**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF # 10 IMP NOTE ON PG-155 - Page 11

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hey dear the story is progresing vry nicely...

I love your work, and what you decide to write is fine by me, whether it has rape scenes or imtimacy or dark love story! Your work is just awesome :)

Congrats for the new thread...
Awesome update
Loved it
Love ur way of writing... Dear...
Contionue soon
Waiting for next...

Loved dis part.
It ws jus superb...
OMG! Wife has to do so many "tuff" things. So many responsibilities... Lolzzz.
Wife hubby k kapde utaarti hai?????? Gosh! Even my eyes widened in shock n in anticipation to knw reason of dis by our naive geet...

Bechara maan kab tak control krega?? Apne passion ko bhi aur irritation ko bhi...



Well regardng ur queries I LOV UR STYLE OF WRITNG SO DONT EVEN THINK TO CHANGE IT.

Dark story is vry tuff to write as alwaz tuff to make readers lov d charactrs d way writer wants n also tuff fr readers as its actually difficult to imagine ur pyare charctrs doin such dark acts.Also as reader thr's alwaz tension if it will hav happy endin/sad.
Well Intimacy is jus perfect.
Maaneet minus intimacy n passion n romance is nevr rocking... Moreovr if readers ever hav prob wid such parts,those parts will not b liked-commentd much.So no point in discussing it.
Regardng rape scene? Wel though it can b part of ff as it does happn in real world bt stil i wud prefer nt to happn it in ffs,n never ever to b writtn abt it in details.Reading itself humiliates.


Waitng fr nxt part dear

congrats for new thread

GEET INNOCENCE MAAN Shoked at time when she define wife waiting for the claiming infront of everyone and about intimace no problem i like your way to write

awesome update

fab update👏

awesome mishty n congo
Sry aaaj ghai te,motha comment nideu shakt...

Byeee
Tujhach updt vachayla ale hote,chl byee