speed penetrated his right and within matter of few seconds. Geets eyes widens with the sudden explosion of MK's blood, frozen at her spot...

MK confusingly looked at Geet for fraction of second before realizing what just happened, the throbbing pain ran across her body like a poison, tearing the rapid heart beats. 'this is real!' his lips just managed to mumble before loosing the balance to crash his body back to the floor.

Geet without any delay rushed to support, however his body was to heavy for her small petit one. She softly allowed MK's body to lay gently to the floor, taking her gun out to make sure there are no one to enter through the door...

'are you alright? MK talk to me? How does it feel? Are you alright?' he helplessly looked at MK's lazy eyes. She tapped to rewake him, however it was pointless. She suppressed her hand over the open wound on his arm to avoid any more loss of his blood. She ripped a part of her skirt in panic, than quickly tying it to prevent the further loss.

'MK... MK... Maan!' Geet shouts...
'don't call me Maan! It's MK!' he lousily replied again.
'ok... MK! You have to be wake! Please.. Just be wake!'
'really? I just been bloody shot!' he angrily replies...

Geet took him in her lap, than pressed on her Bluetooth to ask for members of people for help!

...

MK slowly opens his eyes to only find him self on the hospital bed. He slowly twists his neck to feel his body if it was intact! There was a feeling of someone purposely secreting a sharp needle on his left arm, just where he was shot. The throbbing pain penetrated his body like poisons. In pain his dry lips parted slowly with little moan...

Geet instantly rushed in, seeing him wake, calling doctors.

'are you alright? How does it feel? Does it hurt allot?' she questioned worriedly.
MK stared at her tiring face amusingly. A smile formed on his face.
'I feel special with your worry face!' he teased in little drowsy tone. 'very special!'
Geet gave out a agitation look with his ignorant words. 'MK, concentrate, on your health! Not at my worried face!' she softly smiled.
'zeez...' he mumbled... 'you smile?' he slowly closed his eyes than forcefully opened again to see the beauty of Geet...
'ha-ha... Very funny...' geet mocked. She sighly looked down.. 'you are a very good charmer... Aren't you?'
'only for you.. So At last you are melting!' he opens his tired eyes again.
'no... Sympathy... I think you are a good reasonable person except the unnecessary flirt!'

MK bursts out in laughter... 'are you sure? Just because I got shot?'

The dr walked in meantime came in to check on Maan.

'he is doing very well...' dr smiled, 'nurse change his dressing...'

Dr smiled and left.

'I think I should leave to! I will see you later!' Geet walked out before MK could whisper again. She closed the rk's room door than looked at one of her team member!

'make sure there is always someone inside and outside of this door!' Geet looked anxiously back at her team members. 'it's to dangerous... I can't risk anything...'

She worriedly left as one of the CIA team member walked in.

MK slowly looks at the opening door, wondering where was Geet. 'where is Geet?' he mumbled while trying to pull him self up.

'no... You need to relax! Don't move!' the man consoled him, came by to lay him down again. 'you are hell of a lucky man!' he smiled while passing the drinks.

'of course I am lucky! I am MK after all!'

'call me James!' James laughed at MK's bluntness. 'you are lucky because Geet, I have first time seen a emotionally week. I have never saw her like that before. She almost taking the responsibility to personally!' he suggested.

MK widens his eyes with little shocking tone he managed whisper out 'really?'

'yes!... Do you know her personally?' James questioned!

'no- no...' MK blinked few times... Somewhere his senseless heart started to pump in an incredible speed. After fraction of second, coming back to his sense, 'what makes you say Geet cares for me in emotional level!' he twists his neck to face the tall slim man.

'well...' he twists his head... 'well... She was here all night! Not even moving... I mean her eyes, haven't you noticed, it was bright red. She was wake throughout the night' he spoke with little surprise tone, than he picked his hand up, pointing beside the door, 'she stood there whole night, starting beside you and usually, if something happens like this in anyone's case, she would just come in and check, nothing more & nothing less...' James finished, smiling at MK.

Maan wasn't in his sense anymore, as he smashed him self to the bed, with a smile that he never knew existed, yet there was pain, little annoyance in his deep eyes.
'how could I be senseless in a such moment... How could I?'

James smiled and went out, guarding from outside... Even he was curious why Geet staid?

Maan smiled way, his restless heart counted each second for return of Geet, he wanted to see her again. Life may have been simple for him on the enviers eyes, but to the honesty, there was something missing, something lacking, and no one knew what it is better than him. He slowly spines his head, god had to make him curious with a feeling that sometime exist and sometime doesn't... Do love exist? Maan questioned him self? How does it feel? Does it comfort the heart like he was now... Does it turn the throbbing poisonous pain in to a sweet moan? Because he couldn't feel anything... The pain that existed few minutes back seems nothing compare to the absence of Geet...

Maan smiled... And slowly faded way in to deep sleep...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hai...to kahani shuru hui pyaar ki...liked the way geet stayed dre whole nyt..will b waitng for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
haye.. hum to fida ho gye
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
loved it.. will waite 4 the next1...
Edited by mauaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Nw even i feel geet eithr knew maan persnly or is impressd by him nw.


So maan is feeling sumthing fr geet...


Conti soon.

N thnx again fr startng maaneet ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Lovely one...
Maan had arranged for fake shooting na lekin asli shot kisne kiya...
Geet taking lot of care...maaneet ke beech abhi pyaar vaar

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Posted: 13 years ago
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What did this bittuji do😆, he was told to arrange fake bullets na then from where this real ones came😆...good it some feelings in Maan & Geet
Nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
uff ..from where did real shot come.. like real enimies .is anyone try to kill MK truely.
Bittuji where r U?
lovely part safi... love this concern n care ..hayyy toh fida latto on geet pyar kar baitha!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
wow!geet got concerned...
geet noes him?i mean in past?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO GEET IS ALSO AFFECTED BY HIM
SHE STAYED THERE THE WHOLE NIGHT

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