**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF # 10 IMP NOTE ON PG-155

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hi dear..congrats on teh new thread! Thanks 4 da awesum update! Saw u upadted n cld nt wait 4 pm lol! Superbly written! Omg Poor Maan! Geet wants to have SR! Maan shocked! Geet angry as Maan was nt der! She knws dat she is his wife! Maan wants to leave bt Geet cries! Poor Maan no has no option bt to stay wid her! Geet is very innocent! Its morning n Dadi n annie see Maaneet together! wat will happen nw! Precap is interesting! update soon n do pm! with reagrd to ur questions - (1) da intimacy is fine - everyone writes like dat! (2) Yes I will read if u have dark character or love story; (3) Yes I will as I knw tht if u have a rape scene it is justified n a reason behind it: and (4) Of cos I do...I love the way u write! So I do believe in it! U r an amzing writer AND finally...pls post tht Os tht u have locked in ur file! Waiting 4 it LOL!

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

mai bhi wapas aayi lappy se,,,,,,,,,,,,,,lekin abhi mujhe pm's bhi karne hai

ap kitna gayab rhti ho?

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

loved it sooo muchhh

i just loved the pov of geet about wife... kaash asal life main bhi ithni simple definition chal jaatha!!!!😉

how r they both going to manage is a thing which am more curious to know now! geet being sleepy and then rude and maan angry on her for that was a simple example how their life in future is going to be atleast for few days till one of them or both changes and adjusts ...

daadi seeing both them together like that was just 😲 for her... very eager to read the next part as am keen to say both dadi and geets families reaction and also aut angry munda ab kya karega?

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

yar choti byee
al d bst
gud nyt swt drmz
luv ya

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

me going to write cmnt to koi mere dad se keh do k me ko dstrb na karen...

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mahimaneet

@mahimaneet

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: deepali1022

ap kitna gayab rhti ho?

sorry baby mera bhai aa gaya toh maine pc chod ke lappy on kar diya

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mahimaneet

@mahimaneet

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: deepali1022

me going to write cmnt to koi mere dad se keh do k me ko dstrb na karen...

hehehehe jao jao😆

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Ye kya? Knock karke nahi aa sakte?

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

congrats for the new thread.

Abt ur note ... I really have no prbs with intimate scenes ... Call me besharam ...i dont care ...lol
I loved them...haha
And the way u write them i love them more ...

Awesome update dear.
Loved it.
Waiting for the next

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

congrats GC...i knew it u would win n i think his popularity reached on that level only because of MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

plz write what u want...if someones have ny problem then they can away from this...

wow this tchy tchy wala halkasa SR i lvd it so mch...maan is so matured lvs her insanely bt cant control his anger n geet is just his opposite...lvs maans way of manofying to geet...i hope annie will teach her actually the meaning of marriage wife m SR...lvd th last scene most when dadi-annie saw maaneet together in that state...i imagined this cute scene...