**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF # 10 IMP NOTE ON PG-155 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
congrats for new thread
im comfortable with ur writing
no need to change for others..
the persons who say about intimation scenes
are those who watch films also
will they voice to it..
no na..
then y for us..
if they r difficult with our writings
they must not read ffs
let them stay away,,
they r only new bies mostly
only attention seekers
not really a social awareness people..
n dont give importance to them..
welcome back
dont ever think of quiting
we will go mad
thanks 4 ur treat
additional happiness
our gc wonn...yipppeee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Hi thanks 4 da pm! Glad 2 u back wid a bang lol! Saw u updated n cld nt resist lol! Read n commented! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
wow great story pl\z update soon
cong to you
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awesm part. Like dr ltl ltl rmntic mmnts. Maan how nicely wd grt lv caring Geet.wow. 2dy pics r mst enjoybl.each 1 perfectly showing wt u wnt 2 say. Geet is cuteeepie. Maan handle her nicly bt smtimes gussa,hota hai. Now Wt ll b dadi & aniee's raction?
NOW, PLZ TRY 2 IGNR such posts which crting cnfusion.ds days sm ppl being crazy.dn't know y dy doing ds?
I hv no prob wd ur writings infact I like ur style. Mature cntent also hv no prob.who hv dy cn ignore. U go in ur style.we ll b always wd our blved writers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

hayee what start ...⭐️

with maan's cutey way to pacify her n geet's sweet anger ..
loved it from the very first line ..👏

uff the wrong point to pinch him geet ...HP ke liye bechare aur kitna guilty feel karega ...😕

😳...my dill goes umm hmm umm ...😳

kya tareeka hai manofying ka ..
uff what claim ..

"I am your wife na...then why you sleeping away" ..

what surrender ...me flat with her innocence ..

"I am your wife na...then why you sleeping away" ..

hayee yrr koi itna sweetie cutie innocently mad kaise hu sakta hai ..i just love this geet soo much ..😳 😃

"ouchhh geet lagta hai" ..
lolzzz i was laughing at this ..
u r just too good for me to explain ur skills di ...

"nahi...aap har baar dur jaate ho...mai nahi uthungi" she was admant this time ..

hayee uthja geet bechare ki jaan legi kya ...lolzzz i seriously pity maan high time ..
kya karega yeh life time ...
"sigh" long way to go Maan Babu ..
have patience ..!!

"jaan please its our private thing na...so don't tell this to anyone" ..
han plzzz geet yeh kisi ko mat batana ...warna sunne wala handle karna mushkil hujayega 😆aur fir tumhare liye maan ka ghussa handle karna impossible hujayega ,...n finally humari varsha di ke mind mien fir se koi devilish idea aajayega ...😡

"woh suhagraat..." ..
rolf..ing ..
i was having my mouth wide open when my eyes caught this dialogue ..
haha geet ke thoughts ...kahan tak jaa pohanche ..
par bechari ki galti nahi hai ..MSK ko resist karna is the 9th wonder ...coz 8th tou khud geet hai ..lolzz

"now sleep...aaj ke liye itna suhagraat kafi hai" ..
hahaa ...geet itna handle karle wahi kafi hai ..waise bhi isske aage tou writer par hi problem aati hai ..

"wify please wake up yaar...later on you won't even get time for me" ...
regretting ALREADY ..!!
poor MSK ...wifey busy enjoying her most beautiful sleep in her hubby's room ...

."mujhe sone do"
ehehe ...no lift maan
well this is my line 4 my mom every morning b4 college ...

"wife...do you even know what it means" ..
ooppssii MSK again in anger ...
bachao geet ko koi ..

hayila mien tou bhool hi gayi geet ki innocence MSK ke saamne uska sabse bara weapon hai ...jo MSK ko bhi hara deta hai ..

lolzz what a grt definition of a wifey ..
me laughing my heart out ...foo foo bachao mujhe .
yeh writer tou mar ke hi chorigi ..
ek min mien dharkan teez kar deti hai ...dosri sec. saans rok deti hai ...

"dadi maan bhai aur geet aa gaye" ..
aagaye ..?? anniee aapki bhabi tou apne room mien araam farma rahien hain ..

"dadi I will go and wake her up then" aniee moved off her seats ...
"dadi aap rehne do mai hi jata hu princess ko uthane" vicky intervened...

aeeyloo sab ko jana hai newly weds ke room mien embaress hone ...

DADI ..!!!!
yeh kya kara anniee ko lee gayi ..
nahi roko plzzz nahi ..😆

bang ..dekh liya ..😲

gayi bhais pani mien ..
chalo maan bete real test start now ..graduation asaan tha yahan tou ...apni family ...geet ki family ..teasing ...bricking ...media ..world ...society ..AUR TOP OF ALL WIFEY KI INNOCENCE ..sab kuch hi handle karna hai ..😃

abb pata chalega KC handle karke koi kamaal nahi kiya ..

ALL THE VERY BEST ..!!

here is ur rose for this beautifully narrated awesom fantabulous update ..


thnxx di ...
Luv Ya
Sobia ..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
wow simply awesooome upd.
fab...just loved it...superb...
cont.soon...
tfd pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
WE WILL READ UR FFS WHATEVER IT CONTAIN BECAUSE IT IS JUST IMAGINATION AND WRITINGS ARE JUST FOR ENTERTAINMENT AND MIND REFRESHMENT AND IF SOMETHING IS OFFENDED TO SOMEONE HE SHOULD NOT FOLLOW IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Wonderful update dear just love ur writting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89


Dear...


Beautiful update...
Poor Maan kya kya training dega Geet ko..
Kisto me SR manegi...OMG!!! kahata hei aaj
ke liye itni Suhagraaat kaafi hei..
Babaji!!!! kya hoga inka...
Love Maaneet's cute moments...
Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
congratss on your new thread...
and update veryyy cuteee...geet was adorable...
now waiting for next update...

and about your writing style and intimate scenes... dark stories etc... i have no problem with anything...so conti to show your wonderful writing... dont stop for anything...
love ya...

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