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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Congrast on new ff
loved the prologue..superb
do continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats dear...

prologue
very nicely written...

PS - hope u dont mind me posting the CS from the blog...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana...the great surgeon and pathologist...very hot tempered and always silent...Talk very less and have so much attitude...have dark past and have become like robot...no emotions in his professional life and he always runs away from the girls...but girls drool over him...Famous Senior Doctor in Sanjeevani hospital...right now he's in dark..due to his past...

Geet Handa...she's about to study Medicine...she took this subject as her life's ambition and got admission in Delhi Medical College...cute bubbly and non-stop chatter box...she's the apple of the family...she has one elder brother and one younger brother...elder brother is handling Handa industries chachaji Mohinder Handa...but is very protective to her sister...Geet taking the medicine subject has the reason behind...the reason will be revealed in first part of the ff...

Savithri Devi,Maan's dadimaa...

Suryakanth Khurana...father of Maan Singh Khurana...and Vicky Singh Khurana...Maan's younger brother...

Chaaya Singh Khurana...mother of Maan and Vicky...

Vicky Singh Khurana...Maan's younger brother...working as MD of KC...he's 21 yrs old handling his masters and company...

Anwesha Khurana...Maan & Vicky's little sister..and cousin...daughter of Chandrakanth Khurana...younger brother of Maan's father...she's the apple of the family and very notorious and naughty...stubborn..but cute and bubbly..non stop chatter box...studying in 1st year Architecture in Delhi,IIT...

Mohinder Handa...father of Geet and Rohan...

Rohan Handa...

Kulwant Handa...darji of Brij,Geet,Rohan...

Laxmidevi Handa...beeji of Brij,Geet,Rohan...

Geet's pet eel...called as sparkler...Geet is very much attached to it..she always shares her thots to it...

Geet's friends...

Armaan Malik...boxer..but senior to Geet in college and family friend of Handa Family..very protective to her like brother...

Sneha Goshal...Armaan's love interest...working as fashion designer...

Mridula Manchanda...Geet's close and childhood friend...

Tanya Bhatnaagar...Maan's current secretary...she's the decent one and had any crush on Maan..she has a love interest..and he's Rahul...

Other characters will be given on the way in the part 1...


not able to post the pix dear...tried many times...

Edited by spvd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great dear..ur work is really awesome and for this we all r waiting hop u ll giv soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue and a good start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept
maan & geet as a doctor
loved it
write sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow superb concept sweety

congrates for this new story👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 01


Guys today is my best buddy Nalinisavitha urf Desigirls birthday..wish her and ma dedicating this first part to her...HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONCE AGAIN DEAR😃



Trinnn...Trinnn...






The cell rung continuously...while a person slept covering the blanket head to toe...while the sound of people walking in the road was heard in background.The cell buzzed once again after a minute where a hand came outside from inside the blanket searching for the cell...A milky white hands searched to the cell continuously and the cell wasnt found.Next moment the head lifted with the covered blanket to see the cell with barely closed eyes and saw the cell with drowsy vision.One that time the sploshing of water was heard from the aquarium where an eel of about 1 yr started breathing and making weird noises for the person was disturbed.









The person took the cell and switched off and said,"Am coming sparkler...will put the food...just am sleepy...will sleep for sometime and get up sparkler..dont make that weird noise...!!!!"But the baby eel dint listen to the person and he started his weird noises even more louder for the person got up still covering the blanket around the face.The person got up and walked towards the washroom still covering the face from the blanket and took a fish food and came near the aquarium and poured some of the food to the 1 yr eel and closed the glass lid and kept the bottle in side table and fell on the bed once again on stomach and snored softly.










After sometime a cell rang and the person was disturbed from the sleep and stirred in sleep...but the cell was ringing continuously...the person took the phone and said softly,"Hello...!!!!!!"What person said wasnt heard that the person shouted and got up moving the blanket above the face which revealed the drowsy girl whose eyes were wide opened due to the call.She had round brown hazel almond eyes...long white nose...baby pink lush lips...and cute dimple chins..and rosy cheeks...











This was Geet Handa...20 yrs old studying medicine second year in Delhi medical college and was abt to get up today as she was about to attend today her new professor's lecture...and was sleeping like a sleeping demon and was getting late for her new professor's lecture...On that time she heard her mother calling her...Rano shouted from bottom,"Geet...get up..how much u sleep...i was getting up at 4 at your age..when i came first time to my in-laws house...and you r the most laziest girl i have even seen...get up...u lazy bones...it is the time of worshiping god...!!!!"Geet shouted from her room,"Coming mom...!!!!"And she ran inside the washroom.










Rano cribbed angrily,"She's the most laziest girl i have seen..now she'll be late for aarti and get scolded by her darji...who starts cribbing that she hasnt any manners...when will she change i dont know...!!!!"On that time Beeji entered and nodded dismissively listening to Rano's cribbing. Geet got ready wearing her selwaar kameez...


Drashti Dhami


And came downstairs immediately before aarti got started...everyone with Darji and Beeji were worshiping Maa Durga..and said the song...



EK OMKAAR SATHNAAM...KARTA POORAK..NIRBHAAVO..NIRVAYE...AKAAL MOORAT...AJOONI SEBHANG...GURPARSAAD JAP...







Rano saw Geet who has sat on aarti and saw towards window that is it storm gonna come or heavy rains as Geet never participated in aarti and had always got scolding from Darji or her father for coming late for aarti but today...it was a miracle and it was normal sunny day and sun was gleaming inside the Handa Haveli where the inhabitants were worshiping the god in god's house.Geet saw the time as she had only 30 minutes to reach her early morning class and it was 830 hrs...and she have to reach her college till 900hrs...










After the aarti everyone assembled in dining table and Darji started cutting fruits for them silently..while Geet said to Rano,"Mom..am getting late..will have breakfast in the college only...!!!!"Rano asked,"But dear...have some amt of breakfast and go...health will upset if u go to college in empty stomach..and i do know that u wont tolerate the empty stomach...!!!"But Geet was so much late that she shoved her mother and was about to run from the morning lecture session when Darji stopped her.









Darji said sternly,"Halt right there...!!!"Geet stopped alarmed and saw towards Darji who came and gave the plates of sliced apple and said,"Eat it...!!!"Geet was getting late and now Darji's orders...but she collected in an cover and said to Darji that she'll eat it on the way but Darji gave a stern look and she started swallowing it in hurry...while Darji started his long lecture in the course of her eating...Darji took an album and started showing the photos...Darji said,"Yeh dekho...yeh ladka...iska naam hai...Harpreet...iski kaur hotels hai jo poore Delhi mein mashoor hai...!!!!!!"Geet was hell irritated now as she was trying to skip the drilling session of Darji showing the boys photos for her marraige while she was tortured mentally...Darji started showing the photo which she shoved immediately not giving any glance but Darji was patient he was pampering her to see the photos...then last photo was shown to Geet which she saw only the man's M shaped lips and Darji was abt to say his name when Geet interrupted rudely,"Enough Darji...u want make these boys to got to their death bed????"













Rano shouted immediately,"Dont talk to your grandpa like that...or else...!!!!"Geet was totally frsutrated and shouted,"Or else what mom...u all know that my engagement has broken 5 times...5 times..have u guys any idea about this...every boy had their own reasons..firstly they would give approval for the engagement and when the moment came of putting the ring to my finger..then retreated back...saying some silly reasons...and u guys thought that some problem is there in those boys who never liked me and my behaviour...and then some of the boys r poisoned..or some met with an accident...on the eve of the engagement...and u guys r still showing the boys to me to marry...y dont u understand my POV...am an unfortunate one...for whom no boy can survive if he marries me...!!!!"












Rano's eyes welled up hearing her depressed words...and said,"Honey...y u r thinking abt urself like that...nothing wrong with u dear...please listen to us...!!!!"Geet gave a painful look and walked from there towards her college leaving the baffled and hurted family behind from her words...



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In KM at 6am...a busy body is exercising in his gym...he was the most handsome man,chocolate brown wide eyes...long white nose..exact M shaped pink lips..and stubble...his stautre was perfect..with perfect 6 packs abs..with rock hard bulging chest..with flat stomach..and perfect torso...His handsome features told that he was 25 yrs old...it was a blissful day to any teenager to see the man with enormous affection...if it is his friends,cousins or admirers...This man was none other than the great young surgeon..Maan Singh Khurana nominee of the great surgeon award...the professor in Delhi Medical College in the biochemistry subject with enormous attitude and arrogance but a perfect guide in everything who's a dream of any class of girl...but not for Maan..becoz for him..girls r the definition of cheat for him...he runs away from girls due to this reason as he had faced the cheat from his beloved in his previous times...











Maan finished his exercise and went to washroom and got ready and came downstairs while all the family was busy having dinner...Maan said loudly,"Good morning everybody...!!!!!"Everyone nodded to him and he sat to have his favourite pasta which was prepared by his mother Chaya..who served him silently to his plate...Maan was abt to take the spoon to have his favourite pasta when Dadimaa told,"Son..i want to talk to u...!!!!"Maan said in his mind,"Not again...!!!"But said politely,"Yes..Dadi...!!!!!"Dadimaa said,"Son..i wanted to talk to u about ur marraige...!!!!"Instantly his expression turned to angry glare which Dadimaa said immediately,"Son..see these photos...and tell me ur opinion...if u wont like these girls..then i wont insist u further...!!!!"Maan fell silent while Dadimaa showed the photos excitedly,"Look this girl..her name is Sanjana Mathur...she's an very good Architect dear..she's perfect...!!!!!"










While Maan was busy eating pasta...Dadimaa showed another photo & said,"Son..this is the photo of Gauri Garewal...she's a very good Dcotor dear..she's from London University...she's now residing in London...!!!!"Maan dint pay any attention while Dadimaa showed the 3rd photo which Maan glanced from the corner of his eye..and for the 1st time he saw an innocent hazel almond eyes which made his heart beat faster...Maan felt a sudden change seeing those hazel almond eyes and was about to see her full face when he came to present world and was shocked that he actually attracted towards those eys and shouted on Dadi immediately,"Why Dadi...i dont want to marry still u insist me...I wont have any right to marry anyone or..i wont have any heart which can love anyone...then also..u insist...am nt that fortunate or have features to love anyone or anyone loves me...so stop badgering me now...!!!!"











Maan got up immediately and went from there towards his car taking his stethescope and his white coat...leaving his hurted family behind...Dadi said angrily,"I hate this Ayesha...did u see what has become of my grandson becoz of her...when he will try to smile...babaji...meher karna...take care of my grandson...!!!!"Suryakanth said after seeing his son's behaviour,"Mom...dont worry..he'll smile..and am sure..mere bete ki hasaane waali uski zindagi mein zaroor aayegi...!!!!!!!"




Precap-Maan:Today we'll learn the metabolism of the food in our body..anyone can tell me what is metabolism????But on that time a sweet voice came to his ear which made him totally content,"Excuse me sir...!!!!!"


Prologue-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3226085/colors-of-love-thread-01

Next Part 02-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3226085/colors-of-love-thread-01?pn=15

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yiiipppeee i am first to comment.. 😃🥳
wow awesome update dear...
loved it so much.
loved geet's intro... she is a pampered girl and her mom is shouting on her...
she is getting late for her college but darji is strict and showing guys photo to geet...
omg... 5 times her alliance broke and she dont want to marry... thats so painful..
and here maan too same... feeling sad for both...
loved maan's entry in gym 😃👏
wow maneet meet in next update...
continue soon dear..

Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Wow dear this is awesome each of them just missed to see each other photos...nw waiting for nxt

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