**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF # 10 IMP NOTE ON PG-155

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jasraj123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

awesome as usual
omggg love the geet's definition of wife and having kids😆😆😆😆

omggg poor maan will be trouble now😕😕😕

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

awesome update ...dadi saw maaneet together ...i think she will misunderstood them...how can dadi think like this for my maan ...

waiting to sere handaas and khuranas reations after knowing the full truth ...

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Lovely update

❤️

DO I NEED TO LOW DOWN THE INTENSITY OF INTIMACY IN MY UPDATES?

Intimacy depends on your theme , CS & situations of your story !

for eg : SR , ex-flame of either of maneet,

or getting close pre-marriage as far toning down I never found yours overtly extravagant so I'm fine with it

WILL YOU READ MY FUTURE STORIES, IF IT HAS ANY DARK CHARACTER OR LOVE STORY????

Why not ? I've read earlier & will read in future too

Writer's creativity & play with characters is refreshing

WILL YOU SUPPPORT ME WID MY STORY IF I SHOW ANY RAPE SCENE IN IT?????

As I said , its fiction where even far more worse cases inclusive of the concerned are shown & written . I suggest you give a Disclaimer suggesting : Certain dark scenes involved reader's discretion advised

N LASTLY DO U PEOPLE BELIVE IN ME N MY WRITING??

Yes no doubt .

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

wow.. superb

This was too gud "Aaj ke liye itni suhag rat bas hai: 🤣..& Geet's defination of Wify.. bedroom mein jake kapde nikalegi 😆 cuboard se ☺️

precap is interesting..

About ur note.. i always ur FF's .. i'll read definately & that too on Maneet.. how can i skip it?

plz cont. all ur FF.. thanx for pm 😊

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

amazing

geet will test last bit of his patience

cont soon

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Sia

@lovesia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

awesome

poor maan he have to control himself bcoz of geet innocence

nd geet is hell bent to broke maan last bit of patience

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shabnam

@shabnam22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

i dont have any problem with any of ur work...u can write whatever u feel...n would love to read ur future projects...

This part was awesome...fully maaneets...but tensed about family decision...what is going to happen next...n ur small twist i guess its der real marriage n der small seperation...waiting dear update soon next part...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

wonderful update...

Maan is trying to control his desires around Geet and in all this trying his temper sometimes going out of control...ab bechara ek hi cheez to control kar sakta hai,...

loved Geet's innocence...

thanx for pm...

now about ur note----

answer 1---u don't have to low down intensity...writers give warning sign before the update...if anybody wants to read can read...and why every fan of Maaneet talk about their onscreen chemistry...what is this so called chemistry between a MAN and WOMAN...it is sexual tension in clear words...so if we love that sexual tension between Maan-Geet then why hate intimate scene...and above all who is comfortable should read it who is not leave it...no body is pressurizing anybody...

answer 2---I will definately read ur story whether it is dark story or not...I love to read everything on Maan-Geet on only one condition that they should be together in the end...I can't bear their separation...

answer 3---Rape is very delicate issue...it is the bitter truth of our society where girls are forced to have physical relations...every day we are reading this in newspaper and watching this in TV news...so if this topic is so taboo then we should ban every newspaper and channel not to show anything related to this topic...when they show this then we come to know what is happening around us...writing a story is also same...people in different profession express these type of topics in their different ways...writers use it by writing stories...but it should be handled very carefully...like heroine should not forgive her rapist very easily may be it Maan or whoever the character is...he should be punished and repent for his deed...

answer 4---I have full faith on ur writing skills so please continue...

In this TECH SAVVY world...the minute we switch on computer and internet...we are welcomed to the world of more VULGARITY than intimacy shown in these FFs...people who want to see those videos can see who don't want they don't go to those websites...simple solution... who are comfortable can read who are not don't read...who is forcing anybody to read what they are not comfortable with...we can't control others according to our likes and dislikes...people who are against writing any intimate scenes in these FFs first should go and cut internet connection in their computers...

Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Its so sweet..😳...specialy maneet scene..
and regarding ur question...personaly i feel I definetly will not stop reading ur stories...as u said though it has som intimacy..bt sm time it contain inocent of geet...their lv...amazing story👏👏👏...i realy very much like ur ff...do continue ur work dear...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

part 39
awesome part...
so lovely...
Geet still is so childish...
and Maan how is he gonna handle her?
hope the elders dont separate them...
Geet wont be able to take it...
cont soon dear...